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Mystic. vs TheSinnister
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10-40 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic: Fighting to die 3-0 tko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-31-06 at 04:52 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired battle win |
TheSinnister has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-06 12:21 AM.
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Aight Man im droppin tonight.............................
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I wrote to parts to this, So i hope You guys enjoy it! (Part One) Rosemary nods force upon my grave, No remorse for the decoy in The Garden of braves Undermined by age, A toy of the lord to dominate In life a slave , Death's joy, A chase in the wind Watching Weak fragile leaves one by one descend AN please Ammend ther's no breath nor'less victory Im seeing new prosperity And Lifes No Destiny No Unity Of Death Just Picture pure mysery (Part 2) As far as I can see Only Illusion's of Depenance A state of great 'Suffering with zero decendence My hero Reverse Me! God please Turn out the light Ready for some action with stacks of Dynamite High level satisfaction, Slippin out of sight Explodin', reloadin' Beholding no fear nor fright Shots ringin',Wounds stinging hit N'run tonight Sneak attack N'packed No future's lookin'bright Feedback appreciated....Thanks!!! |
Richard. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-06 01:04 AM.
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Fighting To Die The Beginning . . . The consistancy of anger is profusely trigured now and then Speech studdering, lack of hearing please speak again Acting like a suspensefull game never getting to it's end Crumbling to pieces vastly right past me it's now my life to mend Friends wont pretend they voice my problem.....to them Them are the people who don't understand the minds of few men Aspiring to die, you question my thoughts but they are so pure My sickness is wanting death..yet my death is my only cure This is my fight galaxies beyond will toon in to watch Untill my breathing is put on hold and suddenly my life stops A conspiracy is what you call it, maybe even a cry for help Though you would not think that if you knew the pain that I felt Each day life gets shorter as do my thoughts are a menace Doctors try to say I'm fine..when really im schizophrenic Thoughts processed slower as my taste for life begins to fade My fight for life has become my Fight to die in less than one day Emotions mixed it's not sufficient enough for me to live Precious life is sacraficed don't argue it's mine to give You won't notice the absence nor will you shed tears to cry Just like I won't fight to live..when im only fighting to die . . . The End |
dopeness....uppin for some votes..................
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Votes please............................................ .....
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uppin for votes please dont sleep on this peeps....
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vote on the fucking battle jesus christ.............
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uppping for voteeeeeeees..........................
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shit atleast leave feedback....lets get the votes in.
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Votes please............................................ ............
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word man
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AGREED ATLEAST FEEDBACK, ME AND MYSTIC LEAVE FEEDBACK IN ALL THE THREADS FOR YOU UNGREATFUL FUCKERS Ohh pshhhh Bumppppppppp |
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Hey mystic, your verse was very dope.........some minor feed back ...lol
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lets get some mother fucking votes.....sin how come u didnt show up to the other battle?
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bad storm in new york, i was shut out...and yeah votes man, lets keep this site alive!
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bump bump bump bump bump please folks~!!!!!!!!!!!!
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bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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bumppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah What He Said............votttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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uppin............................................. ..
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Yeah i thought this was pretty dope could we get a vote please??
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Ohhhh Yeah Bumpin This Shit For Real>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Voted For: Mystic.
B. I was feeling your verse a lot more here bacause your shit was more clear and on topic and point. You had a more clear sense of the topic in this matter so you didn't have to use crazy ass slurs and 'going no where prases' or 'imagry' that clauds most topical battles. Your shit was deep and I was honestly into it for a minute though some of your lines fell off towards the end but ended out str8. 8/10 TheSin...man, you hit me on a pet peeb when it comes to topicals man. your verse was wierd poetry shit with the wierd boring fake shakespear phrases that I mentioned above. Your lines lacked truth, flow, and depth and was replaced by vocab and weird go no where phrases that claude topical battles up with shit that makes it so niggas wont want to read or vote in. Its not your fault that I dont like that style man, gauranteed some one else might vote different but, I see R.B. getting this by also staying more on topic as to where you vierd off a lot and talked about some whole other shit with only about 3 or 4 lines talking about the actual topic. V/R.Bjork RTF in one of my battle or I'll merk you both at ones...jk famz. |
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