Yung Sir vs Sinful
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-13-06 at 08:48 PM

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Yung Sir has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-06 08:49 PM.

Sinful has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-06 09:10 PM.

This cat only speaks latin in english accents
His vocab seems hard but his punches R passive
Like a fat bitch in elastic, It's a drastic mess
Eat what's on ya dish, then come for the rest
You speak on emotional peaks i percive you as bitch
You seek promotion but you reap lack of respect
You need a raft, as i float like shit in the bath
Your structure is ruptured, take english class!
After the after math, ill gass you like a jew
but you have so much in your ass you wont have a clue!

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huh yeah dope battle but i dont know what you mean dawg

This was feedback posted for Yung Sir
 

Just Dropping By And Yo You Remind Me Of Someone Im Not Sure Who But Good Verse Both Yall Nah Im Talking Bout...

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This was feedback posted for Sinful
 

wtf?????


this wasreally whack.................

This was feedback posted for Sinful
 

Sinful won... has slightly better wordplay and punches... dont know if i can vote so i will post my thoughts... Step it up sir you need to elevate homie

thanks for the feedback bump......................................

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Voted For: Sinful

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232794


This cat only speaks latin in english accents
His vocab seems hard but his punches R passive
^^lol
Like a fat bitch in elastic, It's a drastic mess
Eat what's on ya dish, then come for the rest
^^meh
You speak on emotional peaks i percive you as bitch
You seek promotion but you reap lack of respect
^^meh
You need a raft, as i float like shit in the bath
Your structure is ruptured, take english class!
^^meh
After the after math, ill gass you like a jew
but you have so much in your ass you wont have a clue!
^^meh



VS.


Sin Has No Chance Against Me, I'll Just Need'll (Needle) Thimble Of Wits,
Incomparable - Leave Him Installs...I Guess That Means Sin Full Of Shit//
He Couldn't Kindle A Wick, I Can Gesture My Rhymes And Still Murder U, U Lost @ Charades,
Thats When Sin Drops, Yea Then The Pin Drops Cuz Then I'm Tossin Grenades//
U Ain't A Boss, Kid I'm Usin No Effort - Itz Just A Warning Thatz Y I'm Alarmin U Son,
Now I See Y U Rejected By The Devil, U Way Outta Tune Wit Him, Thatz Y U'll Never Harm-Any-One (Harmony 1)//



^^^wack n stretched as fuckers man



V/sin



honest well explained vote on the link please only votes were taking

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Voted For: Yung Sir

v/ Yung Sir

dude basically had more punches, and worth while disses at his opponent....Loose, u came real lazy....ya verse barely had any hard hitters, besides that u had decent wordplay but w/o hurtin ya opponents feelings u dont get credit for that shit

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Voted For: Sinful

v/loosenuse
alot more rhymin and flowed alot better
couldn't undastand most of yung sir's lines fink hes tryin to be a bit 2 clever

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Voted For: Yung Sir

Yung Sir:
Sin Has No Chance Against Me, I'll Just Need'll (Needle) Thimble Of Wits,
Incomparable - Leave Him Installs...I Guess That Means Sin Full Of Shit//
6/10 - Niice Opener.
He Couldn't Kindle A Wick, I Can Gesture My Rhymes And Still Murder U, U Lost @ Charades,
Thats When Sin Drops, Yea Then The Pin Drops Cuz Then I'm Tossin Grenades//
2/10 - Nah.
U Ain't A Boss, Kid I'm Usin No Effort - Itz Just A Warning Thatz Y I'm Alarmin U Son,
Now I See Y U Rejected By The Devil, U Way Outta Tune Wit Him, Thatz Y U'll Never Harm-Any-One (Harmony 1)//
5/10 - Niice closer.
13/30

LooseNuse:
This cat only speaks latin in english accents
His vocab seems hard but his punches R passive
4/10 - OK Opener.
Like a fat bitch in elastic, It's a drastic mess
Eat what's on ya dish, then come for the rest
2/10 - Nah.
You speak on emotional peaks i percive you as bitch
You seek promotion but you reap lack of respect
2/10 - Nah.
You need a raft, as i float like shit in the bath
Your structure is ruptured, take english class!
4/10 - OK.
After the after math, ill gass you like a jew
but you have so much in your ass you wont have a clue!
3/10 - Nah.
15/50

OVERALL - This battle goes this way, other guy was whack

Voted For: Yung Sir

Ight, Ight, im gonna have to go wit yung sir on this joint, i felt he came alot harder in his verse. the flow on your joint was a lil offf, but you had some good wordplay even though it sounded kind of forced. but there wasn't too much in loosenuse's verse that did too much damage and one bar didnt' even rhyme. so im gonna have to go wit yung sir

best bar=
U Ain't A Boss, Kid I'm Usin No Effort - Itz Just A Warning Thatz Y I'm Alarmin U Son,
Now I See Y U Rejected By The Devil, U Way Outta Tune Wit Him, Thatz Y U'll Never Harm-Any-One (Harmony 1)//
^^ that was mad forced but it was stillt he best
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