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K.ontroverz.Y 09-12-06 05:09 PM

Submit Your Songs
 
Submit your songs below. Keep in mind you need 3 votes before your song will appear on the radio. We will inform you though


Lets get 'em in.

Blay'all 09-13-06 11:48 PM

www.soundclick.com/blayboy

"If U Want It"
"Life Goes On"
"336"


if you want it- vocals can be turend up a little bit flow can be improved in parts dubs are off second verse sounds hella different flow is better in this verse but still off in a few parts
overall flow wasnt smooth enough delivery was pretty cool though dubs were off hook comes in rough
vote: no

life goes on- need to up the talking in the intro i cant hear unless i strain to listen to it
hook flow is off on one of the bars not too bad though dont like the effect on it though delivery needs to be uppes sound like youre running out of breath

the line after why god took you now too many words in that line made it a little choppy
a few others too

flow was on in the begginning fell of or 2 bars in the beggining last bar is a llittle bit off not too noticable

government sees it line flow is off stop this ish line is off a lil along with the record line

overall flow was a little choppy in place dubs were off for the most part and the hook delivery was blah
vote: no


336- flow was better no doubt
like the hook


not feeling this verse at all repeats on the ffirst part of this verse idk just weak

if it was just the first verse and the hook i probably would have said yea cause flow was on throughout but second verse was jsut mad weak to me
vote: no

TROUBLESOME™ 09-14-06 06:46 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4438924

if life were like that............get at me

beat is weak to me idk
hook is mad nice
first verse was ok didnt like the bub line at all was a like story telling track and two of the lines were soft didnt really belong in there
2nd cat dubbs are off on almost your whole verse flow was pretty nice no doubt lyrically not as strong as the first verse
vote:undecided ill get back to you

Ebircs 09-14-06 08:00 PM

A drink and a beer
Thats Us
HEAT...i dunno wtf else to call it....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=82331

that's us
flow is pretty good this beat is harder to flow to than most dubbs sounded nice

i love the third verse
but vote: no


heat lyrically its nice on your verse flow is on throughout dubs are good alot of nice lines lol delivery is cool a few dubbs are off but not many

tony like the flow alot of multis got a nice swagger like your delivery

enygma alot of multis like the flow lyrically not as nice as you usually coem but pretty nice

vote: yes

shot and a beer dont really like the flow on mi's first verse lyrically its pretty nice though love his delivery though bea t is grimey feats the beat great
cho nice delivery flow feats the beat well
mi like this verse alot better no doubt love it all
cho nice verse too
but i cant stand the talking at the end lol
vote: no beacause of the talking at the end

Hood Star 09-17-06 11:36 AM

The intro for my new mixtape. straight bars, no hook. hottest shit i got right now.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4281453

vote please.


Yeah, i heard this. im feeling this track. My Vote. YES


voice wise you kinda sound like a young jada
flow is cool predictable rhyme scheme but it was on point
lyrically you were pretty nice alot of ncie lines but there were some taht were blah to me
vote: no

youngvibez 09-17-06 12:07 PM

check it
www.myspace.com/thatkidvibez
track : Young Vibez - Real Estate Diss (opening song)


Vote yes for real estate & yes for the conflict & young vibe joint

intro is dumb lol at the pops in your accapella when you jsut talking
flow is on point but weak alot of lines that you used the same word ot make it rhyme
llike the second beat better flow is off on 2 lines
third verse i dont like at all delivery doesnt appeal to em flow is more choppy

vote: no

Willa 09-17-06 02:56 PM

hmm well i think this song shoule be on here its jsut dope everyone can relate

http://www.myspace.com/illgrammatix2
budgit baller

jay and ii both vpte yes for budget baller so someone else needs to check it out

Jay Rose 09-18-06 12:05 AM

vote yes for budget baller.....

Wordz AhGod 09-18-06 03:20 AM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4452688

My new track I wrote for my girl. Called "I Promise" just peep it with an open mind.

ok talking needs to eb upped cant really hear what your saying
beat and you are both way too loud now the bass in the ebat drowns out your lyrics somewhats
first verse sounds like you cam closer to the mic in the mid verse
vote no because volume is messed up and it makes it hard to listen to
Vote: NO

Willa 09-18-06 12:38 PM

oh yes
i also nominate
my track my blood sweat tears
and apexx's tracks
black sunglasses and
anybody out there
ill post up the links later

I vote Black Sunglasses YES. I havent checked the other Joints

-Kon

Ace Heratoga 09-18-06 01:51 PM

www.soundclick.com/chosenonesent

Da Struggle

flow is mad basic in the beggining lyrically a few wack lines in the beggining

2nd guy is alot better but theres an odd pause in the middle of the track

3rd guy voice is kind of aannoying flow gets a little choppy towards the en of your verse

4th verse probably the best verse
vote: no

The Jett 09-18-06 04:25 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4382463

It's Over

The Jett 09-18-06 04:29 PM

I can't edit my votes in......gimme sum power Kon....

Willa 09-18-06 05:50 PM

theres already 3 mods in the sub so you cant so just make a seperate post

K.ontroverz.Y 09-18-06 06:03 PM

what she said......i say yes for Black Sunglasses. Imma check some more out in a few

The Jett 09-18-06 06:13 PM

blah. thats a pain in the balls.

K.ontroverz.Y 09-18-06 06:14 PM

tru just quote the post. and then say yes or no. thats what i used to do...

The Jett 09-18-06 06:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace Heratoga
www.soundclick.com/chosenonesent

Da Struggle

flow is mad basic in the beggining lyrically a few wack lines in the beggining

2nd guy is alot better but theres an odd pause in the middle of the track

3rd guy voice is kind of aannoying flow gets a little choppy towards the en of your verse

4th verse probably the best verse
vote: no


I agree. NO. so much more could be done to this beat than what is here.

