My Blood, Sweat, Tears Ft. Willa Tony Self Triple N and Enygma
 

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Featured track sep 5-12

word ma....simple beat did good on it.....triple n sounds a bit loud compared to yall.....might want to fix that.....this is good, you need to exute a lil more comfort on the mic tho...you sound a lil tense....good shit specially since i rarely hear shit from you.....only thing crappy bout this song is you never asked me to hop on it

Listen'n

Feelin the beat yo good choice..

1st:Willa- Flow an presence is nice yo...like'd the way u approached it...Lyrics an concepts is on point.. vocals mixed well...emotion thoro...

HoOk: Triple touchs this nice'ly like this shit..

2nd:TonySelf- Flow is nice kid....lyrics is coo...like the concept though...emotion an presence is on point for this...

HoOk: Same

3rd:Triple- Vocals a lil loud but mixed well...like the lyrics an concepts...flow is always on point..liked how u kicked it...emotion an presence shines real nice on ur part of the verse...good shit fam

HoOk: Same

4th:Enygma- Good flow kick game man...like ur presence an emotion pretty much everyone on this joint was on point no frontin' on that kid...like ur lyrics ur concepts...only thing i can see wrong is ur main vocals is turned down lower than ur ablibs an dubs...might want to fix that an ur verse is golden...

Over-all
Enygma's verse main vocals could be turned up a lil bit.. an his dubs an libs turned down...Triple's verse is a lil loud but other than that i dont see anything wrong wit the track shit is crack to me..like the beat y'all picked...an the concepts y'all touhced on...Everybody came off proper on this joint..keep doin what y'all do feel me an keep droppin audio..my ratin 9/10 holla at yo boy 1 :thumbup:

Sick Period....

This was nice everyone sounded dope, I was really feeling this.

WOW......

beat is right...

Verse1: Willa ... you been on someother shit lately.... Flow on poin, delivery... all that.. you upped your game by leaps and bounds ma... i got to give it to ya :)

Hook: Trip... the hook is aight... only complaint is the volume over the hook is mixed in a few DB's too loud...

Verse2: Tony... this was your layed back attack to the track... but it works fo sho... feelin it ...

Verse3: Trip... you came off on this... even though your bitch ass stole my spot on the track :(... FUCKERS..... sall good

Verse4: Enygma... flow is a lot smoother over this... production seems a tad crisper... you held ya own fam...

Overall this was deff enjoyable... juss gotta adjust Trips Volume... and this joints a keeper.. nahmean... dope drops all around

thanks hey tito theres an extra verse if you want on it :thumbup:

I"m def. feelin this beat...u need too hook me up with this shizz!!! :)

alright - Willa your quality has gotten like 1000 better....this sounds really good....You flow is good....so far the best femcee on this site and the best ive heard online YET! anyways....lyrics are good.......

Hook - Triple N really held it down.....the melody was crazy....sounds professional

Tony Self - I realy like you with this mellow type of flow it molded with the song really good you should have turned the vocals up a little more! but lyrics were cool good job

Hook - Same

Triple N - You overall had the best drop on this song so far........your flow and change ups def. caught my attention....on the real this sounds professional......seriously...def. somthing i'd brag too my friends about like "OH SHIT U HEARD THIS!!!!"

hook - same!

Enygma - Your flow is really melodic i'm really feelin the way you deliver ur rhymes on each song...ur lyrics are good...no complaints here man you really did ya thing

Hook - 1 more thing this is my fav. part of the track.....the way he says "MY BLOOD,SWEAT,TEARS" is just like WOAH and hits ya


Overall this a dope ass song....on the real..i'd def. be bumpin this shit in my headphones on the way too school..keep doin it up man!!

thanks bump....

aiight listenin'....

beat sounding dope...

willa, wow that's all I can say. you got like million times better since last time i heard you. Voice sounds like way too young tho. But as you get older shit will grow so word. but lyrics are dope. flow so fluid. this shit dope...

hook, damn lmao scared me, cuz Triple comin' in. the different in voices. loool but hook is ill

Tony vocals sound a lil bit low. But LL Cool J comin' dope. lol j/p but i like this. nice delivery, good flow. like the lyrics.... shit was coo. good shit here. I'ma get that collab don't worry. lol but nice verse yo

Trip, comin' in with that illness. Flow changes are illy as usual. dope lyrics. Delivery is tight. good emotion. like that beat stop where you clear throat or w/e.. shit was dope..

