TheSinnister vs youngone
 

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Closed - expired battle win

youngone has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-06 07:59 PM.

TheSinnister has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-06 10:26 PM.

AWW MAN........ WHAT ARE YOU DOING KID? GIMME THE FUCKIN MIC MAN! ...*COUGH COUGH*... JUST CLEARIN UP THE THROAT A LITTLE... IM STILL A ROOKIE SO BE NICE................ I THINK IM LOOSING IT *COUGH*

man im gon drop:

someone tell dis fool dat he not on my level/
he rejected by satin and forgotten by several

nigga i do some shit unheard of/ take
a bite out of crime don't make me serve up a murder

yo avatar don't scare me lookin like a scream expansion/
i'll hang you by yo flesh wit hooks Mr. Marilyn Masion

i get sick reviews while im healthy/
dis shit is over no need tell me

you a JOKEr and pengiun wrapped in one/
i'll play batman,two to uno and I still won

call 9-1-1, da kid having a fit again/
but Mr. MM got away on Mr. garrison's IT Machine

man give it up your better off a senater/
now quit, back to yo old job, the ole' blow job

maybe you can scrape enuff change to buy back yo rep/
but you love being a hoe,so wouldnt mind gettin rob from butthole

i hope you posted before me so people can see dat you a hotwire/cuz i'd hate to steal ya fire

imma dog in dis type of situation/ he aint
nuthin more den hydren, put together the equation

Peace out

ay Rv start votin
dis was a good one
good shit man

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vote muhfuckahs

uppin for some votes
c'mon rv
a couple votes
will not hurt

up up up up up up up up
and away can some body please
vote

Voted For: youngone

well this was a weird battle...

i mean sinnister your verse was iight but as for like dissing ...and creative punches...and personals you didnt really have ne...u just had good flow and multies and shit...gotta work on becoming more creative and what not

youngone ya style needds to change i mean you have chopped up flow becuz of ur structure....read more battles and learn and wat not...but u had some more shots with punches...i mean they were whack...but u still threw them imo.

rtf in 48 hours or less

uuupppin for mo
rv votes
so c'mon i mean im not
bush or Kerry
so just vote

dont forget to rtf dawg............................

Voted For: TheSinnister

wordplay: sin
metaphores:both
mulites:sin
structure: umm...both weird
Self glory:sin (not good)
overall sin...

even tho it was all self glory....it was close..both really wack...soo.. but over sin took it for i guess..better word play and mulites

thanks uppin......................................

man fuck you LG
you just frontin
cuz i aint vote for you
but yeah i could give a
shit

hahah thats not how i roll.. go look at other battles i voted on.. they voted against me...but i still voted for them... so fuck off...grow some balls..... and continue with you shit

^^^ That is right my Rythem slave.................

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go to the polls
people

Lets do round 2 4 fun.............................

may be sum otha time
anyway
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c'mon and vote

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for more votes

upping we need
some fuckin
votes bad
so vote

uppin for more votes
yall act like you don't know how
to vote

upppin yet another time
v-o-t-e
please

upppin again can yall plz just take the time to vote
on ya boy?
c'mon you know you want to
don't even try to front on a
brotha

upppppin
can yall plz
just vote
c'mon............................................. ..?

They wont they will take forever..........................................

yeah well
im still upppin
dis shit
we need votes

uppppppin
for more fuckin
votes
please

vote??????????????????????????????????????????????

only one way to go




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hahahaha
very funny
dog
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need votes

Voted For: TheSinnister

Came better in every catagory....He had harder punches flow wordplay everything....I still think you need to elevate abit but you did enough to take this one.

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and were still uppppppuiiiiiinnnn
this thread for more votes
RV so get to it

This was feedback posted for TheSinnister
 

lol..


i cant vote cos of crew reasons but...sin got this hands down..with hus multis,more vocabs..better flow..decent creativity and so on...nice job


youngone...dont space ur bars it DOSENT make your verse flow...u got potentials but meh u will get better if u continue battling!

Voted For: TheSinnister

THIS IS MY DIPICT-ABLE BIT FULL OF DISPIC-ABLE WIT"S
Un-PREDICTABLE DENIABLY UNFIT, DON'T TWIST MY SHIT
^Like your flow..simple but nice flow
I PUKE WHEN I SPIT, QUIT HIDING FROM THE VETS
Learn PROJECT SOME RESPECT OR TURN YOUR HEAD
^Ok
NUFF SAID, YOUNG ONE, GO PLAY WITH "OTHER KIDS"
LEARN SOME PUNCHES, UNLESS YOUR TO SMALL TO HIT
^AIGHT
YOU GOT MURDERD, YEA I AM THE VERDICT
WHO SAID IT, WHO HEARD IT,PLEASE RE-WORD IT
^2nd line has nice flow

............

someone tell dis fool dat he not on my level/
he rejected by satin and forgotten by several
^ ..ehh no

nigga i do some shit unheard of/ take
a bite out of crime don't make me serve up a murder
^.. ok i guess

i hope you posted before me so people can see dat you a hotwire/cuz i'd hate to steal ya fire

^ Neggative...



Aight tha vote went for sinnister cuz atleast he had a good flow
Young your punches were weak n kinda corny
Just bein honest



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