Paranoid 09-21-06 09:42 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235210

"It Makes No Difference ft. Troublesome & Prahject"

Thought this song was pretty ill for a new one from me so I decided it could probably get in.

first guy cool
para flow is choppy in places delivery is kinda lacking and its kinda hard to hear you vote: NO

Zone Out 09-25-06 02:03 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4480737
Bury Ya Face

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4480791
Prisoner

Vote on the first track no second track yes

Votes No for the first tracc, Yes For Second tracc

Paranoid 09-25-06 10:36 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235274

Bridge City ft. Yung Red

Zone Out 09-26-06 12:14 AM

yall wildin
the first track is hard as hell

Jay Rose 09-26-06 12:34 AM

will s unyu
bury ya face: NO - the flow was choppy a bit, just could follow it, it bored me a bit....just didnt like it really

prisoner: MAYBE - it was a good track i guess, i dont feel the beat that much....so yea its up to you

paranoid
bridge city:NO - no beef in this. you sound too seperated from the beat. like i dont even think your on it, the lyics have they own tune n it doesnt match well with the beat...the second guy is choppy at best....a positive is your starting to sound a lil more smooth then usual...but still no

Willa 09-26-06 12:59 AM

so thats a yes on wills second track

Zone Out 09-26-06 02:08 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Default
will s unyu
bury ya face: NO - the flow was choppy a bit, just could follow it, it bored me a bit....just didnt like it really

prisoner: MAYBE - it was a good track i guess, i dont feel the beat that much....so yea its up to you

paranoid
bridge city:NO - no beef in this. you sound too seperated from the beat. like i dont even think your on it, the lyics have they own tune n it doesnt match well with the beat...the second guy is choppy at best....a positive is your starting to sound a lil more smooth then usual...but still no

alright, so Prisoner is on there

but Default, where exactly was my flow choppy at in Bury ya Face

Jay Rose 09-26-06 02:52 AM

around the concious...pay me homage doesnt quite fit. freaks ta..the pause doesnt fit right...and a ni99a hype ...its not so much that it sounds choppy but it sounds like your runnin out of breath n it brings it down. paper cut line isnt as smooth as it should be....a bunch of little subtle things like that.....thas what i was sayin

M&rk 10-11-06 12:30 AM

Klub... Big Picture and Yvonne
at the top Klubs the name ft. yvonne... werd get back at me

Yvonne 10-12-06 05:20 PM

Get It Popping ft Wordz AhGod

Chevy Slut Ft J Summers and Breezy


..both werent iight but we've updated them!..


Holla Back


...^click there!

Blackmage 11-06-06 06:24 AM

Once you go black. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=303064

Just thought it was one of my better produced tracks. My equips garbo so it's not my favorite track but it's the clearest. Check it out though thanks. Trying to keep the movement going.

bhamrome 11-17-06 12:15 AM

** I'M THA MAN ** Lead Single from "We Takin' Over"
 
"I'm Tha Man" is the lead single from the album "We Takin' Over" which will be in stores February 20, 2007. This song is by R.O.M.E. featuring Bigg D and is produced by J.C. for SSC Productions. This song is also featured on the DJ Smallz & Dynasty Enterprise - Southern Smoke: Fear Factor Presentation "Before Tha Takeover". Tell me what you think about the track and don't forget to visit the MySpace page. SUPPORT THA MOVEMENT!!!

Download Here
http://www.sendspace.com/file/a3wonz

Add Me!
www.myspace.com/dyent


Stanza. 12-10-06 07:50 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...id=4756410&q=hi

The Track Named

If Ya hatin

BRIGGZY 12-31-06 10:27 AM

BRIGGZY- Forever
BRIGGZY- You Dont Wanna Ft. Youngsta

C.Wrighter 01-02-07 06:27 PM

Ok I'm New to this site but i have had the's songz played on radios on diffrent sites so i hope yall will play them here if i get yes on them i will upload them to my soundclick


I Kno Wat Ft: Shawn Cole

www.myspace.com/cwrighter2



Play'n Ft: Riggs

www.myspace.com/cwrighter2


check them out there if yall like them and i get a yes just tell me what i have to do so yall can get them on to the radio or if yall need a download link

Paranoid 01-27-07 12:52 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239620

"Some People" - Paranoid

My best joint I ever done...period

-13 Amp- 02-03-07 09:34 PM

My new track 'Come Correct' produced by Badan written by 13 Amp and...
my new track 'Who's The Illest (feat. Past One)...

-13 Amp- Come Correct
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4899580

-13 Amp- (Feat Past One) Who's The Illest
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4948646

check em out

*Froze* 02-06-07 11:51 AM

"So Gutta"

Something short featuring my British friend "Deekay"

http://frozemusic.com

We write our own shit.

K.ontroverz.Y 02-08-07 08:13 AM

imma be updating this shit soon..


RV radio never fell off..

Paranoid 02-10-07 02:16 PM

let me know if my shits good enough now.

SnyperStyle 02-14-07 05:25 PM

R.O.M.E. - I'm Tha Man feat. Bigg D
 
Check me out. It's also featured on the DJ Smallz & R.O.M.E. - Before The Takeover mixtape which is available now.

R.O.M.E. – I’m Tha Man feat. Bigg D

Blackmage 03-13-07 06:56 PM

Well here are some tracks, i think they're all pretty good

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=303064

My soundclick....

Welcome to the funhouse

Do Ray Mi Fa So ft. Tha Q

All the pain


Take a look and tell me what you think...


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