Enygma, that nygga rippin' it again. lol whats up with the effect you put on your voice? i guess you like dubbed whole verse. shit's coo tho. Just isn't your best shit you've done. But nonetheless real solid verse. good lyrics and flow.

overall, this was a tight collab, everyone held their own. Willa suprised me like whoaaaa, didn't expect that. lol improved loads. Good shit. everyone else had nice verses too. killer hook. overall dope track. good shit. 9/10

EZ

thank you pully
:kisses:

solid .

SOLID FUCKING TRACK.

Hook is mad right and creative. beat is very simple so all verses and hooks come off even better...no fighting the intstrumental. Willa....came off so right. flow was burning, and quality was hella good. Triple/Enygma/Tony....came off damn nice too. a lil vocal leveling needs to b done, but overall....so damn solid

keep up the hot trax

thank you........

thanks...........

done thank you very much :)

willa...flow was on point

Triple comes out of no damn where...sup trip...how u doin baby! hump hump

neway...hook was str8


Tony...real solid flow...lackluster delivery


Willa came best on this in terms of energy and flow


good track


OH...here's enygma...flow matched willas on this track...She jus rocked this beat well


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wow thanks q :hump:

Listenin...

Beat is hot as fuck...guitar sample be crazy..rlly makes this track even doper..

Willa...you def elevatin shorty...taking rv's no1 femcee spot def..flow is str8 thruout...got a good nice quality..have that floetry type flow...real '99..this dope...

Hook: Trip you killed the hook...rlly liked how you did this fam..

Tony Self:...liking the style..another 9o's flow but more 95...flow is hot..delivery is nice..lyrics gd...feelin this old school shit...

Triple N:..trip you killed this shit with a new generation style...more energy keeps me entertained..hot delivery..lyrics hot too...you killin this track b..nothin wrong wit this verse atall...hook again hot...

Enygma: You got a new generation style too...but the producin aint working fo u...i think ud appeal so much more if a producer got at u cos u got that voice..but its like damn if only it had summin..the producer wud know nah mean..flow is good..not amazain cos it did fall off..but delivery is hot...

hot joint yall...1

thank you .......

Thanks to everyone who left feed. It's really, really, really appreciated........really


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lmao wow.......

but word again, dope track. listened again :cool:

wow...the strings r killin it already.....fuck this beats mega ill man....

willa, ur a tad loud...like the blood red line....ur flows always sickness...lyrics r nice here too...delevery fits the track feel well...trips delevery is killer...still a tad to loud tho..maybe it's my speakers...idk....

tony come in nice,,,,delevery is a biggi here man...ya'll was in the midset on this one...tony sound real crisp here to....gun shots was a nice touch....

hooks ill man...like it a lot...

sound like some cowboy shit lol

trip come in mega hype...delevery factor still..multis killin it here....flows nice....lol at the ahhh hemm shit...ya'll gettin me souped to write more lol....

nygma, come in nice...flows nice, libs a tad to loud....emotion nice on this shit...lyrics is on, like the voice a lot bro..always have..grimey as hell...

sickness....

he has gunshots in hsi vers lol : /
i guess i better listen lol
thank you cho

bump.............

yo this track is definatly goin on the RV mixtapes i make werd displays lyrical ability very well

first i love what yall did with the chorus...except for the accent on blood iono who did the chorus but it was raw except for that one word for me.

Liked Willa's emotion on this and the flo. concepts stayed on point as sometimes emcee's minds have a tendency to wander. Dope

iono you guys voices so

2nd verse: pretty good emotion sounded like it coulda been upped but the vocals were ok. flo sounded choppy in a spot or 2 but overall good drop

3rd verse: Came in loud den a mug but it had me crackin up when he said making sounds like.... and the flo was on point overall dope drop

4th verse: I do know this voice, your flo is always dope to me and i loved the get yo ass back here line vocal levels were on point, don't think i have any negativity dope drop

all this over a tight chill beat=nice
overall dope drop definatly a download and bump in the whip type track

