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L.I. 08-13-06 09:58 PM

Group A: Serbness (2-0) vs Untold (0-2)
 

If you showed last week, good.. I'm proud of you. But if you no-showed and were given a second chance DON'T fuck it up. Cause you'll be out. Some have moved up to 2-0 and are looking strong, while some are slumping at 0-2. Whatever the record.. it doesnt clinch anything. You still gotta go at you opponents and take their heads off. This week I want to see everyone show up AND vote. A couple battles had two losers last week due to not voting and leaving links. I'm not hunting for links so post em up or I'm DQing you. Show me somethin this week..

Battler #1: Untold
Battler #2: Serbness

Battles go up Sunday night
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)
5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.

Untold 08-14-06 12:38 AM

check it, dawg!

SerB 08-14-06 02:11 AM

sup sup. check...

Untold 08-15-06 10:00 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike

SerB 08-16-06 03:49 PM

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
.
.
I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him

Untold 08-17-06 10:01 PM

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one

and if you haven't seen scarface, then don't bother voting.

g/l 'n pz.

Untold 08-17-06 11:46 PM

yo, peeps start votin on diz shit!

Aeral 08-17-06 11:51 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
lol, nice wordplay


look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
lol, decent shit


I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
ehh, i feel this could be worded better.

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
this was ok, worded pretty good.

v- untold, both his punches hit.. serb i wasn't really feeling your second one, so he gets this for consistency.

SerB 08-18-06 01:54 AM

Nice feed. Good drop untold.



lets get some more votes.

Multi 08-18-06 05:00 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
NICE WORDPLAY HERE...LOL


look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
LMAO.. NICE FEED SOBE


I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
MEH, WORDING WAS CHOPPY

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
IIGHT, I GET IT

v/UNTOLD... STARTED OFF CLOSE, THEN UNTIZZLE EDGED IT WITH HIS CLOSING PUNCH... NICE SHIT FROM BOTH

Untold 08-18-06 05:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Artistik.
look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
LMAO.. NICE FEED SOBE

lmao! thanx for the vote, art! but yo.. i think u meant to say Serb and not Sobe.. but yo, thanx.

and good drop to, serb.

upz.

SerB 08-18-06 06:26 PM

Let's get some more votes man.

SerB 08-18-06 06:32 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233429

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233417

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233435

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233421

Texxus 08-18-06 06:52 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike

-- easy concept 2 think of, but good wordplay

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from

-- lol, i like this one

I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him

-- ehh, didnt really feel this...weak

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one

-- nice punch

this was close but serb's 2nd punch messed it up for him.2 good punches vs 1 good punch....nice battle vote-Untold

SerB 08-19-06 02:12 AM

uppin for more votes/.

Stanza. 08-19-06 01:32 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
nice wordplay


look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
decent shit


I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
ehh

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
ok

overall I think That this was a good battle th best Ive read so far and I think it goes to

V/ Untold

~Luciano~ 08-19-06 05:14 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
~~LOL..WHAT?..No man No..~~

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
~~Lol..this was pretty nice serb~~
.
I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
~~U had the win..and fucked it up righ there~~

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
~~Lol..nice way 2 finish~~

Untold u started out sloppy wit a shitty ass punch
then u finished it pretty strong..good closer
left me with a lasting impression

Serb..u also came out swingin hard..u had the lead
but your 2nd punch was so ass it blew it
gotta come more consistent

v/Untold

SerB 08-19-06 08:11 PM

Man.

Do you guys even get the word play on the 2nd punch?

Tortilla Chip 08-19-06 10:36 PM

ok, i wasn't feeling untolds first punch really ..it was ok at best for me. his second punch was pretty tiight though. Serbs first punch was good too, but then his second punch just didn't seem worded good enough, it was missing something for me and didn't really come direct at all.

both did good, but i'd say untold was a bit more consistant

v. Untold

Dickard. 08-19-06 11:31 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
-Lol nice wordplay hit hard-
u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
-Good humor nd hard hitting shit-

vs.

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
-okaay lol good punch funny-
.
I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
-meh coulda been more creative-

v/untold coming wittier and more consistant with his punches

1

J. Luth 08-20-06 12:14 AM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
ehh too simple. decent
u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
ok.... not bad

v.s.

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
ehh it's aiight
I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
ehh nah, i get what you tryin' to say, but didn't connect

weak battle. Untold came ehh, didn't come his harded. But his last punch was pretty cooish. Serbness was aiight. He had right ideas, just struggled to word them nice. So I got untold winning this by a bit

v/Un

SlicKnife 08-20-06 07:33 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike
- cool at best...dont kno, was missin something
u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one
- lol, dope.....liked this

vs.

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from
- im sure Ive ready something similar, but yeh...this was nice, funny
.
I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him
- nah, dont like this

I got Untold winning this, was better overall

Vote - Untold

In-Vision 08-20-06 07:52 PM

i can beat u wit rhymez in a fight, dyke
but if we Tyson, it's cause ur bitin like mike

i like the wordplay..but not feelin it as far as a punch...if you want to win..a tie shouldn't be possible...i also sensed sort of a personal there..cause the dude is obviously obsessed with mike tyson

look kid, your shitty text won't get you a tie - you dumb?
with punches so bad that ethopian's wouldn't even feed from

you fed from his last punch...so..you sort of contradicted yourself...but..it's still a good punch


I'll beat your ASS UP untill its sore by the limb
untold played with my foot - till he put past behind him

stupid

u aint a gangsta, so i gotta beat this dun
scarface gotta scar from eatin pussy.. u got urs from bein one

does he have one?? i feel like if you said you'll get yours for being one...would be more effective..because..unless he really has a scar..it's pretty pointless..decent punch still

v/UNTOLD... i liked the ethiopian line serb...but untold came with 2 decent to good punches..you had 1

DaTrusHurtz 08-20-06 11:46 PM

Untold WINS 1-2
Serbness LOSES 2-1


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