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Dreamin(WILL RTF*LEAVE LINKS)
Newest song by me PT
i love this song one of my best http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4549134 LINKS ======= http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235777 ===== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235801 |
I like the way you combined with that hook added or w/e. I like what your sayin, good topic. True Hip-Hop feel yup I done a track wit trip bout the same deal. Uh Your hook is good nice and soft then the verse hits with emotion deadly. I like the change of pace to the beat. Oh yea and that ebat is good nice shit. Pretty solid track man, I'ma download it haha. Got me trippin after a big session. rtf here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235833
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What's hot:
Vocal/track quality delivery/tone bass in the beat (haha*have a system now*) Consisteny of energy in the track What's not: Common lyrics in spots Overall: Very professional sounding track here. 1 |
aight good looks for both of you
once people wake up i'll rtf Q droppa link if you have somthin oh yeah,UPPIN BIOTCH :D |
Quit Sleepin
And Paranoid I"mma Get Your Feed Back After This Madden Tournament I"m Doing!!!! |
shit is nice man........even though like ya flow is same ya aint switch it up......but ya delivery is real nice on here man always feelin da swagga........ya lyrics are nice man......i'm feelin this joint rite here man......
nice track PT......man keep droppen...... pz ~1~ |
Listenin'...
Intro is nice, I like this... Beat is ol school..sometimes the drum is soundin like it skipping nah mean?.. PT...verse this is pretty hawt mayne... I feel the way u switchin the flow that crazy...and u talkin about hiphop in it essence...but it losing it i know what you mean... flow throughout is hot brotha...delivery is real good..quality is nice fam... I like how you jus spit it all throughh nah mean... and the hook is dope fam... feeling this joint right here.. beat not rlly my swag but u rocked this hot.. keep doing ya thing mr PT... I like ya outro btw, the way u talked it out... nice shit dawg.. can u rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showt...349#post3092349 thanks b... its p to tha r u knw the deal holla |
^i'mma get at you in a min
i'm gonna eat some breakfast lmao |
uppin on this shit dont sleep
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the beat is dope as hell.....flow is def on point....lyrics are up there too....everything i've heard from you has been dope....back to the song....beat fits the subject.....emotion is perfect for this joint....just really feelin this joint fam....good work....9/10
rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235858 |
uppin.....hjhkljkhjkhkljhkljhjkl
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wow..really feelin this so far......like the message.....flows good....lyrics not super deep but it's tight man....lol...man i do relate to some of it here........real talk here tho pouring your heart out.....good stuff,,,,,nice to see someone be real once in a while...nice track bro
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beat is smooth and just so cool..i liked the intro!..yeah u got a pretty good delivery,flow was just on point and i like switch..lyrics are so damn real and tight cos i'm like in the same situation...hook was iight but ur emotion on it was kinna too soft for the lyrics!...keep it up PT!
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alright if you all got somthin u want me to leave feed on droppa link
Sorry eastsyde i didnt see ur link i'llget on it today when i get home |
^hit my sig..thanx
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uppin
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aiight peepin....
like intro you like "dreamin' way my life", beat fits too. dope.... oh snap this like some old school beat. feelin' this man. like your delivery. nice and laid back... wow and then when you switch it that's tight.. LOL @ found like pennies under a couch. hook is illness. fire second verse nice too. your emotion is dope for this beat, all fits tight. good shit hook again. dopee like the heavenly gates opening up, is this you lord? damn dope outro too man. def a dope track yo. really feelin' this man. keep it up props.. 9.4/10 EZ |
love the intro, beat is hella dope, love how the songs starts, who's beat is this? is it a producer on soundclick, if yes please post the link, like the emotion, man this song is fucking dope, flow is perfect...........* downloaded *
Speats this your best track def. man wow bravo |
word up thanks for all the feed peeps!
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uppin yo
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next time you randomly upp a month old thread you can drop two more links
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thanks for informing me on this "new rule"
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beats cool, real ambient.
qual's on point. the content is on point and you keep it real, i just don't liek the packaging of the message, i like things more lyrical to say the same thing. some minute points you have a jumble of sound where it's impossible to make out anything being said. smetimes you gave up on the rhymeschme like at the end of the first verse where the last line didn't rhyme with anything. def don't wanna end a verse on a bad note liek that when doing the right thing is so easy. just by listening to how it's laid out i can tell what your frame of mind was when you wrote it. i like the concepts and what's being discussed in the song and i think it should be rewritten and layed over this beat again. payce |
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