Rtf be back with a link l8r days

thank yo9u sir no doubt drop it ill rtf

Peepin - Willa - Wow, I seriously have not peeped the songs section for awhile - you improved your stuff alot too. Adlibs are nicely done, and flow is straight. Quality not too bad, like your lyrics. hook - ummm.. Not really feelin it - I woulda done it a lil different. The melody is super nice, but Trip comes in too hard where i woulda done it smoother as its a pretty smooth track. Anyways - Tony - Nice verse bro - ain't heard you in a LONG time either. Ya vocals seem a little low to me, but good verse, nice lyrics. Trip - Vocals seem to match the hook best obviously, but it seems like you tryin to really put alot of different flow changes into a track that doesn't really need it. Good verse again - so far this track is nice. Enygma - Low vocals again, but ya flow hasn't really changed - haha still good - seeing as I liked ya flow even back in the day. Best lyrics in my opinion, jus felt it best I guess.

Overall - nice track ya'll - good 4 person colab.

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i left feed on your track black thanks for the feed
phenom thank ya

Uppppppppp......

ok

i liked the hook trip made the hook awesome no one could of did it better , great flow and lyrics

willa damn ur voice was killer u made a name for urself hear,, great flow nice lyrics, pitch was good ,quality was great damn good verse

tony u had great verse too u shined good too , had hard lines that delievered
good flow and good quality great verse

enyg- u had great verse too, had good flow ,wicked lyrics, tight verse , everything was killa, performed perfected

trip- u had that deep voice again that rocked out the song was great , perfected lines, awesome flow, great quality, u did awesome like usaull

id give this track

10/10

this song is a keeper on my mp3 player

thank you......

upp all feed will be returned

good shit, i'm not leavin feed cuz uhhh....this shit's just too ill to criticize

thank you.........

beat is simple.....but helps ya topic...so it's all good

1st Verse - flow is on point.......lyrics is strate......feelin da story........feelin ya delivery......and ya quality is nice....
Hook - came in loud ass hell.....but otha than that it's a dope hook
2nd Verse - ya flow is strate......lyrics are basic......and u could up ya delivery.....seems like ya didn't give much effort to ya verse.....
Hook - same as above
3rd Verse - ya lyrics are tyte on this.......feelin ya delivery on this man....ya flow is strate.......yo i'm feelin this verse the best so far........
Hook- same as above
4th Verse - ya quality sounds different from everyone else........but ya flow and all that is on point....ya ridin tha beat the best out of all MCs......ya delivery is strate.......tyte shit....

Overall - this is one hot track..........well keep droppen.....

pz

~1~

lol at everyone liking my stick mic quality :cool:

let me listen to this. Im returnin the favour here..

OK. Production was all good from my prospective. the beat isnt my style but i can vibe to it. Guitars are nice. Everyone should of had one person to mix it so it sounds more. Like a PRofessional track. Production was Decent from my part. I give this about a
7/10

Willa:

DAMN, you improved alot from the last time i heard you..i like your voice..its a good "underground femcee" voice. Especially for this kind of beat. Your quality is real good aswell. Especially from the last joint i heard from you. The lyrics is good. I was feelin what you was saying. mic pressence was good for this kind of tracc. Couldn't see you screaming on some Hype tip on this so the laid back flow works.

overall give this 7.9/10

Tony:

2nd verse. Good Quality aswell. I also liked these lyrics and the flow. But you had less multi's then the first verse. Your mic pressence was REAL laid back. its good for this kind of track. Reminds me of a wild wild west type shit. But yeah your flow was OK. nothing i havent heard before. But the lyrics make up for it. So this is a good verse

overall 7.3/10

Triple N:

Yup, best verse so far. Better Mic pressence it was nice. the quality was nice. but wasnt as good as 1st and 2nd. your flow was nice. Nice Multi's and the lyrics were good. This was a good verse from ut riple N. the strong voice suites this kind of joint. So you get my props. nice verse

8.1/10

Enygma:

ok verse, quality wasnt as good as the above. but you still did your thang. Your flow was nice and your mic pressence was good. but your adlibs were off and the quality was lackin. Your emotion was....Good. you rode the beat nicely. no real flaws sept for the quality

overall 7.3/10


overall: the beat isnt really my type. but the Concept is. i like the concept and everything you guys put into this joint. a real UNDERGROUND track. nice shit