~No One Comes Close~ ft Yvonne
 

verse1-Tony Green
verse2-Yvonne
verse3-Tony Green

Links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233055

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...77&page=1&pp=15

omg...i didnt see this!

Final project came out pretty nice

uppin fo feed.....

listening

Heard this beat before. Your quality is pretty good. Your flow is shaky. Sounds like your talking more then rapping. You need to find your rhythm on this joint. It was everywhere. I wasnt really feelin the flow, mic pressence, or delivery. but the lyrics are good. But youll get better. The Quality. Was OK. nothing special but it was ok

6/10

uhum uppin......

uppin tot he top

okay beat is amateurish sounding...ok first verse tony ya flow is real choppy an robotic sounding... I can tell you are stretching ya syables to make ya rhyme word hit on the snare...but it really kills your rhythm...delivery wasn't bad but coulda been better...lyrics was koo...verse 2...yvonne...flow is smoother...its still a bit choppy...delivery is good...its mellow but still has a emotion behind it...lyrics are koo, corny lol but good...flow you holding too long...that def needed to hop off the A/B flow after the 8th bar. verse 3 ok tony...same as verse 1 same flow an delivery same feed applies...overall this wasn't bad...quality coulda been better beat was a tad loud...an vocals coulda been eqed better but all in all its a decent track jus could use some polish....1

Listening...

Not feeling the beat...

Tony Green- Flow is shaky. Delivery is very lacking, you don't sound too comfortable on the mic. Lyrics are pretty good...but you could delviered them sooo much better. Quality was blah.

Yvonne- You sound sooo much like Willa...voice wise. Flow is decent...same thing about the delivery. You don't sound too comfortable on the mic either. Decent.

Overall, decent track...just keep it up, and elevate.

*whats golden*

iigh thanxx for the feed

beats aight....decent....aight tony comes in u need a lil more mic presence flows a bit choppy aight yvonn flows cool voice is different...lyrics is cool u need more swagger get into it...you sound monotone.kinda repitive.word...never do that check shit lol it sounded gay fo real...flows smoother than the first tho delivery is a lil better ya the third verse was the best out the song ....overall its cool kinda chill jus needs some rerecording the verses n shit n it be str8 =1=.

i thank y'all...


keep em coming please!

what up.......tony sounds a bit shakey on the mic the beat is eh decent but ya most improvement needs to be the flow and confidence on the mic ...yvonne sounded a lil more comfortable on the mic but still needs a bit miore work aswell over the thought was there now needs execution holla back ......rtf on "when i come around"

iight thnaxx fo the feed uppin

done.


...people dont ignore this and dont forget to drop ur links!

yeah this beat is pretty old. me and some other people made a song to it about a year ago on here.

anyway tony your flow is real choppy. your voice sounds extra robotic. you need to have more energy. lyrics are alright. not super great but not bad

yvonne - you gotten better since the first time i ever heard you. your lyrics are semi-cool. your quality isnt the greatest either.


overall this song was just alright.

yeah this was before I upped my quality a lil bit

god damn i'm so sick of hearing high pitched voice samples, but i won't hold it against you.

Tony, you DEF need to re-record the first verse, AND re mix it AND re EQ it (or EQ it at all from the sounds of it). I can barely hear what you're saying without focusing uberhard to discern words from beats. The lyrics sound soid, just i can't hear em. should EQ your lows for sure and bring some body out of your voice, record at a higher volume then compress your vocals. your adlibs are MEGA quiet i ain't evne realize you had em till your second verse.

yvone, you already know your mic is anus. sounds like I'm listening to a clock radio. You could have repaired a lot of that with some EQing, damn I'm so sick of sayin this. your flow is okay, too repetiive though, part of being a well rounded mc is being able to switch your shit up and still be intersting and entertaining. Your adlibs are so low i can barely tell you have em. mad punchins. the last bar couplet shoulda rhymed "words" and "above" don't rhyme, that's the wrong way to send off a verse.

should have faded the song out instead of letting it abruptly fall out, btw, some dialogoe between the two of you on the instrumental portion would have lended a LOT of intimacy to this track, would have sounded liek we had a window to the relationship that you guys were talking about, not to mention break up that huge gap.

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i forgot about this...



....Thank You Sir

tony green -- wat up, this track is str8 it seems sorta cliche with the first line, but its a koo track flow was koo i liked it but nothing exciting...maybe u eed more emotion? sound like ur meaning wat u tryn to say.

yvonne -- hmm i wont take it ez so imma be real, it was aight at best not to be disrspectful but everything u said is something i heard before just in deifferent words in..other words im tryn to say u should find different way to say thingz and ya need to up ya vocab... ur flow is nice no complaints but i guess its tha same for u add more emotion and add vocab to ur trax u got potential girl the beggining of ur verse u was choppy then u actually started flowin so big upz

both of u can elevate just try harder!!

i aint being an ass im just being real accept it anyway u want.....

fo sho..its useful for one to elevate...



thanx:thumbup:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234428

ayt yvonne i gotta admit since las i saw/talked 2 u,u were a bit new wit the whole rhymin thing but dis track was pretty decent 4 a lovey dovey type song i agreebeat was a lil 2 loud other than dat i guess jus keep practicin til ya feel da mic more feel me good cut overall though keep doin ya thang n tony u did kool jus like yvonne work on ya mic skills n dont b afraid 2 rap wut n how u feel bout a song ayt peace check out my shit aint audio yet but it'll get there