Damn It's Been A While...New One From L.E: "Homesick"...RTF Guaranteed...
 

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First of all, I would like to thank everybody for helping me get over 150,000 plays. Props to you for listening lol.

Okay...this is a deep song about my own emotions...I just moved and I'm just venting on this.

Enjoy.

Beat by Shadowville.

Links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236461
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...77&page=1&pp=30

quality sounds better....

hmm i think the hook is coo..but could be mixed down a lil better...maybe a lil more reverb......kinda just to give it that more full chorus effect to it.....im not sure what it needs

beat is ok...u work it pretty well....im liking the first verse....as well as the second....flow is pretty good...i believe youve improved quite a bit since last time i checked u...lyrics are nice as well...

i dunno really what to say bad about this....good job...pretty good song u put together man...keep it up

Thanks man...uppin.

I spat to this beat before...slick

like the delivery on the hook...needs a little more oomph though
The lyrics, however, get the message across

You're riding the beat well...good quality


solid drop




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Thanks.

Uppin,,,all favors will be returned.

hook needs some better mixing. s' not the quality thats the prob, cuz it sounds good, but iunno, the panning or somethin is off. besides that it's good. flow is on point so far. feelin this topic tho. "why go back to the same drunk friends just so i can get sucked into all of it again" good shit. u sound confident on the mic, unique sound. u dont sound like anyone i've ever heard b4 atleast. lyrics are a bit simple but s' all good. emotion's there, presence is iight. not bad, keep droppin

I think i spit on this with Q awhile back, flow & delivery is str8, presense is good, the lyrics is str8, hook is catchy, over-all nice ish.


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...116#post3099116
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Your quailtys illy
This beats tight
Hook goes hard to..
You sound good prescense everything.
Lyrics deffinately get your point across for me, no "WOW" lines but its pretty consistent

Solid song

Thanks.

Up and away.

havent heard from you in a bit by by the sounds of it u havent put the mic down inbetween th e flow on the first seems a lil more crisp but your contnet in both were hella solid and your one person who has definately made the samson work for them as far as quality goes good shit L.E.

um..hook i dont really like it...there's something up with it cant figure out what it is,but the 'im so sick' is quite catchy!
lyrics are personal,i can tell u comeing from ur heart
your emotion on this was pretty adequate
your delivery is pretty good and ur quality is good too
i like the beat,your flow was quite simple,but u sipped off at some spots, imo shu be due to no enuff confidence..


this was a gd one tho..ur best i've heard so far!

Thank you...

Uppin.

quality is coo im likin it ehhh not a fan of the hook needs to be remixed i notice u have a lot of highs in your eq.....flow is coo so is lyrics yea u need turn down the his.....try pannin n shit....i like the reverb u got o n ur voice overall pretty nice song rtf on robot genecide

the beat is really dope , love the drums on the beat lol, nice intro,quality is good, dunno bout the hook, sgood, but the adlibs are not the best, Verse is pretty dope, nice flow, deep lyrics, i noticed you had probs with the adlibs, try to make them at the same time you know, good track, I listened to it yesterday and was Impressed , youre still elevating, seconds verse is better

Peace

:thumbsup:

Speats

not a big shadowville fan..but this came decent.....i guess....


hooks not bad....cant relate much, but i feel ya....quality is bad ass, dubs r off a touch here n there, beat gets nicer.....feel the rent line....and damn...i'm relating more..lol...yeah man....i hear where u comin from....hooks not bad....not super catchy....but not wack....2nd verse wrote nice....but not feelin as much...is a hit n miss track w me....certin lines click n some idk, i just dont relate to n sound out of the blue...3rd is gettin back into it, IMO you shoulda got into WHY shit is so fucked up, because theirs a fine line between whining and strugling....i get ur point here n know some history, but most dont....

anyhow...good track overall..but get outa ur funk, i'd like to hear some shit talk, or like more upbeat shit from you

feelin the emotion.....
feelin the hook
flow is like very fluid.....
lyrics.....they relate to the topic....nothin like hard hittin, but im into the concept
quality.....seems ok to me

this was coo......

well one thing i wanna add....the quality of the hook is kinda messy imo....theres a lil bit of everything goin on in there.....its like theres an echo and an adlib.....

so it kinda took away from it a lil