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New SPuL!! "One Shot" Produced by Ansane(DROP LINKS!!)
word up. real shit here sonnnnn.
Intro: SPuL First verse: SPuL Hook: SPuL Second verse: SPuL Third verse: SPuL Beat: Ansane Productions www.soundclick.com/spul LINKS: 1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233886 2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233868 *valid links* |
1st Verse - man i'm feelin wut u sayin bout people tellin ya to stop......ya lyrics are nice on this.....flow is fine........yea ya delivery helps out da verse
Hook - good hook.....sums up da message of ya track 2nd Verse - ya lyrics again are nice......ya vocals nice too.....ya flow kinda started soundin like Eminem, the 4th bar to like da 6th........ Hook - Same as above 3rd Verse - flow on this verse is da best........i'm feelin this verse the most.......nice drop homie overall - i would mos definitely bump this..........keep droppen SPuL..... pz ~1~ |
^word appreciate the feed man.
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blah @ people not RTF ~_~
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^yo man appreciate the feed f'real. drop a link and I RTF whenever you got one man. thanks up
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Yo this beat is a hot ansane cut...
I like how you kept yo style throughout these typa tracks..im feeling the story line in this track..its intelligently woven which is good..i like how u was tellin the story of you nah mean..hook is mad catchy..lyrically this is tight.. and Im feelin the way u doin original joints now nah mean..flow is hot..and i can hear u perfect quality is hot..i like how u mixed the hook fam... ...dont see any prolems in this.. 9.8/10 hot *if you want* |
Listening:
Beat is nice.....flow comes out good on this! nice verses! Lyrics are sweeet bro! good story typa ish. The hook is like that Em song Lose Yourself lol! but this makes the track hella better SPuL! keep it up bro! uno. |
ansane is decent sometimes monotonous but the vibe of the hook definately matched where u were going with the song its funny sometimes when u hear a song with a hook and has zero to do with the song...flow is decent sometimes alil monotone but its cool definately droppin the carson jet sound haha...........holla back at my track ....................................
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^word appreciate all the feed. all favors returned
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this is the best beat I've heard from ansane...its very dre mimicish but still ill...ok spul wit a little storyline...thats new, flow opens good...but really gets in stride midway thru...hook is good...some addlibs would heightened it but its cool...flow on second verse is a better executed version of first verse but u switch it at 8th bar to a new rhythm good shit...storyline I'm feeling cuz its you, the most of you I've heard in a track....ok 3rd verse starts wit a new flow good shit...in this verse a trailing echo on the words u really dragged out woulda been ill...this is solid track...beat choice is a huge plus...song is laidback but has a energy...however I noticed you in that brag/ hip hop phase...where majority ya tracks is either bragging or about hip hop...u still in that phase where u don't know jus yet how to put more of yourself in your music...we all go thru it but this is def a step in the right direction...keep experimenting man....good shit....1
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^word thanks for feed man
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wow .
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wus good spul?... told you i got you son...lol...
on the real... this is deffo the...no... THE ... best ansane beat i've EVER heard.... i mioght have to jack this and do my own jump off to it...lol anyways... the first thing i noticed was the similarities to Lose Yaself... especially in the hook! verses were well mixed... nice clarity on all three... flow was a lil ehhh on the first verse at the beginning but picked up nicely... track seemed real honest... only thing i would say is get a lil more original with it... it's like trip said.... you still tryna come into your own... and once you find that spot where ya need to be you'll be amazed at the kinda stuff you can write.... for me.... it takes someone to get me angry or starting of the shyt talking to bring out the battlemode in me where the lines just get set to annihilation... i also do pretty good on tracks that involve personal conflict and truth... you need to find out what makes you tick... what makes you dig deep for the right words and the right beats... you gotta acraft each rhyme... hell, each verse likre it's da most important story in the world... like it's something YOU lived thru or experienced... paint them pictures man.... and expand on ya topics... we all do more than just talk to the opposite sex, kick rhymes, and buy clothes and accessories... there's so much more out there... but yo... you did ya thing and ya rode the beat well.... just find ya inner Spul and let that shyt shine on ya next track! |
^word yo, that was soome deep feedback there man. appreciate that a lot. And lol I didn't mean for it to sound like Lose Yourself. haha but thanks man. That really helped me. appreciate it. props... whenever you get your shit poppin' again, holla.
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Listen'n ah ha lol i was gonna rock this beat a minute ago but i aint do it...
Shit is sick 1st: Delivery sick.... presence on point...like you swazzzyy type flow u know what it is...content nice...emotion was there... HoOk: Like this dope kid...content official 2nd: Better than the first...lyrics is nutz man but ive always like ur lyrics everything fits something i need to work on hahahahaha....sike! delivery official.. HoOk: Same 3rd: Not as good as the 2nd but cocky...like that delivery bout this verse...got the angermangement in u lol....but ur lyrics deffinitly shine better than the second u had more to say ..... but the way u kicked the second was dope... HoOk: Same Over-all Nice mix kid everything blended well which i neva see that problem when i listen to ur shit man...vocals on point ab-libs on point not louder so they over-ride...over all concept of the track was the shit...job well done my dude...Keep it 100 an stay droppin... Ratin 9/10 :thumbup: |
^word that's dope feedback man. appreciate it. props
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