lyrical hustla
 

lyrical hustla

-verse1-

shit im a hustla by injection,not rejection,lyricist at da same perception,
i bring da pain and deception,wit any weapon,im cletchin,
n neva shit in da same pot i piss in,
the trigger of thought is itchin,2 squeeze the ink 2 make an impression,
im here 2 teach these new kids a lesson,neva rely on a chance u second guessin,
if u make it out these cold streets take it as a blessin,
cuz fuckin wit crack heads jus mean u need da rite contraception,
so whether it b a knife,tek,or an all black smith & wesson,
watch ya back n ta neva leave home w/o weapons of destruction,
king of body stretchin,da type 2 practice wut he preachin,
reachin for dat promise 2 live 4 reason,but niggaz make me look 4 a reason,
2 leave a carcuss barely breathin,leavin w/o a trace of breachin's,
hop back in da ride n all they heard were da wheels burnin n screchin//

-hook-

wutchu want whoodie cuz i got wut u need,
whether it b coke,dope,g,or weed,
if u lookin 4 dat bomb shortie holla at me,
cuz im a lyrical hustla servin flow wit a evil seed,
tainted by a hustlaz ambitionz & gangstaz dreams

-verse2-

u could hate it or love it,but 1 hit from my crack,u gonna keep comin back cuz u need it,im here 2 feed ur addiction now feed it,
feel da weed hits,when my vocals rock da drum kits,if u hatin u worse then a dumb bitch,cuz i aint hustlin 4 nuttin nigga i got dreams
of infinite chips,new whip everyday new chick,cuz im lookin 4 dat everyday new shit,wit each word i spit,its an automatic street hit,
n 2 da bitch niggaz i get'em done click clacked quick,the chopper is sick,jump off my dick u punk bitch,where im from niggaz move slick,
"anotha body found in da gutta"is all ya hear when da record skip,but dats how da waterfalls like tlc's classic,i kno it hurts but this kid a bastard,
the art of war ive mastered,plastered wit weed n beer,i smell da aroma of fear,when hataz pressence is near,n i aint gonna drop no tear,
when i cock this here,i jus wanna make things clear//its dat dirty jersey,u heard me,i curb g's,disturbed please,hataz deserve shots 2 they knees,
i cut down sized mc's,put ya soul 2 ease,n leave jus enough breath 4 ya ghost 2 breathe,dat smell is peppa spray n smoke from trees,
2 intensify effect when ya body weez,jeez u muthafuckaz so touchy,sit down u kno u cant touch me,leave u internally bleed,hi di ho like krayzie
bone,when i rock the scene,im in it 2 win i fiend da cream,cash rule everything about me,n not 1 of u muthafuckaz gonna stop me,im cocky,
make u think my gun's latin the way it gets papi(poppy*)

-pre hook-

dat im a lyrical hustla,hustla,hustla,
death when da spark touchin ya,touchin ya
but im not 1 4 braggin bout bein a gangsta,
jus watch out when i shoulder lean wanksta

-hook-

-verse3-

u heard dat nigga cash rule everything about me nigga,im cocky,make u think my gun's latin da way it gets papi nigga,
im down 2 take a chance its yatzee nigga,im raspy,but classy nigga,so when a broad walk past me,well they neva past me,
so i guess u can call me flosy nigga,i aint kelis but im bosey nigga//expelled 2 writin rhymes,instigatin a crime,cuz i feel da pressure,
of leavin ya body lumped against ya dresser's implied,dats why i smoke trees,to let the breeze,carry ya screams,2 a new murda scene,
damn rite i like the attention cuz im givin da game sumtin its much deprived,the spirit of wisdom my lyrics analyze,this rap shit 2 normalize,
cuz 2 many niggaz wanna ride,but run inside once da bullets fly,every time i rip da mic i feel alive,so i kno inside,ima b puttin it down like
this til da day i die//who u kno serve flow,wit such a spirted glow,use depression as a means 2 grow,cuz when i get on the mic ya
impression's froze,like damn i didnt kno so much ice made ya cold,but i do kno when i aim this chopper ya face'll fold//just neva forget me,
cuz 1 day ill go down wit history,but til then gotta keep my misery company,til 1 of u muthafuckas stop me,let the hook come in
and kill da memory//

-pre hook-

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there ya go peace my two links now show me sum feed people holla back 1

ayt u got ur links now sum1 view welllet me illtierate dat if u a bitch ass hata who gonnado nuttin but b childish n talk shit then dotn bother wastin my threads time or space holla uppin

oh thats whats popping,i see you trying to keep it hood...i was feeling it

good look homie sum1 dat appreciates real shit holla back homie uppin this piece dont sleep rv!

