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L.I. 08-06-06 10:46 PM

Group E: Artistik vs Wyte
 

So you made it through week one. Congrats. We revamped the roster again due to the few no shows and sign outs. Stay on top of your games because now is when the going gets tough. The hype has ended, your into your 7 week season, and it only is starting to heat up. Going 0-2 will be hard to come back from but anythings possible. Getting to 2-0 will be a great start but doesnt guarantee a playoff spot. Show off your best punches and have some fun. Lay it all out on the lines and dont leave any doubt that your the best in the group. Goodluck guys..

Battler #1: Artistik
Battler #2: Wyte

Battles go up Sunday night
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)
5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.

Multi 08-07-06 04:14 PM

check...... sorry but u lose dude

Wyte 08-07-06 05:30 PM

It's Okay. Check.

Multi 08-07-06 09:27 PM

the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too

Wyte 08-09-06 12:33 PM

Punch #1

Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!

Punch #2

This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win

Multi 08-09-06 04:29 PM

wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did

In-Vision 08-09-06 05:37 PM

i'm going to vote..wyte...that wyte house line was fuckin stupid....overall the only line that was even decent was wytes 2nd bar....so...vote...wyte

Multi 08-09-06 06:36 PM

*keep's from swaying*

0-1

Appocolyptik 08-09-06 07:04 PM

I didn't think either came great but Wyte came very basic, especially with the 2nd line. I mean it was a nice attempt and all but I've seen that whole style a hundred times. Artistik's first punch was ok but the wording let him down. The second punch again was worded poorly and didn't really connect.

I'm gonna give this to Artistik just for being more inventive with his concepts. Both need to improve, but it's much easier to improve wording than to find good concepts.

V/ Artistik

MiSk 08-09-06 11:11 PM

he people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too
^^pretty good... could of been better though

wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did
^^hot.... a well rounded punch!

vs.

Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!
^^hahah... funny... good wording

This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win
^^ehhh... this was pretty good... concept is kinda played

I think this was a close battle.... gotta give it to Artistik. ... his punches just hit harder

Vote: Artistik.

Lampejo 08-09-06 11:30 PM

the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too
^^good wordplay... wording was a lil off but still hit good

wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did
^^wording could have been better, but still conected

vs.

Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!
^^meh this is played like whoa, and your wording was meh

This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win
^^you could have made this nice but your wording ruined it.

vote: artistik becae hes sex-c and his punches was worded better

wyte... work on your wording

Sobe. 08-09-06 11:45 PM

the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too

nah.. I don't see much wit in this.. didn't hit hard to me

Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!

played.

This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win

decent i guess.


wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did

great feed, witty and won the battle

v/ Artistik for the last punch.. only standout line in the battle

Multi 08-10-06 12:31 PM

4-1.... more.............

M&rk 08-10-06 02:10 PM

artistic won easy
..
vote- artistic

Untold 08-10-06 02:18 PM

vote my nigga.. artsy wartsy!

pz.

Ill.Eyes 08-10-06 03:20 PM

the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too
ehh punch, not hitting hard.


Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!
this coulda been worded better, like he doesnt have a house typa ish, didnt hit hard

This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win
decent punch

wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did
punch of the battle, pretty good.

v/ artistik, his second punch won it for him.

Wordz AhGod 08-10-06 06:26 PM

the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too
decent concept but very poorly written
wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did
ok wordplay but it had no real punch. you relied too much on that wordplay.


V.S.


Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!
wtf were you thinking? this was a good concept gon' bad. should've took your time.
This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win
set up was wak...2nd line was ok but too basic and kinda played too

v/ Wyte for better concept.

Appocolyptik 08-10-06 06:45 PM

^Again your voting is ridicolous, you cannot judge a punch on the quality of a set up. The set up doesn't mean much at all, if it's somewhat relevant and rhymes alright then it works. I'm going through your other votes and if I see another vote as bad as the one you dropped here and the one in my battle you're getting banned.

Enygma 08-10-06 06:51 PM

Yeah....I don't know how this was even close to some people. Wyte came pretty wack on both punches....played as shit too. Artistik actually had some wit to his punches. The Wyte House one I thought was pretty good, last one was nice too.....

Vote - Artistik

N.Tavarez 08-11-06 04:17 PM

the people hate prick's like you, 's sad ya kno that it's true
cuz our government's fulla bitches.. and wyte house is too
DECENT PLAY HERE NOT GREAT
wow he can count, so keep track as i fucking murder this kid
cuz i'd be the 1-2 label your punches wack.. but YOU already did
AGAIN GOOD HERE AND A NICE FEED

Wow! u are talking about my house, k fuck where u reside
Yea u are outstanding - only cause u locked ur keys inside!
OUTSTANDING WORDPLAY IS PLAYED
This is easy bitch, the line between us is so fucking thin
Yeah okay, ur punch fucking killed – ur chances of a win
THIS IS DECENT HERE

OVERAL ART HAD 2 DECENT PUNCHES WYTE HAD ONE
V/ ART

Tortilla Chip 08-11-06 09:12 PM

wytes punches weren't that direct at all, it was plain to see that. and artistiks were cool, the wytes house line wasn't that on point but the 1-2 punch line was dope.

easy decision really ..

v. Art

Multi 08-12-06 12:55 PM

10-2 ...............

Euthanize. 08-13-06 03:05 AM

vote - art.

I deduct like five points away from white for me not even being able to see his punches, wtf. but If I was able to see his shit without having to outline it I still got art taking this with the harder punches. decent battle tho.

L.I. 08-13-06 08:33 PM

Both lose. Wyte by vote count and Artistik for not voting andleaving links.

Artistik (0-2)
Wyte (0-2)

L.I. 08-13-06 08:33 PM

Given that Artistik voted on 5 battles and simply forgot to leave links to the votes, I have decided to overturn this decision.

Artistik WINS
Wyte LOSES

- DaTrusHurtz


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