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King Solo 08-03-06 11:06 PM

Nick Fletcher. vs GKillaz05
 
10 Lines
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Bullshit
No Hate

3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 08-03-06 at 11:36 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Reopened for 21 more days - 10/7

System 08-03-06 11:10 PM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 11:10 PM.

GKillaz05 08-03-06 11:12 PM

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...

9:10 = 9outta10

System 08-03-06 11:13 PM

Nick Fletcher. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 11:13 PM.

King Solo 08-03-06 11:14 PM

Right, I've beaten you before. This time won't be any different. So, draw up your forced structure, wordplay and all that other weak bullshit you drop. And I'll be happy to own you with a quick fucking keystyle you FAGGOT!


Aight look,
Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!

pz, dude :thefinger

GKillaz05 08-03-06 11:24 PM

hurry up and start dick ridin' before people that dont like you enter, and you LOSE.

King Solo 08-03-06 11:32 PM

What the fuck is your problem?

I do not have people dickriding me, and as far as those who do not like me like rush lingo and Ken`Pho and suck.... LMAO!! I have all of them blacklisted anyway.

I looked at your verse, and it is trash man. You are still using that same style with the forced structure and wordplay. That shit died on this site about a year and a half ago. I won this battle. EZ.

King Solo 08-03-06 11:35 PM

AND OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!

You explained one of your punches, and you dropped a "HOT" line.

Ultimate herb status for you. :laugh:

GKillaz05 08-03-06 11:46 PM

right I did, and NOOO.. your verse was mega whack, not one good punchline in there, I dont really care for text much any ways, but look for an audio track comin' your was CLOWN, and oh yeah, if you win this battle some how, your a dick rider, I already know though. so its coo'

King Solo 08-03-06 11:57 PM

LMAO!! This will be my last response to your gayness. I find it funny that you call my verse mega whack... but what's funnier is that as soon as I dropped my verse you instantly went about making dickrider claims. That basically tells me ONE THING... you are a herb who knows he has gotten floored and so you make these weak ass allogations so your defeat seems less humiliating.

Jesus, you fucking suck.. BIG TIME.

GKillaz05 08-04-06 12:40 PM

uppin #1................................................ ....

The Creator 08-04-06 04:47 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I liked this openner - 2nd bar was nice

I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
first line was filler but 2nd was decent

Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
2 good lines

Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
1st was filler, 2nd was str8

Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...
decent closer...


Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
recycled but still a dope line...

I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
ok punch

I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
didn't really like this line

Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
ok line

I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!
decent punch

This was a str8 battle, but I was feeling GKs shit the most coz he had some ill lines. Nick had someshit but I've seen most of it before really so I wasn't surprised or astounded by it being in here.

Personals - none
Metaphores - Gkillaz
Punches - Gkilaz
Structure and Flow - Gkillaz
Wordplay - Gkillaz

V/ Gkillaz05

rtf

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Lyrically Gifted 08-04-06 04:47 PM

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 
Aight look,
Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!


aight all i gotta say is self glory with that verse all you talked about is what you cant or TRY and do...no real hard punches or personals so that in my books was a weak verse... but thats nothin a little elevating cant fix

Lyrically Gifted 08-04-06 04:50 PM

Vote G killaz
for an all around better verse

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...

ya verse came with more consitsancy and flow there were more prosonals and punches that hit harder so yea my vote goes to you.....

Lyrically Gifted 08-04-06 04:58 PM

and i will try and fix this with the mods.. i wasent sure how to vote... my bad... but you get whho im voting for...

GKillaz05 08-04-06 05:06 PM

2-0 .. uppin for one more vote to get this closed.

King Solo 08-04-06 09:11 PM

its not 2-0 you fucking clown...

.... that dude can not vote because he doesn't have enough posts... IDIOT!!

and lmao @ him sayin I didn't diss you.... i hope some decent voters actually come in here

Kirk 08-04-06 10:21 PM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

Punches leave ya 'burned' like the 'sun' your trapped this time...
Couldnt even spit something' 'hott', if you 'rapped outside'...
^Meh... Not too hard hitting. Not too well thought out either.
I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
^Decent I guess. Ray Charles lines are played.
Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
^Decent, once again. Nothing too thought out.
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
^Still just mediocre.
Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...
^Meh... Still mediocre. Heard most of your verse before.



Aight look,
Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
^Haha, decent wordplay. Made me giggle.
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
^I almost used a punch like this the other day. But it's okay. Not the most original but decent.
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
^Pretty decent. Made me laugh a little.
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
^Also decent. Not the best I've seen from you though.
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!
^Haha. Pretty funny.



Basically Solo got this because his verse made me laugh and it had lots of creativity. Killa, your verse was real simple to me and wasn't appealing.

