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Untold 08-22-06 02:53 AM

Group E: Aeral (3-0) vs. N. Tavarez (3-0)
 

If you showed last week, good.. I'm proud of you. But if you no-showed and were given a second chance DON'T fuck it up. Cause you'll be out. Some have moved up to 2-0 and are looking strong, while some are slumping at 0-2. Whatever the record.. it doesnt clinch anything. You still gotta go at you opponents and take their heads off. This week I want to see everyone show up AND vote. A couple battles had two losers last week due to not voting and leaving links. I'm not hunting for links so post em up or I'm DQing you. Show me somethin this week..

Battler #1: Aeral
Battler #2: N. Tavarez

Battles go up Sunday night
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)
5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.

Aeral 08-22-06 03:39 AM

dope shit. . . .

N.Tavarez 08-22-06 09:16 AM

yep .

Aeral 08-23-06 11:02 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN

N.Tavarez 08-24-06 12:18 PM

blah no time

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence

ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib

Aeral 08-24-06 03:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sergio.. in 2004
Ya left once before, so coming back is plain evidence
that we want this wack fuck to take Aleve..
...& aint talkin bout pain medicine


Quote:
Originally Posted by NYkali in 2004
wdf! why are you still here,
.........fuckn fag just leave,
dumb fuk! told him my texts a hedbanger
..............And he took 'Aleve'...


Quote:
Originally Posted by .symbol. in 2004
This Is A Big Problem To Cure.. It'll Take More Then Aleve




what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04

Aeral 08-24-06 03:42 PM

posting so people know this is up.

vote up.

N.Tavarez 08-24-06 03:44 PM

meh i wasnt aware, good shit, type overwhelmed this week so GL

Dickard. 08-24-06 04:13 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
Isnt there 10 yards in a first down? good punch worded wrong for that lol
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
Okay not really a punch but more of a statement

vs.

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
Good punch...only 3 ppl used it in like 3 years...its not that played
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
Haha funny shit dude...good punch

V/n. tavarez

for coming more consistant with his punches and not with likea statement.
overall just came harder imo

rtf.

Aeral 08-24-06 05:11 PM

"the whole 9 yards" is a cliche.. i know you need ten yards. hence the set up, lol. just clearing that up.


and btw, i didnt bother to look up every single time that line was used, i found those of the top of my head and went back to verify. i don't wanna sound like im swaying tav so please dont attack me lol, i just figured that it was common sense.

nonetheless, good battle dude.

0-1, upping

N.Tavarez 08-24-06 05:13 PM

its cool man
i've been so sidetracked i throw up whatever came to mind
but WE need to do a full battle one day aeral your on all the sites i visit lol
safe

Aeral 08-24-06 05:55 PM

lol, word man. we'll battle in prba at one point or another.

Sobe. 08-24-06 06:24 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN

^^seen shit like this

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence

^^cool i guess

ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib

^^lol, nice

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04

^^coulda made this better

v/NT for the flip the bird line

TonyTone 08-24-06 09:38 PM

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
yea as we all already know...played lol
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
pretty good

vs

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
iight could use some better wording though
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
sorta basic but true

well nt had one good punch n one bad while aeral had 2 decent punches
im going w/ consistency here

v/ aeral

NRG 08-25-06 06:54 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
played concept, but u executed it nicely
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
lol, nice feed here

vs.

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
played, as shown, so nah
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
lol, not bad i guess

i had aeral taken this battle for sure, N you had an under decent line, and one that was just played as aeral proved, gotta come more fresh to win battles,
aeral came with a good punch, and nice feed one, so my vote goes to aeral, for havin 2 punches i liked.

v/ Aeral

FlowIntelligent. 08-25-06 07:03 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
^^good concept alright punch
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
^^another good concept wasnt feeling the wording

vs.

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
^^this was a good punch here
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
^^i liked this also .. witty good concept


Aerals punches were good but i felt they coulda been worded better, lost some effectiveness but nonetheless still a couple good punches. Tav had some good punches both were witty with good concepts


Vote: N. Tavarez

Untold 08-25-06 08:40 PM

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
..naw son. shitz madd play'd..
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
..lolz! @ first i didn't get this, only cause u had "so for you" where i thought ur rhyme would be. then i got pointed out, it wasn't the rhyme. so not bad. pretty cool..

vs.

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
..a lil play'd. i've seen punches similar to this. not bad though..
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
..lolz, nice. i liked it. ya revised old wordplay and made it dope..

tav had one good punch, while aeral had 2 good ones. hmm.. this wasn't too hard. tav, ur first punch was mad play'd and the wordin on ya second one almost caused me to even miss the rhyme. work on that, yo. aeral, some witty shit. i really liked ya feed. thats what won u the match, imo.

v/ aeral

Aeral 08-26-06 01:25 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233786
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233770
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233776
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233785

i'll get the last one later..

JTR 08-26-06 03:29 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
The wordplay was really nice but it made no sense, rofl

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
nice
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
lmfao, nice bar, pretty original

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
oooooohhhhhh, that was hot

Still Aeral first bar made no sense and the second was not very creative cuz well it was hard but simple at the same time he just fed/flipped a concept wich is simple to do. N.Tav came dope with that bird line and the other even if it was played was pretty cool, so I have to v/N.Tavarez

Aeral 08-26-06 04:42 PM

first down = first dead.. on the ground/ w.e.


3-3. upping

DaTrusHurtz 08-26-06 05:36 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
I feel this punch was worded a bit too statementish and ya coulda easily fixed that. Good concept tho, just not that harsh

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
would be okay, but i'd seen this concept before a bunch times even before aeral posted the links
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
structure of this confused me at first... i used a flip the bird punch awhile ago, but this one was much better than the one i wrote, good shit

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
nice feed, hits hard

Good battle here, both of you had a weaker punch, but then a really nice punch. I got Aeral slightly edgin' this tho with the dope feed.

Vote - Aeral

N.Tavarez 08-26-06 08:06 PM

DTH i gots no access if i dont drop links ill drop double links next week

Aeral 08-27-06 03:39 PM

5th link negroids

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233814

J. Luth 08-27-06 04:12 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
word, not bad. pretty coo
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
this was tight. nice feed. like it

v.s.

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
pretty coo
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
rofl... this was illy

Overall this was tight battle. both came pretty nice. That flip the bird line was pretty ill tho, I think it was the line that won it for NT. But Aerel came nice tho. that first line could of been hotter with a lil better wording. but it was still coo. good battle y'all

v/NT

Daubs 08-27-06 05:31 PM

ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib

VS

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04

thats what it came down too, the feed worked well and hit hard and the bird line was clever, Tav didnt come as hard as he normally does and i think overall Aer got this,

good battle lads.

V./aer

L.I. 08-27-06 08:46 PM

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
lol nice flip
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
haha i liked the feed but needs better wording

vs.

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
nice
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
decent

V/ aeral.. loved the feed line

DaTrusHurtz 08-27-06 08:47 PM

That decides it, nice battle fellas

Aeral WINS 4-0
N. Tavarez LOSES 3-1


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