Lyricly Gifted vs M. Tav
 

10 lines
blind spit
hour drop
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Check in by: 08-30-06 at 02:04 PM

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lyricly gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-06 02:06 PM.

who spits first me or you ...........................

hurry up and check in so we can start dis battle im trying to get a quick win before i get off

M. Tav has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-06 02:18 PM.

it dont matter who goes first
blind spit if you want to

wat is a blind spit im new to dis stuff

oh well i will just spit

Im so fast with the flow leavin some tongues twisted
Your Spelling wrong lyricly, so shows your ungifted
I missed it, the part were you said that you would win it
you didnt, my flow so fast its swiping up your women (wi min)
You think you got the fire, but your shit's so bad so
he's prolly talking bout his avy when he says he has hoes
SO sad bro, your back's broke, with flow so slick
I flick little bitch hoes like the bro so quick
with more clicks to spare i dont care shows over
the day that you beat me's the day i go sober

M.Tav set up da battle like he was gonna win/
lets see if his weak lines pay off n the end/

u dont have a win n dont think its gonna change/
u can tell dis dude sux just look at his name/

im gonna murder dis cat n just ten lines/
he gonna send me messages sayin teach me how to rhyme/

he not gonna be satisfied till' he layin in a coffin/
my bullets will leave him headless like he was the horsemen/

to take a W i dont even need this last line/
its your turn pussy make sure u take ur time

uppin for votes

votes please.. uppin............................................. ..........................................

Voted For: M. Tav

Aight i dont think i need to say much for this vote.


Im so fast with the flow leavin some tongues twisted
Your Spelling wrong lyricly, so shows your ungifted
^ NICE PERSONAL...

overall that one line won the battle..
Lyrically or..lyricly you had no hard punches and some shit dont even make sense...

Voted For: M. Tav

Im so fast with the flow leavin some tongues twisted
Your Spelling wrong lyricly, so shows your ungifted
Simple punch...really weak and played
I missed it, the part were you said that you would win it
you didnt, my flow so fast its swiping up your women (wi min)
Meh okay attempt nothing good
You think you got the fire, but your shit's so bad so
he's prolly talking bout his avy when he says he has hoes
Good personal..wording coulda been worked with
SO sad bro, your back's broke, with flow so slick
I flick little bitch hoes like the bro so quick
More of a statement than a punch
with more clicks to spare i dont care shows over
the day that you beat me's the day i go sober
Okay..yeah just no
Overal: This verse was extremley weak Personal attempt was weak as fuck though it was ur only posotive thing for ur verse.

vs.

Nothing worth evaluating.

you should up ur punches and put time into your verse becuz your structure form and eeverything was awefull dude...u need to elevate

v/M. tav.

rtf.

Voted For: M. Tav

with more clicks to spare i dont care shows over
the day that you beat me's the day i go sober
^^ This line was funny 7/10







M.Tav set up da battle like he was gonna win/
lets see if his weak lines pay off n the end/
^^ Pretty basic 6/10

u dont have a win n dont think its gonna change/
u can tell dis dude sux just look at his name/
^ Dident make sence,what does his name have to do with it
overall 4/10 lacks creativity


im gonna murder dis cat n just ten lines/
he gonna send me messages sayin teach me how to rhyme/
Yes, your verse is 10 lines... decent past tense
basic ryme scheme.....5/10

he not gonna be satisfied till' he layin in a coffin/
my bullets will leave him headless like he was the horsemen/
^ Nice punch i liked it, keep workin on those 7/10

to take a W i dont even need this last line/
its your turn pussy make sure u take ur time
^^ ha ha explains why your rap was so basic
an aswsome way to end by explaing your verse so simply 9/10



Over all im giving the win to M tav. i felt he had more creativity and
i could stick with the flow

Lyrically gifted ive been looking at your work and your definatley
elevating, keep it up bro and you will be sicc wit it....

Well im out
Rtf if you wish

OOPS SORRY I MESSED UP HERE IS MY FULL EXPLAINATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Im so fast with the flow leavin some tongues twisted
Your Spelling wrong lyricly, so shows your ungifted
^^ Decent 6/10
I missed it, the part were you said that you would win it
you didnt, my flow so fast its swiping up your women (wi min)
^^ Flows nicley with The first line

You think you got the fire, but your shit's so bad so
he's prolly talking bout his avy when he says he has hoes
^^ Decent personal. could use creativity

SO sad bro, your back's broke, with flow so slick
I flick little bitch hoes like the bro so quick
^^ I really dident get what you ment so i
really cant give you educated feedback bro

with more clicks to spare i dont care shows over
the day that you beat me's the day i go sober
^^ This line was funny 7/10







M.Tav set up da battle like he was gonna win/
lets see if his weak lines pay off n the end/
^^ Pretty basic 6/10

u dont have a win n dont think its gonna change/
u can tell dis dude sux just look at his name/
^ Dident make sence,what does his name have to do with it
overall 4/10 lacks creativity


im gonna murder dis cat n just ten lines/
he gonna send me messages sayin teach me how to rhyme/
Yes, your verse is 10 lines... decent past tense
basic ryme scheme.....5/10

he not gonna be satisfied till' he layin in a coffin/
my bullets will leave him headless like he was the horsemen/
^ Nice punch i liked it, keep workin on those 7/10

to take a W i dont even need this last line/
its your turn pussy make sure u take ur time
^^ ha ha explains why your rap was so basic
an aswsome way to end by explaing your verse so simply 9/10



Over all im giving the win to M tav. i felt he had more creativity and
i could stick with the flow

Lyrically gifted ive been looking at your work and your definatley
elevating, keep it up bro and you will be sicc wit it....

Well im out
Rtf if you wish

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This was feedback posted for M. Tav
 

i'll battle you for name rights...........its just too close to be getting confused with you ass for

Voted For: M. Tav

ok both came pretty weak lyrically but m tav had 2 personals in his verse so he took the punches
flow you8 both came cool no complaints m had multis so i was feeling that
no one had metaphores bot hof you could work on that