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25. Oz. (1-0) vs 26. Wordz Ahgod (1-0)
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Checkin In ...................Im doin 8-10 lines....................You can do wateva
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I'll ether drop first and you match or you drop first and I match. g' luck, our last battle was wak, this time Im gonna try a bit more coz its the league. 1
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I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down The only way Id see em drop fourty . . . . . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . . . . . Then how you'll drop in this battle So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . . . . . just to put you in a figuere four you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base G' luck man. :thumbup: |
Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch
He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you Finish |
str8 drop fam. good luck man. 1
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...419#post2815419
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2815428 I'll edit the rest in when I see more people have battled |
---Wordz Ahgod--
I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season >>Okay opener. This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down The only way Id see em drop fourty . . . . . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground >>Horrible wording but okay punch. Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . . . . . Then how you'll drop in this battle >>Far too stretched out and kind of boring concept. So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . . . . . just to put you in a figuere four >>Flow is off but okay. you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base >>No, not really liking. --Oz.-- Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks >>Bad concept, bad delivery. Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus >>I've seen this concept put a lot better before. Weak hit. I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z >>Your punches make his song cry? No.. you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook >>Soda that's "overshook" wins? No... not even a good attempt. I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you >>Very played. Vote: Wordz Ahgod This was not a very good battle. Wordz had the opener which pretty much won it. Oz. didn't really come with anything. |
thanks for the vote and feed dawg. I'll rtf on your battle and add to my links man. 1
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wordz:
I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season ^^^i used a hbo punch againts him..but decent opener This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down The only way Id see em drop fourty . . . . . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground ^^uhhh nothin special here Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . . . . . Then how you'll drop in this battle ^^ok..nothin hard hittin So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . . . . . just to put you in a figuere four ^^nah you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base ^^^badd closer.... words pleez stop stretchin ya bars dogg there 2 wordy...decent drop tho oz: Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks ^^^ok i guess Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus ^^^dis was terrible I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z ^^^oh no lol you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook ^^^decent I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you ^^^nah v/words......kind of easily |
thanks, my lines ARE a bit stretch but I like the way it sounds when I read it. Its a style I develop'd why in the LBL cypher. but I'll work on it man. 1
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Wordz Ahgod:
I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season ^^ok opener, coulda been worded better This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down The only way Id see em drop fourty . . . . . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground ^^elementary troop Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . . . . . Then how you'll drop in this battle ^^no So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . . . . . just to put you in a figuere four ^^ehh you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base ^^blah Oz.: Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks ^^no Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus ^^ok bar played concept... breath/fabolous I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z ^^no you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook ^^no I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you ^^stupid Once again basic verses nothing impressing... gotta give it to Wordz for more consistency V// Wordz Ahgod |
Wordz-
I dunno if this styles in now days or whatever, but eh.... I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season -worded bad, decent nameplay. This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down The only way Id see em drop fourty . . . . . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground -that'd be ok if you yourself dropped fourty, you hoewever dropped, i cant even tell like 8 Dawg... you have no talent, you not even a hassle I'll be honest, Im more worried about whats on TV . . . . . . Then how you'll drop in this battle -heh decent filler So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . . . . . just to put you in a figuere four -pretty nice you aint sick anymore, you take proteine to the face Unless you gotta bat... then you aint never seen the 1st base -bad setup, decent line. Oz- Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks -lol nice Like Ludacris I hold the number one spot and wordz from God cant handle this if He come at me Ill have him hard to breathe like he was hangin with Faboulus -maybe if breathe was a newer song but, no. I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z -eh you need emphasis on ya verse bcuz otherwise yo punch get overlooked Then he jus burst in rage when I win like a soda thats been overshook -lol seriously? I like to smack wordz so thats why my wordz stay true Dont be jealous Jus Bcuz I Got Shitz in my toilet that drop better than you -heh v/ Oz ehhhhhhhhhh |
1-3 Wordz is up ....Uppin.....................
ill edit my post on sat when i have time |
W.A.
I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season -vs- Oz. Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks ............. Werdz..u had some nice attempts at some but just didn't do alot of damage. Oz did a lot of name droppin on Big artist which took away from everything. Didn't really get hype over either verses but....whatever. V/ Wordz |
weak battle and no quotables at all. there were some decent attempts by both but not quotable.
v/oz for the opener. ur structure was too long though. wordz u need to work on ur punches so that they fully connect with ur oppenont attracting the readers eyes. same goes to oz. peace. |
oz
that's all that's it. oz took this in my book. wordz ahgod had crazy shit, i didn't feel any of his bars. oz had stretched lines, but recognizable punches.. v-oz |
Thanks for the votes and feedback. 1
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Uh oh Wordz its 3-4 lol
Uppin anyways |
word at us getting 7 votes in this shit. lol. uppin.
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omg this was bad. like damn
words had the only decent 2 bars in this whole battle. Oz was stretched with flow and everything. V/Words Ahgod |
a hellz if I didnt know any better id say you was voting against me bcuz i didnt vote for you in your battle
That would be the reason would it? |
I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season VS. Nothing. V/ words. decent verse, the quotable got you the win. |
thanks for the votes and feed still....
Oz. chill on the vote. if his is a hate vote then you can get taken off but then you would also loose the vote from image who I voted against in that battle. I suggest we both just let it go and keep going on with votes as they come man. we did come a bit weak but its cool. 1 |
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lol have you seen your verse? its bad. like damn. ahgod had the only decent lines in this battle coupled with the fact that you barely flowed at all. but w/e, discount mine if it makes you feel like your being hate voted on. |
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3-5 and nawl I wont gonna get it dq'ed I was jus postin silly shit as a joke but I 4get the j/k Part Upin |
Its cool dawg. word @ 8 votes on this shit man. I wasn't expecting dat. I guess its cuz we drop'd early.
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I'll spill em' an Oz. at a time till you think the bottles bleeding
Shiiet, I merked this kid so bad . . . . . . HBO Denied the 6th season So you can put your hands down, aint no point robing the poor I'll put your yearly income in reverse . . . . . . just to put you in a figuere four This kids sleeping, I'll wake em up so they can lay em down The only way Id see em drop fourty . . . . . . would be when I put em' fourty feet benieth the ground vs. I Know you tired of my lyrics man but jus face the fact you cant hold me he mad bcuz my punchez made his song cry More than Jay Z ^nice attempt, if you were makin a song, this would hit harder! Man You From The Place of Fresh Lameville Assholes You aint nuttin but a bitch He like tupac he got ambitions as a rida But Wordz was Talkin bout Dicks /Wordz had better concepts, harder hitting punches. So I give it to Wordz. vote - Wordz AhGod |
Wordz AhGod wins 6-3.
Wordz Ahgod wins (2-0) Oz. loses (1-1) |
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