ayt people ive seen 17 people other than the 5 dat replied or w/e yet wut ya'll can read but cant leave a message get on ya'll j-o-b's on here dats wut were supposed 2 do peep each others stuff tell each other wut we did or didnt do wrong n move on c'mon people complainin rv dyin well man/woman up n quit bein ignorant fucks 2 sum of u who cant deny ur own ignorance on here to those who keep it music dont lose that focus uppin this dont sleep....

god damn rv u really r gettin dead asfuckcomin peeps ive replied 2 a couple muthafuckas since droppin this om quit sleepin quitactin like u aint got 15-20 minutes 2 read da shit n drop a line c'mon wake the fuck up rv

are you brainless?

leave feed on others open mics with your link and they will return the favour. but seen as your a fucking retard i cant see anyone giving two fucks about your open mic.

fuck u peace ive been leavin feed on different peoples shit n i do got links 1 2 this om n 1 2 my open battle so fuckin bite me either tell me wut u think w/o bein anass or dont waste my threads space mod or not i abide by darules so why dont uget ur hatinbastards 2doda same

hey look man this was all right you talked gutter bu tyour form is now really gutter too many big words up in here but still an all right piece i enjoyed it

HEY PEACE why did you leave poetic scriptures to come over here and make stupid poetry loving mistakes come on man you need to be briefed as a moderater but i see i did teach you something you gave him twelve hours to respond but hell man some people work 8 hours or ten hours give the people 24 hours to respond

im not hatin on the feed but first peeps say 2 plain up vocab now ya sayin de-vocab? im lost lol thanx 4 da feed though homie uppin dont sleep

In this verse over played vocab is this!
shit im a hustla by injection,not rejection,lyricist at da same perception,
i bring da pain and deception,wit any weapon,im cletchin
BTW Fams that don't rhyme

But I personal don't class people using long rhyming words as vocab,
my definition of vocab is the use of unsual words.

I dream of tranquillity to save my mentality
But in reality I can see no form of solidarity

Is that overplaying vocab ? I don't think so.

We need to work on your structure, you stretch your bars u need to write
them,. then get rid of the deadwood refine the bar.

1~

ayt kool homie question is how do i kno wut line or word to leave or take out?

this joint was ight, but you ya need to step up ya verse by makin it more interesting,.
you got a nice flow, and the rhymes were on point, all im sayin is maybe a couple punches in there or work on the chorus, but other than that you were holdin it down.

What the fuck where you trying to say? your concept was some shit we all did when we first started rapping fam...you need to use a real topic and drop it on a beat rather then just some of the top nonesence that no one'll feel just coz you toss a bunch of random words around. I can toss big words around with the best of em but that aint true to me and it obviousely aint true to you so just think about making something more concreat rather then being lyrical hustler which is kind of childish in my opinion. not to poke fun or nuthing dawg. just giving some tips. keep it true to yourself by not using that Big word style but at the same time understand that This concept is played and no one wants to peep net gangster tracks nah mean. 1

thanx 4 da feed hitchcock n wordz ahgod i jus started written dat when i first restarted a new account on here so id have sumtin 2 post cuz ive been movin around alot so ive lost sum of my stuff but i plan on fixin it n a sum of wut krayzie bone say on his newest album i aint tryin 2 go off wut sellin on the market rite now im bein myself but i believe give me any genre 2 rite about i can do i can flip south or east style or even take it back west on sum gangsta shit but thanx 4 da feed n once i finish sum new beats since i lost all my othas i made cuz i had 2 wipe my pc so lost shit but im workin on gettin sum audio done jus needa get a new mic n speakers cuz i want my shit 2 sound its best

oh n question we kool wordz cuz b4 it seemed we got off on the wrong foot?....

nah...I dont keep beef on the net but also aint out to make friends. I'll post what I post regardless. just dont take it personal or be offended by it. Its only the internet right.

Yeah he got off on the wrong foot with you words, just drop ya draws man i'm shure he will give you a smoochin..................

u always sayin dat i do dis n i do dat yet u da 1 who seems 2 know the most bout suckin dick n gettin bent over u fuckin homo quit bein gay sinful n wordz no doubt i feel ya jus keep shit about the music n dont take shit personal sum1 should give a lesson on dis 2 sinful cuz he got butt hurt cuz stanza was thinkin bout lettin me join his crew but then sin wet his diaper n stanza said get sum wins or sumtin 2 show for then he'll think about it must scurred of a lil competition lol stay homie peace

i think it would sound better on audio cause i didnt understand some of the things you were saying
but i still like the vocab
and keep it up

uppin this piece rv its finishedjus gotta do audio now but im debatin whether ya'll deserve dat even cuz aint no 1 got nuttin real 2 say jus a bunch of trash talk except by a handful of peeps uppin

if u start audio........were battling

Hey Man If You Drop Good Audio You Got My Respect>............

