FEATURED TRACK: YoO**NEW*TRACK**FROM YA BOYS MGD EBIRCS AN EL REY
 

listehning good to hear ebircs back.........flow is on point these beats are pretty much his .......second cat was aight the adlibs were to loud and corny at times but i see u commin up over all aight nothin standout......rey ya voice fits a track but there are going to be timres that the off beat flow wont always work...............good ish

Ebrics is on some of that sick shit as usual...good flow and the lytics is dope....second dude was on beat that made me happy... i unnobout u voice but that happens.. like tone said adlibs is off.. rey... your off beat... i unno if that was purpose... coulda been a dope ass flow... if it was just a lil on more.. your pressence is illy...so is ya voice and ya lyrics....nice shit

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Good looks on the feed y'all

alright beat
im guessing cho didnt pick it
its pretty cool
cho might be a little too loud but liking the delivery cocky lines fit your delivery well
lol at two mismatched socks idk that line def stood out nice adlibs
ok you need to add some bass or somethign casue it doesnnt fit at all lyrics are pretty cool nto feeling them as much as chos but yea flow was off a little bit but yea add some bass
el rey yea bad mixing so flow is off a little not too much though jsut barelynoticable emotion wise idk cho came totally different then both of yall i think he set the bar and yall came a little under
jsut remember when yoru collabing try to match the fellow emcees instead of trying to shine

Thanks for the feedback.....

Uppin' people sleepin yo....

beats pretty hot...

1st cat - voice is kinda annoyin not hatin just sayin... lol @ my cousin vinnie and two youts

2nd - flow falls off at points and the ad libs we're too loud

3rd - voice does fit this better than anyone else but the flow is offff your just jam packin tooo many words on a line and tryint to say them faster don't help

overall - sub par track fellas i can't really comment on lyrics or rhyme scheme cause it was all mad basic, but i hope to here some better shit

stay up

*dont dream of women*

Beat: It's straight, I like the piano in the background.

1st Verse: Flow's straight, not much I can complain about there. "I walk from bar to bar like a zombie at night" <-- was feeling that line, the "My Cousin Vinnie" line was dope too, 'cuz I actually refer to that movie as "the one with the 2 yutes" to some people.

2nd Verse: Never heard Vato XL before, but he was straight. Style wasn't really my bag, but it was decent nonetheless. Delivery was alright, it would sound better if you turned your doubles up. Lyrics were alright too.

3rd Verse: Never heard Rey on the mic before either, but he was alright too. Lyrics were coo, "woman-sized breasts" haha. I'll edit some more feed in later after a few more listens.

So yeah, overall this was good. LIke I said to Rey, I'll edit more feed in later, but till then keep up the good work guys.

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Will return feed yo good looks y'all

thx ppls..............

and willa !! i "DID pick this beat !!

1st MC - vocals are different not really feelin it kinda sounds like Cho dunno if ebirics is a alias.......but ya got the essentials down pat thoe...

2nd MC - feelin ya delivery and vocals.......flow wuz on beat.......but um sumtin to critique on is ya quality fam...but nice verse

3rd MC - dunno which person said that ur words were packed cuz they weren't........ya flow wuz on u spit like 2 syllables slow then a lot real fast.....it sounded strate........nice verse homie.....

pz

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Cho is a GOD.....

and my voice is bad ass..............

and actual6y "Cho" was the alias...Ebircs been my emcee name way b4 cho

the intro is okay...



verse 1..nice voice on this...i liked the irony on the lyrics..'its verbal abuse when i'm coping new suites'..caught my attention there..nice cool flow...




lmao@ verse 2..nice flow..cool lyrics with humor..u had a cool delivery...


verse 3...u rushed ur words and made ur verse sound outta flow...sounds like a freestyle...


umm...wow its over..so fast...

Thanks for the feed everybody my voice the shit....makes bitch's get wet lmao....ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....1 :thumbup:

listening...

verse one... basic ebircs right here... had a few funny lines... the bruce bruce shyt and the socks line...lol... flow was on point... ya vocals are always a tad loud though... basically, it's what i expected from my man E... surprise me with a new flow next time... not saying ya flow is bad or nothing.... just wanna see ya change it up... would be pretty damn refreshing to hear ya do maybe something with multi's or even a slower flow...\

verse 2... hmm... ya verse didn't match up to what ebircs did... seemed like it wasn't put together as well as the first verse... you need to make your lines lead into each other.... you had pauses where the verse shoulda been more fluid which took away from ya verse as a whole.... you also stretched a few lines to make it fit the beat... ya overall ideas were there for you and i see what you were trying to accomplish but you fell short a little bit... a little more thought into HOW you drop your lyrics will take you a long way... i'd say all you need is a lil more time and effort and you're on your way to bigger and better things

verse... picks up where ebircs left off.. main thing that stood out though was all the deep breaths you were taking... i can hear it clearly through my speakers.... it was like, after every line there was a deep breath... this coulda been fixed simply by using the silence function... it's already been said that ya didn't really do any editing so i ain't gon harp on that any longer.... also... ya flow seemed a lil rushed at times.... the beat was somewhat smooth and ya had a choppy style flow... not the right beat for that flow homie.... but.... verse was still decent.... on a different beat it woulda been hot...

overall... decent track... coulda been better with a tad bit more effort

oh... and the beat was pretty damn decent too... not sure if i woulda used it... but it works for you guys

Thanks for the Feed yo will RTF keep it 100

Listenin'..beat is hot feelin the I keep it thug niggah...

Ebrics: ayo squash tha beef btw i aint got time wit that b..flow was hot on this..multis are nice..you got some hot lyrics in here..delivery is decent..

Vato XL: Feelin ya delivery..my typa shit...adlibs too loud tho...flow was nice..lyrics pretty good..real hot presence nah mean..

El Rey: Yoo I can tell uze been listenin to immortal technique you have that...typa delivery...like uh uh uh uh..and uh-uh-uh nah mean...feelin it..sumtimes u packin 2 much in tho b but flow was pretty solid..delivery was hot..u findin ya voice now b..

Real nice underground joint...feelin it fo sho yall..nice drop..

beef???

bro...not to be ignorent...or act like i have a net rep...but i have no idea who you are......1st time i even seen yer name...

Lmao bircs man u funny son...that dude is konvict wit a different name....i aint know y'all had beef like that....