MoneyMaker vs Stackmann
 

Shiests NEWBIE BATTLES Part 1: "Let N00bs Cheat!"

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
Yes Crew Votes
Yes Recycling
Yes Biting

Free All, No rules

Battle Bitches

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-04-06 at 09:26 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

MoneyMaker has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-06 03:37 PM.

Pound for Pound I deffinately outweigh the nigga, Keep tryna get ya weight up but you get no bigga,
Yo ass run when you seem me so you aint a Gorilla, so while yatryna back track you will get capped with the pull of my trigga.

We The Source like Benzino, and ruthless like Al Pacino,
My lyrics are lethal, barely legal so you will have no Sequel.


This nigga is stepping up to The King imma say off with his head forr treason,
To get all those stale rhymes from his gums he needed MouthWash so he could spit something halfway decent.

Yall Starvin niggaz try to eat like ‘Pac-Man’ but im the Ghosts ill lay down the ‘Clapps-Man’,
Seperatingg you like a ‘faction’…so I know you caint fuck with my ‘Stacks…Man’!

ok therre it is....I take it you meant 3-4 barrs = 6-8 Lines

i dont need to Cheat so fuck thatt rule...........

StackMann has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-06 04:48 PM.

so you think your lyrically inclined to challenge anyone.
man you have a better chance aiming at your dome wit my mini gun//
i mean you say that your making money,in different ways. but todays a new day an im comming to take your pay//
leave yo ass out on a sidewalk, your fuckin wit stackmann and im spitin the facts,
so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
ill have your head spining in every direction, like ready set, release stackmaans leathal inject, the infection has you weak to the point you cant spit, so stop trying, cause your verses are shit //
---no beef

This was feedback posted for StackMann
 

you are both idiots write your own fucking lines chumps:shoot:
lmfao at tha rules
very gay

Voted For: StackMann

Pound for Pound I deffinately outweigh the nigga, Keep tryna get ya weight up but you get no bigga,
Yo ass run when you seem me so you aint a Gorilla, so while yatryna back track you will get capped with the pull of my trigga.
^^ a little too long nothin great here

We The Source like Benzino, and ruthless like Al Pacino,
My lyrics are lethal, barely legal so you will have no Sequel.
-nothin special here either


This nigga is stepping up to The King imma say off with his head forr treason,
To get all those stale rhymes from his gums he needed MouthWash so he could spit something halfway decent.
ok punch, could have said better

Yall Starvin niggaz try to eat like ‘Pac-Man’ but im the Ghosts ill lay down the ‘Clapps-Man’,
Seperatingg you like a ‘faction’…so I know you caint fuck with my ‘Stacks…Man’!
best bar of the battle, good wordplay

so you think your lyrically inclined to challenge anyone.
man you have a better chance aiming at your dome wit my mini gun//
not directed at anyone, weak bar

i mean you say that your making money,in different ways. but todays a new day an im comming to take your pay//
^^ a personal average at best

leave yo ass out on a sidewalk, your fuckin wit stackmann and im spitin the facts,
so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
^^ weak no punch, nothin

so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
ill have your head spining in every direction, like ready set, release stackmaans leathal inject, the infection has you weak to the point you cant spit, so stop trying, cause your verses are shit //
^^ talkin about urself and not ur opponent

V. Moneymaker


Vote switched

I did write my own lines........why would i need to cheat?

uppin keep em commin...............................

yea that guys wack cuz i wrote my own too

aight then mayne thatts good......upppin forr votes

Voted For: MoneyMaker

easyily took this...tha other mans verse was fuckin complete ass urs had some alrite punches an formatted better an rhymed..u win

aight thanx dogg more votes..................uppin

^^^^ OK i know you pressed the button forr StackMan but you said therre that you voted forr me....which one did you want?

This was feedback posted for StackMann
 

Cool. Dope Verse.

This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
 

checkin pollssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss..........

This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
 

1st bar: the first bar needed to be cut down and worded diffrent so that it could hit harder

2nd bar: i wasn't really feelin the first line in this bar....the second line was a little decent....u should probably used that as a set up for a punch

3rd bar: stretched again....same as the first bar

4th bar: i c what u were trying to do....but hate to say it to my a crew member but that line was a filler

1st bar: im not feelin this.... wasn't really standin out to me
2nd bar: uhhh....not feelin this either not really a punch....should have put something else as the second line.... because it was a filler
3rd bar: nope...mediocre ryhme schme was to simple....try chosin diffrent words....use better vocab
4th bar: this i feel was ur best bar....if u could have worded it better this would have been hot....

so my vote goes to money maker....by a hair........

Voted For: MoneyMaker

lol you wildin dog, killed him with the punches, better closer line....

Stackmann fucked his punches up with his wording....

You took this..

This was feedback posted for StackMann
 

im not voting, but if i did Stack would tak e it...

^^^ Then why didnt you vote forr him...anywayzz...vote upp yall

^LOL that's what I'm saying....

lol check his sig, he an anime-rapper....! Lmfao

Stop dickriding cartoons dog.

Voted For: MoneyMaker

Wack battle but Money at least attempted some parts of lyricism

ok thatts 4-0...how much longerr until this battle is a rapp?

stop texting about guns you fucking jokes................................this shit is getting outta hand strobe needs to get ip banning ma fuckers

Again....you want to vote on the fuckingg battle or keep beingg a haterr?...talk about you scarred to text us usingg the excuse "You dont text"...da fuck out of herre

Voted For: StackMann

my vote is for mm because stackmans verse was two simple mm just out did him in every catigory harder punches better sceam and overall injoyment personals were kinda lacking but still money had him there

yo i obviously voted for moneymaker so if someone could fix that

Wow it's kind of funny, How money maker won by consistant Dick Riding....

I won by Constant dickridingg huh?....you suggestingg I lost?...why dont you stopp me Pussy

I laugh at how you Call me Pussy, when your the one being Jammed with all these D/Rs

This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
 

lmfao at this shit

^lol y'all niggaz actin gay......

This beef is a perfect example at why we should be careful who we let on the internet....

But forreal though...........someone vote on my battle wit stackman, it'z goin on mad long...

ok 5- KO...someone add this to my recordd...forr real

Voted For: MoneyMaker

better structer wordplay and some good multis