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NEW SPuL!!!! "I'm In The Game" FIYA SON!!! (DROP LINKS!!!)
word my second straight original beat track. and thought this was good time to drop this track, seeing with the recent bullshit ~_~
www.soundclick.com/spul Intro: SPuL First verse: SPuL Hook: SPuL Second verse: SPuL Third verse: SPuL Beat: Mister KA LINKS: 1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232428 2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476 |
im feelin the beat...
ahh you def. seem like your starting to get a lot more comfy behind the mic...your delivery is getting better....different pitches in your voice and what not... flow is good..never really falls off at all...good job on that...multies are nice.... kinda seems like you upped your quality a lil bit too...maybe some diff mixing?.... hook is kinda catchy...maan..i definitely like your music better now that your on some original beats.... lyrics are coo...nothin stood out to me like whoa or anything...but its not like you were trying to dish out mad punches on this type of subject here... overall man..good job on this...keep it up |
i told what i thought about track. track was good IMO..
as far as mixing ... -_- :P :shoot: :shoot: .. :D. |
^lmao stfu foo!! but word props for help :D and thanks for feed. upppppppp ~_~
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This track is pretty hott, you got good quality, and the beat is pretty dope. Your verse was sick and it flowed to that beat perfect. Your rhymes was tight, you had some dope shit in your verse.
OVERALL - 4/5 keep it up yo |
word appreciate feedback y'all. uppppp
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yeah. you sent me this before. Umm YES the voice is finally better!!!! congrats mad props from me. The lyrics in this is nice. good flow in my opinion. The multi's were decent. nothing over the edge. but it was still nice. the quality is good. what you record with? and yeah i like this hook its straight. pretty cool. this is one of your better tracks for sure. keep at it man 8.1/10
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hmmm, nice track nice track, seems like you come the same on every track though, like your style emotion and flow is known b4 i even listen, but regardless it was still a good track holla
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232696 |
Listenin' haa mister ka again ya already know, intro is nice..yup i kinna agree with team one we kinda expect how u come in but thats a good thing i think for u because u got a solid flow nah mean like we know its u, i love that jumpy style u got goin..flow is hot..lyrics is funny..hook is catchy too g, lyrics are pretty dope..delivery is hot too..qual is gr8 too mayne..pretty dope track g, 9/10 fo real hot joint..ayo SpuL im goin to NJ on sunday but i brought the mic out here so i can record until sunday and yo lets get our collab going
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^props for feed to y'all and yo get on AIM. we can do this
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ur flow is starting to sound more and more like Triple's
which is good... u have a distinct voice as well...so, it's not like you "sound like he does" beat is slick flow is good lyrics are common...nothing major...But, this is a feel good track...So, in that sense, they are ample Hook is mixed well...maybe amp it .5 decibels not bad there slick soundin track bro 1 |
^word appreciate feed man
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Aight listenin now
Whats Hot:Quality is fire damn yuo improved like crazy Flow is good The beat is fire Whats Good:Lyrics are straight multies are straight delivery and pressense are good Whats ok:n/a Whats not hot:n/a word this is a pretty good track perfect for a mixtape track Could imagine them people bumpin this 8/10 |
^word appreciate it yo
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up for a lil more !_!
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uppin' for a lil more .
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Whats Hot:Ya flow and lyrix is coo
The beat is fire Whats coo:The Hook is iight.. your prescense and emotion multies are nice Whats iight:Ya delivery in certain spots Whats Not:The way u didnt pronounce some words fully kinda like ya mouth got wet and didnt come out righ i do the same shit lol this was hot bro...im feelin u more on original beats lol..ima try that shit... 8/10 Keep droppin boi |
listening...
beat is coo, quality is good too... flow is is on point for this verse, kinda got an eminem type delievery with it, like the bouncy vocals on the flow.... anyway good shit.... hook is pretty good here too....2nd verse also good shit, yea the style reminds me alot of eminem......same for the 3rd verse.... real consistent verse... alot of times people start fallin off in the later verses as far as lyrics... anyway pretty good shit... was feelin it |
^word appreciate it man...thanks
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This was BEAST.
Let me first just say that the beat was awesome. And the delivery of the track was amazing. I remember back when I listened to that M.A.S. shit that you dropped and OMG!! you sounded so gay at times on the mic. But, in this track you have improved a lot. You are more in sync with the beat, flowing a lot better and I think that you've got the pitch of your voice down nice. I don't know, before it was like you was patchy in places... and listening to you, I could pick up on your vocals level of volume rising and falling slightly... and I fucking hate that. But, in this track you were consistent from beginning to end. And lyrically, the track was fucking MONSTER. Although, my one minor gripe... or actually when you consider it, it is a little major... there were a couple of spots in the track where your voice was drowned out by the beat... you may want to take a look at that. Because this track is ILL... and for the parts where you can clearly here your voice it is ILLNESS... and so, with a bit of tweaking and modification this track could be fucking selling, nah'mean. |
^word appreciate feedback man
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damnnnnnnnnnn
lol aight aight.... i love this beat mayne.... for real.... your confidence on the mic is improving.... delivery is some of your best.... flow as well..... BIG SP... doing it mayne.... tracks got good vibes.... keep this shit up 8.7/10 -Don T |
Typing as I listen...spul learned how to do a smoothe intro...thats wassup...opened strong...delivery is the most noticeable improvement..def the most emotion you've shown but its still laidback...so u stayed within ya range but kept it interesting...you flowed the same through whole verse tho...thats is a 8 bar swtich beat...if you switched on 9th bar to a completely different flow woulda mad this even better....hook is tight...haha u used the spl its in the game...I need to start charging mothafuckas for catch phrases...ok second verse u open wit same flow but ya energy is so right I am loving ya delivery....u switch flow towards end but its same flow with a different emphasis on the rhyme words...third verse same as other two great energy jus needed a flow switch here an there...really only gripe I got is u held flow too long..I def like this new flow u got now jus swtich it up give the listener some variety....beat is tight fo sho...hook is hitting...aside from the lack of flow changes an slight pronounciation slips here an there very few though...oh an mix coulda been aliil stronger u need to eq ya vocals..to really bring every nuance of ya voice out an have it sit in the mix better cuz right now it kida sits on top of the beat witht he vol adjusted so u can still hear beat instead of fitting in the mix of the instruments...but still a very enjoyable joint I listened twice...good shit MAJOR!!!!elevation with this jumpoff....1
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