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InfLuEnTiaLWuN vs lyrically gifted
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 08-03-06 at 09:44 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. Expired battle win - closed |
InfLuEnTiaLWuN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 09:10 PM.
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Lyrically Gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 09:12 PM.
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Aight..
You Might Be Gifted But Lyrically Im Sick Have Tha kid Runnin his mouth..no no dont trip Cause if you trip my Gunz Bust Quick Like A Virgin Dick Kid called me out but pulled a no show Ill pull a quick punch and hit you with some bright lights See's them lights alot...when he talks to the PoPo Cause where im from..thats a major NO..N0 Im coming with that maraculous flow off tha dome But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil You shouldnt of came to a gunfight with a Knife.... Cause it only takes WUN bad INFLUENCE to fuck up your life.. |
Ok 1. how you throw a personal,Kid dont know me like a stanger
you can take your krusty punchs,ill bend'em like coat hangers ill throw'em in tha garbage casue thats what your shit is worth This cat aint punchin , you slappin like a bitch with a phurse now i know i herd worse but you infleunce on us is bad if we took after this kid 0 is as many wins as we would have no lies im spittin, casue by kids record i can tell hes no veterin all you throwin homie is newspapers call ya self a letter man you set this man, so i guess your just lookin to be murked You can try bitin and recyclin ya lines but it still ain gunna work leave you decieced amoung dirt with lyrics that creace ya ability im spittin so hot that i could use my words as heavy artilary ill call you hillary casue you rapp soft like a rich hoe with no style thinks hes gunna drop a verse hot liek fire i think Infleuentalwun is C-Nile(crazy) |
Voted For: Lyrically Gifted
Lyrically Gifted: Ok 1. how you throw a personal,Kid dont know me like a stanger you can take your krusty punchs,ill bend'em like coat hangers 3/10 - Meh Opener. ill throw'em in tha garbage casue thats what your shit is worth This cat aint punchin , you slappin like a bitch with a phurse 4/10 - Decent. now i know i herd worse but you infleunce on us is bad if we took after this kid 0 is as many wins as we would have 4/10 - Decent. no lies im spittin, casue by kids record i can tell hes no veterin all you throwin homie is newspapers call ya self a letter man 3/10 - Meh. you set this man, so i guess your just lookin to be murked You can try bitin and recyclin ya lines but it still ain gunna work 2/10 - Lame. leave you decieced amoung dirt with lyrics that creace ya ability im spittin so hot that i could use my words as heavy artilary 3/10 - Meh. ill call you hillary casue you rapp soft like a rich hoe with no style thinks hes gunna drop a verse hot liek fire i think Infleuentalwun is C-Nile 5/10 - Niice Closer. 24/70 InfLuEnTiaLWuN: You Might Be Gifted But Lyrically Im Sick Have Tha kid Runnin his mouth..no no dont trip 2/10 - Weak Opener. Cause if you trip my Gunz Bust Quick Like A Virgin Dick Kid called me out but pulled a no show Ill pull a quick punch and hit you with some bright lights 3/10 - Meh. See's them lights alot...when he talks to the PoPo Cause where im from..thats a major NO..N0 2/10 - So is That Line yo Im coming with that maraculous flow off tha dome But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil 2/10 - Nah Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil 3/10 - Meh You shouldnt of came to a gunfight with a Knife.... Cause it only takes WUN bad INFLUENCE to fuck up your life.. 3/10 Meh Closer. 15/60 |
oh yeah, and return the fav in the next 24Hours or I will get that vote removed.
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ok if i get enough posts.. i only got 14 or 15.. soo.. ill try thanks for voting
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You grimey fuck Oh and u broke muh shit down wrong but whatever...do you kidd |
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you shit was mad whack no matter how I broke it down. You wanna talk shit set up a battle, if not.. go whack off.
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come on people vote.......................................
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Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN
You Might Be Gifted But Lyrically Im Sick Have Tha kid Runnin his mouth..no no dont trip ~i like this line Cause if you trip my Gunz Bust Quick Like A Virgin Dick Kid called me out but pulled a no show Ill pull a quick punch and hit you with some bright lights See's them lights alot...when he talks to the PoPo Cause where im from..thats a major NO..N0 Im coming with that maraculous flow off tha dome But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil You shouldnt of came to a gunfight with a Knife.... Cause it only takes WUN bad INFLUENCE to fuck up your life.. ~i like all these fuckin lines |
LMAO.... k uppin 4................................................. .....
