Nick Fletcher. vs Artistik.
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-03-06 at 07:53 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win.

- Nick Fletcher.

Artistik. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-06 08:55 PM.

Nick Fletcher. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-06 09:03 PM.

Yeah, faggot. I caught your shitty battle against N.Tavarez. That was some weak ass shit, I hope that you provide me with more competition than you did him.



Now look,
Ya boys have done tattled.. told me you suck, so I'll leave ya rhymes rattled
I seen ya played nameplay 'n' weak punch from a quote..
.. and that was just in ya fuckin punchline battle!
I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some
See me dump the lines.. and you, deal with the fact that you suck at rhymes
Then watch me drop some A-material.. and crush some at the same fuckin time
This fuckin whore's soft.. and against him, poor punches I'm seein more of
With his verse resemblin' a rodeo... as it rides the bull and then falls off
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you

pz, dude :thefinger

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...00&postcount=14

flip this... :)

i kno my position bitch, n here's a new flip with this par bar
cuz all my punches are steller man.. now nfc all-stars
Get your change up fag, or i'll kick that ass n you still can't brag..
cuz you'll only be a pac-man.. n i'll provide the L's that nickel bag
how great your LBL, now i can expose what the worst is..
this aint a tag battle..
so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/
i dunno who pumped you up, but they need to chill for you get hurt
cuz king solo on self esteam.. he tried to gain it back here on rapverse
your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF

Um, yeah... I didn't nominate myself. And also, just being nominated doesn't get you in... you then have to be voted in by the Council... I wasn't allowed to vote on my own thread, IDIOT!! Nice try though, word to your fake personals.

ummmmm nice way to sway... i don't care on the EXACT specifics 1 i'm not from this site.. n the whole idea of a punch is to get the reader to see what u mean.. n from the thread u made it first looks like u nominated yourself... n there other mods n that forum n u made your own thread...

vote up

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

Now look,
Ya boys have done tattled.. told me you suck, so I'll leave ya rhymes rattled
I seen ya played nameplay 'n' weak punch from a quote..
.. and that was just in ya fuckin punchline battle!
meh
I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some
o.k
See me dump the lines.. and you, deal with the fact that you suck at rhymes
Then watch me drop some A-material.. and crush some at the same fuckin time
nice
This fuckin whore's soft.. and against him, poor punches I'm seein more of
With his verse resemblin' a rodeo... as it rides the bull and then falls off
dont rhyme, meh
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you
o.k

i kno my position bitch, n here's a new flip with this par bar
cuz all my punches are steller man.. now nfc all-stars
dope
Get your change up fag, or i'll kick that ass n you still can't brag..
cuz you'll only be a pac-man.. n i'll provide the L's that nickel bag
nice
how great your LBL, now i can expose what the worst is..
this aint a tag battle..
so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/
dope
i dunno who pumped you up, but they need to chill for you get hurt
cuz king solo on self esteam.. he tried to gain it back here on rapverse
nice wordplay
your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF
coo personal

v/artistik for better bars period

It ain't swaying, because nobody can see the posts until AFTER they have voted. And, I made my own thread because at the time there was only me and spul moderating the forum, and I was still explaining to him how to do everything.

well i retract my last statement...

but i assume u get what i was tryna say...

it wasn't intended to be a false statement.. ws going on what i knew from being new to THIS site

I know, I was only joking around anyway. Like you said, you are new to the site.. so you wouldn't be aware that I often try to antagonise people for fun.

This site can get mad boring, so I have to find ways of entertaining myself, lol.

But yo, it was a straight punch, and a good verse. This should be close. :thumbup:

rise for feedback and votes......... thanks

come on people....... five minutes for a vote won't kill you

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

word @ my name being mentioned in this thread ~_~ .

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

pollz on this one dawg...its going to be close imo.............................

God damn it!! Why not just vote, dude.

Win or lose, I couldn't give a rats ass... JUST VOTE!!! :slick:

can we get some votes here muhfuckaz

bitch, watch me bump this shit to the top of the page....

This was feedback posted for Artistik.
 

i think Art took it cause he he had alot of personals and punches, the link helped you too, nice structure, all your lines landed a came out great...good shit, Pic, you had some good lines but you just talked to but you just talked too much homie.

yo wtf... do battles alway's go this slow...

upping

^ Pretty much. Welcome to the world of RapVerse battling my friend, where the retards are slow, and the voting is slower.

Nahm'saying, dude. :slick:

Umm, yeah... bumping this to the top of the page probably won't get it a vote, but hey... its another post to add to my count.

Hello. :)

Voted For: Artistik.



i kno my position bitch, n here's a new flip with this par bar
cuz all my punches are steller man.. now nfc all-stars
your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF


Vs.