*Wonders if Solo remembers me* (OSB)

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Dickard. 08-05-06 01:37 AM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

Gkilla...you focused more on multies in this battle more then u did actual punches...which in the end hurt you...u had some nice punches...but nothing to make u eligable for the win dawg...sorry...just came weak in my eyes

Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...


^^best lines if that...they weree ehhh


nicky boy-came better then ur oponent in this one..obvious to see...i like to see u doing good..not coming that played lol.....ur back n i like it haha....u had good punches..didnt let multies take over ur verse thank god...good punches good humor and what not


I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!



^^best lines


v-nick fletcher

RTF DAWG

King Solo 08-05-06 01:46 AM

I'll RTF... when you have an open battle with both verses dropped. Word.

Dickard. 08-05-06 01:48 AM

look in frotn lines...me vs. oz lol..................check that shit wit an honest vote thanks

King Solo 08-05-06 07:23 AM

Aight word.

And are you happy Killaz... you got the vote removed, and yours went with it. And I see that strobe deems the other vote worthy... which makes it 1-0 to me.

Your faggotry won't work here bitch!! :gfy:

King Solo 08-06-06 09:59 AM

yeah, upping this battle to the top of the page....

GKillaz05 08-06-06 02:04 PM

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GKillaz05 08-15-06 12:29 AM

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Adam 08-15-06 08:38 PM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

lmfao, this is basically a no contest.

vote: mr. solo

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Spartacus. 08-16-06 11:03 AM

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 
Fletch - Good verse hard enough punches good flow and structure your wordplay was ok but in some places thought it was basic but not a major hazard and had enough to win it for me.

G - More basic verse but it was still ok, your punches didnt hit as hard as fletchy's so he took this.

Pro. 08-20-06 06:27 PM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!

vs.

Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
^Actually liked this bar..still wasnt harsh tho'..blah.

Overall-Nick pounced on G...IMO...nick came decent..G came played..work on concepts an wording more G.

SINISTER 09-13-06 02:54 PM

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher.
 
nice......checkin pollz.........................................

GKillaz05 09-27-06 05:15 PM

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GKillaz05 09-30-06 03:39 PM

up................................................ ............

Hitchcock 10-02-06 01:23 AM

Voted For: GKillaz05

this was a pretty decent battle, yall both came good, but im gonna have to go wit GKillaz05, i was feelin his bars just a little bit more ya feel me?. I thought he had a little bit better flow too. Some of nick's bars sounded kinda forced.

Gkillaz best bars=
I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...
Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
^^those joints right there are why you got the win, the opener wasn't so hot n neither was the closer but the middle part was hot

nick's best bars=
I'll smash you faggot.. and have you fallin' G
With such a dope haymaker.. I'll have all the farmers calling me
^^that shit was hot, i like the wordplay on that one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!
^^that was ok, but it was real forced

overall ima give it to gkillaz for a more consistent verse ya feel me

RETURN DAT FAVOR.......links r in the sig........1

GKillaz05 10-07-06 03:26 PM

uppin............................................. .

GKillaz05 10-08-06 11:49 AM

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Valiant 10-14-06 01:07 PM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
Let was iight styll I want to give u go (no homo).

Valerie 10-14-06 03:00 PM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

I think Nick got this battle cus his overall skills for 1 and then his flow and punches were nice but last 2 lines were ok but overall nick did good with his verse for just fuckin it off bassically its a really good verse and takes the win in this battle in my opinion.

vote/ Nick Fletcher.

GKillaz05 10-16-06 11:33 AM

uppin............................................. ........

Journal!st 10-22-06 07:47 AM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

Gimme ya best hit, u dont change rap styles u change-sexes...
'Swooshing-A-Shot' at a parks only time u make the "net-flip"...
Punches are scarring your health; my bars are like stealth...
closest he gets to having a ‘sex life’ is being ‘hard on himself’...
Im a "G Killa", so in this battle there is no need to merk you...
You cant spit a 9:10, because thats past this youngins cerfew...


vs.

I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics
Fuck outta here you dumb fuck. . I'll go old school just for fun
And you'd go old school to, if you weren't still attending ure first one
I heard you call ya dick a credit card ..but kid, I won't give it clout
'Coz every girls a cash machine. .
. . you try pushin their buttons and they spit it out!

V/ Nick harder punches and was more consistant with it...G had some played lines and wasnt really original!...

Daubs 10-26-06 08:18 AM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher.

Kid, they call me a thief and a stalker.. sorry but its a habit
So ya girl, I'm a trailer.. and then fuckin steal yours whilst I'm at it
I throw up punches and kicks, lightning quick to rip dicks
And kids bars are on a level. .
. . that cud be used in the High Jump for the special olympics

VS

I get wins like cars without a roof chump gats leave u slumped...
Fuckin' Fighter?....
Like ray charles atta bar... I never seen this "fruit punch"...


Nick won.


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