J-360 vs SL.Valentino
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-14-06 at 04:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SL.Valentino has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-06 04:53 PM.

J-360 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-06 05:16 PM.

spit dawg.........................................

yo im here battlin my man
but everyone no he's my biggest fan
yo tino put in mind u stand in my way ur wat i'll ram
everyone will see u gat ur ass whooped by me on video cam
but ill tell u one thing man
u just lost dont come back or ill eat u up like a piece of ham

I need some votes here...uppin tha thread we need some votes

This was feedback posted for J-360
 

both are wack.. quite crap.. elevate.. its alright tho u both seem like ur just starting up get better and then re-battle.... right now im not voting because you both need elevation...

try good punches... try better rhymeschemes structures and personals... you most likely both dont have personals for each other because you havent found the search button on this forum.. goodluck in the future to both of you, switch over to audio sometime soon though its more beneficial.

This was feedback posted for SL.Valentino
 

:yawns: checkin polls

This was feedback posted for SL.Valentino
 

lmfao, WOW Elavation needed. for the both of you guys.

This was feedback posted for J-360
 

this is some of the most horrible shit i have ever seen on this site

This was feedback posted for SL.Valentino
 

sl u need structure b4 anything............
an 360 yours was just wack

*yawn* alright, advice taken...now some votes are needed to close this battle

it's a tie

you both lose .

co-sign on the dotted line

Voted For: SL.Valentino

i personally think st had better punchlines...

j 360 sounded like a little kid with his punchlines...step it up ma dude...

st got my vote..

well SL...imma kinda twisted but yea ma bad

Thank you Flip.
For the others I ain't talkin ur Critizism harsh, After all this is my first RV battle...

yo0o vote honestly back on my battle.....i voted for your battle...no hate just vote..

Voted For: SL.Valentino

yo SL got this hands down better meta and punches step ur game up

Voted For: SL.Valentino

yo dude you need to step you game up real talk you shit was garbage and first grade tino got this one

lol at da rippa again...if any mods is looking at this battle...take a look ar da rippa and lil rip....same ip n almost the same name...just to inform yall

Voted For: SL.Valentino



IP:

J-360?...More like J-180...
Your half tha shit you claim...
Thats half a faggit giving brains...
From what I see you in...
Is a faggit without a clue...
Running for tha dick...
Thats a faggit on the loose...
You say you don't freestyle...
Well Im calling you on....
I got my shit stirring smoke...
Like I'm calling a bong...shit
Your a fuck boy,
I'll Eat your food for Dinner...
Feed you more shells,
Than an Ol' Paso dinner...
When I picture you...
I see some talent ofcourse
Fuckin around wit Lil' Kids...
Like He's Malachi Yorke

I thought this was pretty terrible, but at least you attempted a few minor punches in that shit. Make your lines longer with a better overall strutre to your verse, its too choppy and all over the place, and throw a punch yo

VS

yo im here battlin my man
but everyone no he's my biggest fan
yo tino put in mind u stand in my way ur wat i'll ram
everyone will see u gat ur ass whooped by me on video cam
but ill tell u one thing man
u just lost dont come back or ill eat u up like a piece of ham

[b]You on the other hand, this aint no rap battle, im reading this shit thinking im reading a dr.seuss book or something. It was prolly the worst attempt at anything ive ever seen on this site ever, and thats being honest. you didnt throw one punch, nor did you even come close. I hope to god this battle was a joke and not you actually trying. good luck to you kid.

V/SL...........but it was a close one.

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Why is this thread still open?....................

Close this thread, and give me my win awreadi.....

Voted For: SL.Valentino

Wow this was awful.

J-360, his verse seemed like a joke. "i'll eat you up like a piece of ham" lmaooooo. Awful stuff.

SL wasn't really all that much better, but he was barely. Had some similes 'n stuff. So he gets this.

v/ SL Valentino