9th Degree and Shaolin - Wack Ni99az
 

Shaolin's one of the founding members of the group that I'm in, Ill Intentionz (since 2002). This is a diss track to the "other white rapper" in town (he's 25% black), D. Thriller. He's been beefing with me since 8th grade (2000) and beefing with my crew since we formed. He's just a big joke to us, but recently he said some shit about me on my group's soundclick. Now I hadn't said anything in like 2 years, but I thought I could do another one for old times sake. The intro and outro will help you understand it a little better. And speaking of which, yes, that is actually him, and the voicemails are 100% real.

1st Verse - Shaolin
2nd Verse - 9th Degree
Chorus - Both (for obvious reasons lol)
Beat - "Wack Ni99az" by Consequence

Shaolin feat. 9th Degree - Wack Ni99az

I know in some parts my vocals might be mixed a little low, but it's not really that bad, right? Lol, enjoy.

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ok im'a leave bad feed,seen as im first to post, that way i can start the trend of you getting nothing but bad feed.


4real though.......
intro's cool, makes me want to see if anyone called me.
First verse has solid quality, flows cool, beats simple, this track has a old school feel to it, based on the beat. felt the first verse, had some on point flow and lyrics.

hooks weak, didnt feel it at all bro. needs some compression and more emotion
umm, wtf, my player stopped , oh wait, my internet conncetion wouldnt allow me to play wackness :)

second verse flow is ok, emotion is lacking, good lyrics and punches, just emotion lacking bro.
again fuck that hook, not feeling it at all man

overall its a decent track, just a few touch ups and it will be hott with two T's. -_-

alright
im jsut leaving feed on your verse
flow fell off in one part besides that it was on lyrically it was ok needs upped on the volume some more emotion adlibs dont sound quite right
jsut some minor shit that needs fixing
props on dropping didnt5 knwo you did audio
sorry abotu not opening this i left earlier :)

Thanks for the feed so far, upping for more. I'll gladly return any favors.

I like this first guy.. he aint very hype but he got dope lines... but he brags bout his scion hahaha......chorus is aint bad.... it could be better...your verse can flow... but you aint got that much emotion... some parts got good pressence just on and off throughout i like this though.. didnt know you knew how to actually rap...good shit... just fix da hook verses is straight good shit

yea i agree wit J Summers wit the first dude..not very energetic but his lines are aight..LMAO @ the chorus..-_-..your verse was good the flow was a lil shakey tho..umm you got a pop filter? if not invest in one cause somewhere i heard some p's clip the mic..umm you right the verse was like up and down wit the sound..ill give u some tips on how to fix that..and no..not hard limitin lol..umm other then that i liked the track man..intro and outro were cool..

lol @ intro..

first dude.. his quality ill. emotion ain't there tho. Could be much more. Delivery pretty coo. like his lyrics. got a nice flow too. rtickin' like a time bomb..

hook......... i like it..... LOL he sound liek 50 on hook.

9th, you ain't even worth the pencil I'm writing with. lmao i liked that. flow coo, go off on some points, but throughout it's good. lyrics are ill tho. Delivery coo. vocals a lil loud. But i like this verse better than first.

hook again..

lol @ dude sounding like 50 tho. in hook and outro..

but can't really understand outro shit.

but overall this wasn't that bad man. beat was ill tho. good shit. lyrics were nice. good diss. nice track overall man. hook could use some effects to vocals to make it stand out more.

but not bad. 8.3/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...5389post2825389

*One Shot*

beat is cool..i like it


verse 1: yup cool punches..nice flow..delivery is good..emotion was just iight



hook...its okay..simple and




verse 2 : yeah u had nice flow..punches were decent..quality was a lil blah...but meh as long as upass ur message over thats what matters more...



umm..i didnt even care to listen to the voicemails..a dude got issues with u and still keeps calling?..wow..he needs to either squash the beef like stated on the track or get a life...a hobby!

He's asking to squash the beef, but already went wayyyyyyy past the line when he made a diss track about Shaolin's 1 year-old daughter. So he's shook now, and wants to make sure none of us are gonna whup his ass again.

All the good things have been said, so like, I wont waste time... But generally good everything.

Issues are I think just 9ths vocals in verse and hook... As in the quality/amplitude of them, not the lyrics/flow/voice etc.

Upping again...

rtf mu fucka :shoot:

LOL @ the voice mails. Word, I already told you what I thought of this on msn. But i'll add some more. I think you're voice sounds differant from the last time I hear one of your tracks. Honestly, I find you have less emossion and presence. Your voice was harder, deeper, grimier, it sounded like you were angry, I liked that, it suited you. "You aint worth the pencil i'm using to write this" "You only talk shit on your myspace bulletin" Lmfao. Nice man, you're never without quotables

ok the beat was nice did like it

sha u had good flow could been a bit louder and clearer but it was still great

9th u sound aight, flowd great, lines were great

intro was aight

outro was long but i go tthe picture

overall work on the clearness but i say song was a

8/10

great job

Listen'n

Lol wit the verizon joint dog i gots verizon too....stay in the network...

1st: Lyrics is dope yo...on some real shit though u need to get a lil more comfortable on the mic...but its coo...flow was ok, for this joint...delivery was aight coulda bin upped...i think ur presence coulda bin upped more too...coulda bin more aggressive too... u was dissin someone right!?! but u did ur thing fam...

HoOk: Coulda bin done differently so its ok...But suited the point u was gettin acrosss

2nd: I didnt like ur flow on this lol...i dont know maybe its just me homie but u sounded kinda funny....but at the same time it seemed real cocky....but ur delivery was there...along wit the presence more punchlines too which i like that my dude...quality was ok...u coulda done some things different...lyrics was dope though... :thumbup:

HoOk: Same

Over-all
Nice track my dudes...mixin was off a lil bit...but hey u only get better wit mo' practice...but other than 9th u had crazy punchlines better than shaolin...but shaolin had the better presence in a sense either way y'all made a soild track...an good creativity for the intro an outro lol....wit the cell phone voice mail....my ratin 8.5/10 keep droppin y'all holla at yo boy..1 :thumbup:

intro with the voicemails is different. thats cool.

first verse is hot. i like that laid back style. lyrics were hot. flow was cool as well. didnt fall off too much from what i heard

the hook sucks. honestly there is nothing cool about it

second verse the best thing about that was the lyrics. mic prescence was weak. but you had some pretty cool lyrics


overall this song was alright. it wouda been much better with a different chorus

hey can you rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545

soundclick seems to be down, I'll get at this later

Dude you performed this song for me the other day remember...or maybe you were drunk but either way i already listened to it. The flow for both was okay, i didn't really care for a whole lot of the punches, then again i was present for alot of you guys battles at school. Hard to compare, chorus was ok. The intro and outro were pointless to me since you couldn't make the dude look anymore like a bitch than he already is. Yea RTF on the track i'ma have up soon. Peace like whoa

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...264#post3072264 RTF LIKE WHOA YO

*listening*

the beat is pretty nice.. a lil low in the back, but it's coo.

lmao @ the chorus............

the intro.. can hardly hear & same w/ the outro.

the lyrics were nice.. coo diss. had a lil somethin like this before, but anywayz this track was pretty coo, liked it.

good shit yo. liked both verses.

Word.....this was good for a diss track man. Punches were there from both dudes. And like I told you 9th, just raise the vocals up a bit and you'd be good man....

Nice shit poopyhead :thumbup: