Coherent. vs allikwarawkilla
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-30-06 at 01:33 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

allikwarawkilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-06 01:33 AM.

yea da stats 0-1 dats y im here 2 even da score,
tellin hataz jump off my dick wut u hatin for//

the outcomes apparent,ya not coherent,
sumbody claim dis kid cuz i aint yo parent//

i stay on top of da flow like dish washer liquid,
call me a giant cuz im squashin this midget//

kinda like da english did years ago 2 da british,
u aint got talent son u jus got sick fetish//

the type 2 invite u 2 my crib n offer sum mountain dew,
come back da next day askin how my piss taste dude,
u da hair on a elephants ass,compared 2 my attitude//

slap you with the pad & stab you with the pencil,
who said ya ghost would drop sumtin suspenseful//

Coherent. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-27-06 09:58 PM.

match me, 6 lines

how 'slow' is this kid? he couldn't 'smoke', that 'blunt', if he was 'racing' a 'turtle'
his 'word of mouth' is 'unhear' he could've a 'megaphone' still wouldn't be 'verbal'
the only 'time' killa gets 'head' is at the 'expiration' of 'decapitaion'
when killa 'speaks' i need a 'gas mask' due to my 'ass-piration'
call this the 'world series' the way i have you 'running for home'
tryna 'steal' my 'elevated' flow is the only time this nigga gets 'stoned'

meh, uppin for your drop

This was feedback posted for Coherent.
 

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This was feedback posted for Coherent.
 

lmfao @ this shit. allik u need to elavate BAD!!!!!

untouched i kno u aint tryin 2 say i aint merked this dude n his 5 lines....its 5 bars u kno 2 line make 1 bar buddy keep up....anyways verses are dropped now4 the votes nice drop goodluck....untouched who the fuck are u? u stupid if u dont think i did nice on this verse hata

i mean 6 bars....12 lines or more idk 2 late n e ways..lol

word^ so stfu herb, pathetic, i get more respect than you everywhere, kiss my ass, and uppin for votes

fuck you bitch...the internet nowhere 2 act so highly about so ur geek ok.....i know peeps all over the usa literallyand across sea's in south korea..where u been up the block get the fuck outta....wasnt talkin shit on rb y u gettin gully now pussy take ya loss bitch oh wait you'll probly win for da fact every1 will gas u up so u think u win but realize they voted against because they hate me....lol lamer

blah blah blah, here we go with another herb talkin bout how they real hood, they in the stuggle, nigga stfu, you spend your life on the computer besides the time you take out to let ya pops get you in the ass

can we get some fuckin votes

Voted For: Coherent.

One sided battle

Coherent. wins this hands down, punches are more creative, wordplay is alot more apparent, and overall actually has some what of a battle verse.

Other kid really didtn drop anything new,wise, original or even resembling a punch.
Alot of weird concepts that didtn really hit at all, stay trying and elevate.

slap you with the pad & stab you with the pencil,
who said ya ghost would drop sumtin suspenseful//

^^^^ I heard somthing like that before, i just cant remember from where?

so not only is he wack, he bites bars that aren't even good?

w/e uppin for votes

i wrote it in anotha battle u fuckin asshole instigator fuck u sin...n yea i know not much 4 punches in this but i really didnt try cuz wuts the sense of writtin a hot verse 4 a battle if u kno da sites hataz gonna vote the otha person n e ways jus 2 b childish pricks like dat

do you ever stop complaning? stfu kid

vote

Voted For: Coherent.

vote- coherent
coherent was ehhh decent i guess...
you tried to hard to have too much word play...
dopeness lies in being concise but ..mediocre punches at best
third punch and first are a lil played
work on the flow
so 4/10


other guy..wow that sUCKED...not a hate vote
but try to be witty and not sound like 50 cent or some shit..im sorry to have to break it to you
flow was off!

butkeep battling and youll get better

thank you...i've seen his work before so that explains the weak drop, no excuses though, i won anyway just to shut him up, uppin for the KO vote

Voted For: Coherent.

i dont know about this joint, this wasn't a very good battle, but ima have to say that coherent won this one. He had better wordplay and his rhymes made more sense.
Coherent had more actual punches in his verse which made him get the win. but to me yall both could have done alot better.

I aint hatin on allikwarawkilla but some of your bars just weren't workin homie. keep at it though.
return dat favor links are in the sig............

This was feedback posted for allikwarawkilla
 

Feedback:

Killa you got owned man, your shits still not rhyming right
and your punches don't hit at all,.. no personals come on
so u should have the basics down by now.

I think your right to change to 2 line rhyming should make
it easy for u to rhyme.

Keep rhyming like this but u need harder punches.

stay up

1~

ayt i understand my lines might b 2 ghettofied or stretched sumtimes but damn i aint neva been told i dont rhyme....i rhyme every line i write u jus gotta pay attention....i kno peeps can read but sum times i feel peeps should go back 2 school cuz if u on a rap site n cant understand ur genre's slang u got issues seriously but thanx 4 da honest real shit though...im still workin on shit but ya'll also gotta keep in mind 4 da most part i speed rap so sum lines will stretch but i can do dat n still make it sound hot in audio...uppin this

shouldn't this be a KO?

upping, i guess i need 5 votes, hit this up and leave links

Voted For: Coherent.

This battle was a joke.

Coherent. won easily.

Vote: Coherent.

1 more vote please....and thank you :D

Voted For: Coherent.

coherent had better punches n he flowed...

alli i liked the way u started but u fucked it up in the

decent battle but co got my vote...

vote back honestly for my battle...its in the sig...

NO HATE ALLI...