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Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN
V/influentialwun But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil vs. nothing v/influential wun lyrical...try and incorporate better punches dog ur just using fillers and garbage....influential..u had some bullshit stuff in ur verse too but it was enough to get u the win..... |
rtf on my battle please dog............................
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ok.. hahaha if you say so...
i just dont think that rappin about sprayin nines and shit is even worth it casue thst not really "DISSING" thats trying to act hard.. but ok thanks for voting on the battle dawg.. last up |
^^well ur right..
but the thing is...u didnt really have ne quotable punches..i just wasnt feeling them ya know? i felt you lacked creativity in your verse..im not hating..just telling u. and ur opponent..although talked tough..and thats kind ehhh...but it was still somewhat of a punch compared to what you had.....but a vote is just an opinon..and thats what i gave no hate...and theres more feed to my vote. |
uppin... .
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^rtf dawg......with an honest vote my shtis in the sig..get 1 more post and rtf
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yea i need 20 posts kidd..
Ill vote by tommrow....... |
rtf kid...wut u think this is??????????????????????
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Voted For: Lyrically Gifted
You Might Be Gifted But Lyrically Im Sick Have Tha kid Runnin his mouth..no no dont trip WAK Cause if you trip my Gunz Bust Quick Like A Virgin Dick Kid called me out but pulled a no show YOUR BARS ARE FUCKED UP...IT SHOULD BE 2 LINES NOT 3. Ill pull a quick punch and hit you with some bright lights See's them lights alot...when he talks to the PoPo WAK Cause where im from..thats a major NO..N0 Im coming with that maraculous flow off tha dome WAK But this kis came to the battle with nothin suspencil Take out a rachet and spray it at ya neck like a bottle of cologne WAK Cause the only led this kid reloadin is in a mechanical pencil You shouldnt of came to a gunfight with a Knife.... Cause it only takes WUN bad INFLUENCE to fuck up your life.. WAK BASICALLY YOU HAD NOTHING. Ok 1. how you throw a personal,Kid dont know me like a stanger you can take your krusty punchs,ill bend'em like coat hangers WAK ill throw'em in tha garbage casue thats what your shit is worth This cat aint punchin , you slappin like a bitch with a phurse OK PUNCH BUT IT WAS REALLY WEAK now i know i herd worse but you infleunce on us is bad if we took after this kid 0 is as many wins as we would have POORLY WRITTEN, VERY POORLY no lies im spittin, casue by kids record i can tell hes no veterin all you throwin homie is newspapers call ya self a letter man WAK you set this man, so i guess your just lookin to be murked You can try bitin and recyclin ya lines but it still ain gunna work FILLER LINES WITH NO PUNCHES leave you decieced amoung dirt with lyrics that creace ya ability im spittin so hot that i could use my words as heavy artilary GLORIFICATION & FILLER ill call you hillary casue you rapp soft like a rich hoe with no style thinks hes gunna drop a verse hot liek fire i think Infleuentalwun is C-Nile(crazy) WAK BASICALY, YOU HAD ONE GOOD LINE WHICH REALLY WASN'T THAT GOOD. I DONT KNOW WHY BUT i EXPECTED MORE FROM THIS BATTLE. OH WELL. i GIVE THIS BATTLE TO LG FOR THAT ONE DECENT LINE HE HAD AND PLUS THE FACT HE MADE MORE ATTEMPS AT A PUNCH BUT YOU BOTH IS WAK ON THE REAL. ELEVATE MAN. |
Voted For: InfLuEnTiaLWuN
structure: Influence-both were kinda hard to follow metas:influence punches:both creativity: influ personal:LG overall I say iflu took it |
This was feedback posted for InfLuEnTiaLWuN
influentialwun tore his ass up out tha frame! Betta punch lines and I like the way he used both mcees name in the verse
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Well if you liked it why not vote........
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rtf lol.............................................
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UPPIN.......
Come on people this shit has been open mad long ..vote |
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