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Mystic. vs kriptic
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 tko 4-1 tko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-06-06 at 01:58 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
Kriptic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-06 01:29 PM.
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Mystic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-06 01:34 PM.
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ill leave you stunned straight..and sonned you betcha
Worse then ur ko's aka youngone and nick fletcher You've been merked so much...ima merk the shit out you I would drop another personal but shit......... .............you getting merked is all i heard about you You talk tuff in threads..but then i took a look around Nick fletcher owned you in his battle ............. ........................AND THE LYRICIST LOUNGE!! Your gassed up dawg...every1's hating on jew (you) I mean ill straight up burn ya shit...... ..................and starve you to death too! So im leavin this quick..took me about 5 minutes While ive already posted..u still got ur whole verse to finish! |
Ayo'
The only reason ya here son, ya pap's couldnt afford the abortion claimin' your 'ahead'? ..well call me a doc. son im cuttin the foreskin you had the right idea, when you IM'd me sayin whatchu did you wasnt tryin ta start beef "yo im jus jokin-wit you kid" "i aint startin nothin,dont think i was doing that-k?" i like that, you's a man son ,i now respect what you say yous a bum nigga tho... this time next year imma have the amount on this site in ya Bank im makin moves,you aint got no one otha then ya self to thank yous a nobody.you need a green bulb ta apear in the limelight i read ya open mics kid..there cute..you dont shit bout a chryme-life dont understand..dont vote or ask me... ** didnt count the little indent's as a line** |
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Voted For: Mystic.
ok i really didn't think ya verse was great n i thought wtf i thought this guy was decent... then i read his verse n was like wow he musta felt bad n didn't try... lmfao... well what can i say u aint try...(hope's you didn't)... but least u threw punches n personal's n the jew line was attempted wit Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Kriptic
ill leave you stunned straight..and sonned you betcha Worse then ur ko's aka youngone and nick fletcher blahhhhh 2/10 You've been merked so much...ima merk the shit out you I would drop another personal but shit......... .............you getting merked is all i heard about you y u keep repeatin "merk"? 1/10 You talk tuff in threads..but then i took a look around Nick fletcher owned you in his battle ............. ........................AND THE LYRICIST LOUNGE!! decent punch, 6/10 Your gassed up dawg...every1's hating on jew (you) I mean ill straight up burn ya shit...... ..................and starve you to death too! good shit 8/10 So im leavin this quick..took me about 5 minutes While ive already posted..u still got ur whole verse to finish! not a strong close but nice flow 5/10 vs. The only reason ya here son, ya pap's couldnt afford the abortion claimin' your 'ahead'? ..well call me a doc. son im cuttin the foreskin abortion lines = played but nice spin 8/10 you had the right idea, when you IM'd me sayin whatchu did you wasnt tryin ta start beef "yo im jus jokin-wit you kid" decent personal 4/10 "i aint startin nothin,dont think i was doing that-k?" i like that, you's a man son ,i now respect what you say no u dont lol 6/10 yous a bum nigga tho... this time next year imma have the amount on this site in ya Bank im makin moves,you aint got no one otha then ya self to thank diss? 4/10 yous a nobody.you need a green bulb ta apear in the limelight i read ya open mics kid..there cute..you dont shit bout a chryme-life i think u missed a word but aight closer, 6/10 vote: Kriptic only because his shit was less played and hit harder than mystic's, even though mystic used a few personals they were too repetitive...therefore they didnt stand out as much as they should've, decent battle on both sides though |
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Voted For: Mystic.
I'ma give this one to Mystic, simply because he had more personals in there and harder hitting punches. This battle was a lil wack, but whatever..here's tha breakdown.. Kriptic-I felt you had an ight verse. Your intro was wack, and a intro is everything in a battle, it gets your audience into your verse and it gives em a lil feel of how the verse is gunna be. So wen you drop a punch or personal its guna be 2x better. I think you should work on that, as well as ending your verse. Body of your verse is where you really just pick at tha scab, but I felt in your body verse, you had more glorifying to yourself, then dissing your opponent. You would've easily took this one if you would've just dissed your challenger. Also, a lot of rhymes didn't drop like you probably wanted them too. I was confused a lil because of that, and it made some things not make sense, but overall, you still had a nice verse minus all the flaws. Stay up! Mystic-You had a nicer verse that took this battle. I feel you hit harder with the punches and personals, just a lil. I can probably tell you got a lil more experience battling, that's why you came out on top. you had a better intro, wasn't the greatest in the world, but off the bat it was a nice personal that got your reader into the verse. Your body verse was nicer also, you had them good personals and a good unique style to the way you worded them. Not too much wordplay, I can see that this was quickly done, but it still got the job done. I don't like how throughout the majority of your verse, you stayed on the Nick Fletcher owning him. I feel that didn't need elaboration, just drop the personal, and move on to the next. Your ending bar was the best, and what really made you stand out. I was the best bar in your verse to me, suprisingly. Because it wasn't too flashy and it wasn't wack either, it was in between. And it got the job done. This was close, but I felt you came out slightly on top. Overall-both of you are good, but I feel you guys did this quick. Probably spend a lil more time and really get at each other with the personals more. Punches weren't really high in this one, but whatever...Boring battle, but Mystic. came out on top. -1- |
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Voted For: Mystic.
breakdown: structure:none yall shit is hella hard to follow metas:i didn't spot any Punches:tie creativity:Mystic-you went into background detail i like dat personals:Mystic overall: my opinon Mystic |
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Voted For: Mystic.
Better all round verse i thought....Beter punches which hit harder...better flow and wordplay, nothing wrong with kriptic's verse but he didnt come as hard in this battle. |
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Voted For: Mystic.
mystic i give it to u good personals nice punches everything was good kriptic u were good to but i think mystic was better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Mystic.
ill leave you stunned straight..and sonned you betcha
Worse then ur ko's aka youngone and nick fletcher You've been merked so much...ima merk the shit out you I would drop another personal but shit......... .............you getting merked is all i heard about you You talk tuff in threads..but then i took a look around Nick fletcher owned you in his battle ............. ........................AND THE LYRICIST LOUNGE!! Your gassed up dawg...every1's hating on jew (you) I mean ill straight up burn ya shit...... ..................and starve you to death too! So im leavin this quick..took me about 5 minutes While ive already posted..u still got ur whole verse to finish! vs Ayo' The only reason ya here son, ya pap's couldnt afford the abortion claimin' your 'ahead'? ..well call me a doc. son im cuttin the foreskin you had the right idea, when you IM'd me sayin whatchu did you wasnt tryin ta start beef "yo im jus jokin-wit you kid" "i aint startin nothin,dont think i was doing that-k?" i like that, you's a man son ,i now respect what you say yous a bum nigga tho... this time next year imma have the amount on this site in ya Bank im makin moves,you aint got no one otha then ya self to thank yous a nobody.you need a green bulb ta apear in the limelight i read ya open mics kid..there cute..you dont shit bout a chryme-life dont understand..dont vote or ask me... ** didnt count the little indent's as a line** good battle the foreskin this was hot an thats it mystic had personals an punches so he won to me |
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