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Budget Baller
can't do links for some reason in this library but i critiqued
Mary Jane by Default Hold Ya Head by Luciano.. check da shyt out if ya don't believe me... I.G. aka da Budget Baller!!!! just click da SC sig and it's da top track! I got you IG.... my track was locked too... juss gotta post links... nahmean... :) |
Rediculous track i already told you that .......great concept flow was serious on this big boi........we gotta git r done on the remix version cuz this shit is hoottttttttt
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nice track...i can def feel this one.....the beat is old so im eh bout it......the song is nice....a few production things can be upped....but this is some shit that people can relate to....good shit
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you already know what i thought about the track.... the line about "1 gold chain and i dare a nigga to touch it"... lol.... that shit had me rolling... i mean... all in all... well mixed... and executed.... shit was thorough son... lookin forward to possibly being on the remix... *wink,wink*....
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gotta rise this slept onnnnnnnnnnn
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links are coming.... i just got my inet back...no more library bs
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aye cuz that shit is dope... that my life story this a track i can really feel... ballin on a budget..had the dope lyrics down... and a bomb ass flow... hook was kinda wierd cuz it was panned... kinda messed me up through the head phones but still sounded mad nice... i used this beat for a diss long ago.. shits tight.. good looks. o.y.d.
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werd.... werd... preciate da feed... yo rey i'll get on that rtf soon enough brethren... been mad busy looking for a place to rent out in VA... tryna find a roommate and shyt out there is mindboggling...lol...
but yo, can i get some non-OYD heads to drop some feed on this.... i know y'all dudes be kinda mad at us and shyt at times but for realz... i'll return the favor and shyt |
only critique i have is that the vocals on the hook are too low. actually even on the verses, but besides that im feelin it
good shit * Shots fly* |
ok the beat is on some funky shit make ya wanna boogie lol
i think the vocals are a little bit quiet hate or love it you get louder love i got one gold chain lol your really quiet on this verse the hook is louder on this part i think that or the last verse was jsut sooo quiet this verse is better on the volume overall im loving the message in the track shit everyone been there if the volume was fixed it be mad dope id dl it and if you could add some bass in the beat itd sound nice on the system |
werd up... thx for da love... omma fix that shyt one of these days...lol
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listening through the shit i always do
i liked the first verse, kept it real. shouldnt have went with those extreme pans on the hook though, or at least do a third layer and leave it centered. Turn your vocals up, EQ your lows and mids. I like the second verse as much as the first. third verse was a nice touch cuz one more verse of "hi, I'm IG and I ball on a budget" woulda killed the novelty of the song. nice rhymescheme and what not, nothing wrong with any of that so i don't have much else to say lol. 1 |
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i actually thought about doing that shyt with the hook...lol... yeah... still need a lil work on the volume levels and shyt.... lmao@"hi, I'm IG and I ball on a budget"... you a wild dude, son btw... how was ya atl trip... i tried to holla atcha but my inet was down and shyt... just got it back up |
^yeah i got at you about the trip in that thread about it actually. holla on the flipside
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to da tizzop! let's get that feed coming
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oh shit... love how you come in. beat is ill. 4 tv's. lol Vocals need to be upped a bit tho man. can't hear you too clearly. Beat is fuckin' ill. Did I say that already? lol holy shit. vocals got even lower LOL.... but i liked how you change it from left to right... lol @ 1 gold chain. nice shit. but from what i can hear man, i like this. your flow is tight. got an ill voice. dope shit man. we gotta collab sometime. lol
overall, nice track, man. go easy on the panning next time. haha but overall tight shit. stay up man. 8.8/10 RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233921 EZ |
good shyt... bout RTF all those that i missed! back to da top! and yeah i know... gotta fix the volume levels!
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back to da top one last time!!!
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^what's good with a collab yo? oh, and RTF :shoot:
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i'm moving to VA tomorrow so i ain't sure when i'll be able to record again... but i'm down for the get down once i get set up again!... i'll holla!... and RTF!...lol
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Listenin' ...beat is pretty nice...verse is pretty nice...not as much hype as I wanted but this is pretty hot I could see it on like a green lantern mixtape...maybe turn up the vocals a lil more...flow dont fall off..delivery is nice...presence cud be upped...feelin how you did this...a flip on tha shit...i feel u B...hook is pretty hot...if ya had sum scratches goin down up in the hook shit wud be hot...im feelin ya lyrics...feelin tha last verse tha most...titanic line hot...flow dnt rlly fall off in this track..like how you had the multis at the end..feeling the multis..but i dnt know mixin dnt work wit it nah mean...if this was studio recored = hot mixtape track..1..yo can you rtf of "Oh No" in my sig..thanks
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bout to hit the road man.... but i'll hit ya up when i get to va...be easy and thx for da luv..oh and as for ya sig....
i KNOW kweli... used to kick it at his crib and cypher with my boys... met da bush babees, the cella dwellas - (me and UG went to school together), nice and smooth (well half of nice and smooth... smooth bee), tigger, busta rhymes, dylan (my lil brother and him are homies)... and a few more that i'm forgetting right now...lol *edit* damn... how did i forget one of the biggest dudes in the industry?!!!! I've met with Rush.... not Rush entertainment...lol.... but the big man, himself... Russel Simmons (yeeeeaaaarrrrs ago....lol) |
^^That wasnt for you my nig tho..but do you b..I got peoples like keith murray comin thru..oh and another cat which I cant promise about...but he a god in the underground scene..but my mixtape will prove it...do u
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^^i know...lol.... keep doing ya thang, man... and kats need to stop sleeping on keith... his style is raw and i love how he don't give a fuck about what the industry thinks is hot... i'll holla atcha , man...
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Ay man. This was a pretty dope track. The whole concept was unique and amazing. Cant wait till i get indept wioth my audio so i can start contending with his. But back to the business. You did an awsome thing everything was right for the track. Keep up the good work man
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werd...good shyt man... i'm actually surprised that i'm still getting feed on this... glad ya felt it man... get that buzz going in ATL and see if ya boys like it... 'preciate ya, folk
be ez man |
i guess it's time to retire this song and crank out a new one...lol
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