^^^^ Not like it matters but yeah you got it dawgggggggg

dats wut ya'l cats dont realize ibve been doin audio since i was 15 i jus need a new mic cuz the shit i got suck....but i got fruityloops n cool edit pro 2.0 4 da mixin n beats n whether ya'llcan fade it or not them hot lyrics str8 from the streets....but damn u kno wut said i get hated cuz im white wit the whole nigga mentality but ya'll seem 2 think its a front i got black homies who admit im blacker thenthey are n otha 1 who tell me n my girl nah he aint white he a nigga...but oh well guess rv would nevakno the truthmaybe ill proof 4 ya hataz so u can see 4 a FACt my shit legit uppin this piece

matta fact i kno most all of u got either soundclick or myspace....check my bro n niggaz jersey devils out now if ya'll say they suck u know u a muthafuckin liar but yea dats my street team muthafuckas goin str8 2 da top

oh n ysdat i shoulda known peace was yo ys ass...uppin this finished om

i'm thinkin about givin ya a 0 just for making 100 posts right next to each other in this fuckin thread.

its called the EDIT button..

^^^^ Yeah a hundred posts and each one is as long as a god damn essay

well czar bishop if u have so much trouble readin dat u gotta talk shit like da rest of i write 2 much in my post if u dont like it go sum where else n kiss my white ass on ya way out bitchi kno u spul u hated on me las time i was here jus stfu n 1 of u please make do any thing u say cuz in da end ya'll gonna b da bitches screamin 4 ya mommies when i teach a lesson bout how i play pussies

c'mon rv stop sleepin!!! nice piece uppin this 4 audio...u want audio tell me wut u think first in text uppin this shit wake up rv

where the fuck is your periods and commas? :cussing:

Or should I just read the entire thing with out stoping for air? fix your spelling, grammer and attitude and people will most like pay more attencion to your work rather then your shit talking fam. If you really about the music then you'd shut the fuck up with all this " your a hater and your a hater" bullshit. You aint going to get better if you cant take and use the criticism thats given to you man.

there's a thin line between hatin n talkin shit,wit criticism n u tell me u cant read that within a single breath?....ls time i checked it take air 2 read i take critiques no problem but when they clitique's n not sum bitch nigga hatin ok?

ayt rv swallow ya pride n leave sum feed..wtf ya'll hatin so much u peeps r so fuckin childish i swear

wtf? I can't even understand wtf you're saying. But keep my name out your mouth kid

why u got 2 names? i coulda swore u use 2 say sumtin on czar bishop dat u spul sum1 else n sum1 else dat i cant think of rite now but u hated on me las time i was here..grow the fuck up n watch who u callin kid son!!!

you REALLY gatta ABSTAIN from using that term yo

You REALLY gotta ABSTAIN from using words like ABSTAIN to kids who obviously don't have a very healthy vocabulary. Especially if you truly want something, and you plan on expressing this desire by verbal or written communcation. It would probably be more appropriate to say it like this.

Listen, some people are obviously offended by the word "nigga". Please do not use it unless it is absolutely needed. And being as how no word is ever absolutely needed, it should be easy.

Now to the piece. It sucked. You claim your rhymes are from the street. That is a lie. The streets don't speak. That would require for the streets to be a living organism that had a brain capable of communication. And since we are talking about rhymes, it would have to be capable of the kind of communication that us humans are capable of. Your rhymes are from your head, which I might add..is obviously not screwed on very tight. Your concept is extremely simple and elementary. Your expression of the concept is even worse. You used more words out of context than i've ever seen before. And you cannot try to have a big vocab, while intentionally mis-spelling words and using words that you hopefully learned in your first year of speaking at the same time. You either have to be 100% articulate(look it up) or not at all.

Also, do not expect people to read something you wrote, when it is a mile long, and you have no suspense what so ever. If you ever want people to read something of that sort of length, try telling a story. Something that people will start reading, and not be able to stop. But before you start that, i would suggest picking up a dictionary, and reading the definitions before you start throwing "big" words around. Asside from using words that didn't make sense to what you were trying to say, those "big" words are what's considered mediocre vocab...AT BEST. Don't listen to all of these people who say nice vocab, or too much vocab. You didn't have either. You need to practice a lot on your writing in general, never the less your ability to write in a rhyme format. Honestly, i would strongly suggest you start reading novels. Or poetry from famous artists. See how they write, and use that as a guideline. Seasoned writers do not mis-spell words intentionally, and rarely do they mis-spell them accidentally. All the music you hear on the radio, all the slang and what not, regardless of how you CAN try to spell the words, that doesn't change the true spelling of them. And to change the true spelling of anything, makes your writing look stupid, and like a toddler wrote it.

Don't get me wrong, i would love to see you, and all other less talented writers elevate, and become respectable. But it bothers the shit out of me to see people like you, who obviously need a lot of work, tell RV not to sleep. You should be asking people for help, and to read your work to critique you..THAT'S IT. don't act arrogant about a writing talent that isn't there......yet.