I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some
This fuckin whore's soft.. and against him, poor punches I'm seein more of
With his verse resemblin' a rodeo... as it rides the bull and then falls off


Weak fucking battle from both people... NF you suck lol. What was with your verse, probably the worst shit ive seen from you since early 05'. Artistik yours was alright but nothing to boast about.. decent wordplay here and there but nothing outstanding...


Anyways i think artistik pulled this one out.. both hadd the same number of quotables but the rest of artistiks verse was better than fletchers.

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more votes please... damn

Any votes, because that one is disqualified. As will any other BAR vs. BAR votes that come into this battle, whether they be for Artistik or myself.

Booo!!! .. I break battles down bar by bar and they get dq'ed then i do it qoutables and they get dq'ed..

I should just vote without an explanation :thumbup:

I never remove bar by bar breakdowns.... I just don't tolerate bar vs. bar votes in my FL and EFL battles. When in the leagues I don't like them, but they are allowed. So, I'm like... if they want to give me them types of gay votes, I'll give them the same right back.

word... bar by bar feed is alway's best...

Vote up losers

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

better verse i thought....had better punches wordplay flow and whatever else lol....other dude had no problems hits punches just werent hard enough.

Wtf... Vote U Lazy Dick Heads

yo this site is wack as fuck with voting..



RB COME BACK TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Voted For: Artistik.

Get your change up fag, or i'll kick that ass n you still can't brag..
cuz you'll only be a pac-man.. n i'll provide the L's that nickel bag
how great your LBL, now i can expose what the worst is..
this aint a tag battle..
so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/
your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF

vs

I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you

Art had the better lines and personals here but both came a bit weak in this battle compared to what Iv seen them both drop. Nicks problem is that his first line was wak as shit with the taddled and raddled stuff. And his lines were really stretched and it messed up his flow, I dont care much for the structure but the flow still counts when Im reading and judging. Not too many quotables in this battle but it could just be coz they didnt drop to many lines though. Either way I got Artistik taking this with more quotables and better flow and punches. RTF in my battle with luciano please

This was feedback posted for Artistik.
 

Dam !!!! Art come sick !! checking polls for my fam
dope drop.

so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/

dam

1~

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 

pollz............................................. .........

Voted For: Artistik.

my vote goes to artistik...nick..you came fuckin weak this time...artistik...you didn't do so hot either..but it's whatever


i kno my position bitch, n here's a new flip with this par bar
cuz all my punches are steller man.. now nfc all-stars

stupid....1/5

Get your change up fag, or i'll kick that ass n you still can't brag..
cuz you'll only be a pac-man.. n i'll provide the L's that nickel bag

weak punch, decent word play - 2/5

how great your LBL, now i can expose what the worst is..
this aint a tag battle..
so it's UNTOLD of who will help with your verses :/

good punch - 4/5

i dunno who pumped you up, but they need to chill for you get hurt
cuz king solo on self esteam.. he tried to gain it back here on rapverse

okay attempt, shitty execution..2/5

your far from great.. but i see why you took the time u waited to help
cuz shit..
i'd be in the legends TOO.. if i nominated MYSELF

this is so played, its never been used...0/5


9/25


Ya boys have done tattled.. told me you suck, so I'll leave ya rhymes rattled
I seen ya played nameplay 'n' weak punch from a quote..
.. and that was just in ya fuckin punchline battle!

a bit stretched..weak execution..but overall...decent...3/5

I'm cloutin you son.. here's a dollar, 'coz no doubt you's a bum
And I'm out-livin this trash, as opposed to ure ass still livin out of some

see what you're doin, but poor execution...2/5

See me dump the lines.. and you, deal with the fact that you suck at rhymes
Then watch me drop some A-material.. and crush some at the same fuckin time

no 0/5

This fuckin whore's soft.. and against him, poor punches I'm seein more of
With his verse resemblin' a rodeo... as it rides the bull and then falls off

no 0/5

I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you

decent i guess... 2/5


7/25

art - 9/25
mick - 7/25

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thx, but can we get this closed pleaseG?

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

ight, ima have to go with nick on this joint. He didnt have a very strong verse but neither did artistik. I felt like nick had a better flow and his punches connected better. The only ones i really got were the last too, these seems like more of a personal battle or some shit.

nick's closer got it though
I'll bomb my way through with punches that'll be straight rockin this jew
And you'll get hit with such a heavy cross, jesus'll feel sorry for you
^^
I wasn't feelin too much of artistik's verse he jsut aint really show me nothin this time.
return the favor.....links in the sig

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wtf @ only votes for me getting dq'.. this is some bullshit