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KiD IcKriS™ vs Froze
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 40 Check in by: 11-03-06 at 06:54 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
Froze has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-06 05:35 PM.
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Read my verse carefully to full understand it...I got this...
Iiight, this dog wants to accept my call out, like he actually got talent// The only time your "wet" is when you drool on ya self cuz ya must be mentally challenged!//1 Battlin me, on the 12th day of christmas, I finally recieved IckriS verse// Twin glocks, ready to rock, quick ta put a bullet in ya heart, but I can do alot worse//2 My flow is sick, put ya niggaz into dazes like you wuz on meth// If you utter my name it'll be your death, like my name wuz Macbeth!//3 The only time you could fly wuz if you had wax'n'feather back, do ya best// Cuz this niggaz name is ICARUS, like the nigga who tried to fly, but fell to his death!//4 I NEVER SAID I wanted to spit 6 barz to unlimited// So I'ma put bounty on ya head, now ya wearin the fitted//5 So unless you wanna be disqualified you better not spit past 6 barz// BUt you a dumbass unable to count you a retard, so I guess compliance will be a little hard//6 |
KiD IcKriS™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-06 05:51 PM.
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Look at me or 1 a my bro's..rollin up..you know wassup..Freeze
yer Froze,yah..cause i left you in tha cold..with no coat or gloves Said you would spray me..but i took both yer guns left yah cryin an screamin..liek a homless mom Jumpin ship..from yah other site..herd from tha new cumer WHITE that yah sucked tha dicks off..two other guys..did it 2 at time I wondered why..asked em how he knew this..he said he was tha other guy i cut his cheek with a butter knife..so deep..i could see threw tha other side made em bring me where..Freeze an his mother hide..cheap an its substadised he brings me to 2 bedroom crackhouse..where even tha young brothers high you might be streets..but not with tha means ta cut a guy theres no thug inside..you jest another fene..all day on tha fuckin pipe .............................................. haha froze freeze cuz he fux with ice |
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Voted For: Froze
Im only voting for the Money: Yeah Froze had better punchlines and was more to the point thatn Ickris "If you utter my name it'll be your death, like my name wuz Macbeth!" I hear that line all the time, but it styll had a good effect |
Voted For: Froze
wow kid ick u suck At least froze seemed to try both of you go read some tutorials in the tutorials section |
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Been goin on too long, vote up!...........................
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That's not really a smart thing to do...your already winning 2-0 next thing you don't is Dick Ridings comin' in voting against you brah
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That's not really a smart thing to do...your already winning 2-0 next thing you don't is Dick Ridings comin' in voting against you brah
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This was feedback posted for Froze
Fucking weeeeeeeak as fuck, dude.
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^lol forreal...
This iz a weak battle, vote up and get this closed alreadyy... |
Voted For: Froze
Eh...Your punchlines didn't connect so Great. But you still had the basics for them. Lines were a Little Stretched and your flow didn't fit well. But you had the killer instinct and the attempted multi's which were okay. That ikarus line was pretty cool, could have worded it a little better. |
Ah It cut off the part for Ickris.
Ickris verse was kinda basic, lines were stretched and that attempt at complexity and punchs didnt connect all that well. Both failed in that aspect. Ickris lines had a little bit of potential, but you need to work on the basics and structure your lines better to make them flow right. Otherwise, just keep practicing at it man. |
CAn two more people step up and vote?.............
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Voted For: Froze
The only time you could fly wuz if you had wax'n'feather back, do ya best// Cuz this niggaz name is ICARUS, like the nigga who tried to fly, but fell to his death!// Iiight, this dog wants to accept my call out, like he actually got talent// The only time your "wet" is when you drool on ya self cuz ya must be mentally challenged!//1 vs jack shit... Ick came horrible..no good punches even to bother quoting..... |
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Voted For: KiD IcKriS™
This verse wasn't good, but Ryp'6's was just awful. It was just a bunch of self-gloryish statements with no punches to it. U at least sounded more angry and came at him, tho none of your punches landed at all. I'm giving you this for not coming as wack basically. |
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Voted For: Froze
Froz won this shitty match easily. You both suck, but Froze was better. |
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