Bang With Me
 

Fucking bitch closed my fucking song when I fucking left feed. FUCK THE FUCK OUT OF YOU YOU FUCKING FUCK WHO FUCKING FUCK'S FUCKS! Bitch.

Anyways, leave feed on this song, BECAUSE I HAVE FUCKING LEFT FEED ON 2 OTHER FUCKING SONGS YOU FUCKING WILLA WHORE BITCH GASFDKGVAS:LG



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Anywho.....woot!!!!! @ the Eagles shout out :thumbup:


But anyway, I wasn't really expecting this from the sound of the beat, but it fits pretty nicely. Kinda sounds like some shit Eminem would spit.....except better ;)

thats the 1st time i really "lol"'d since idk when

multis is nuts here......voice is bad ass as always, lyrics is nice here man...periods b4 the letters line is sick, hooks nice

liked the 1st verse the most...bit more lyrical ...offence line line was nasty

good shit man man

jeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaa

to the tizzoppppp

boo eagles....go skins (hides in shame) haha i like this shit alot......needs another voice on it....a higher kinda voice...similar to mine......yep......very hype on this shit, maybe turn the beat up a lil to hit harder......might just be my speakers but yep......hooks got me sayin yall don wunna bang with me......even when thats not what your say9in haha...i like it...good shit

fuck willa letz vote onna new mod...........and btw dope fuckin track

Well Gee, thanks alot, fellas.

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k listening

i'm feeling the beat!

intro is cool...no too much talk!

whoa...u came in nicely!...yeah u got the right emotion on this!
your mixing was pretty good!...flow is melow and works with the beat tempo..
hook is quite catchy and sounds good!
talk about the lyrics,well,i dont usually like commenting on 'em but ima say they were alright!..theres a 'i'm spitting str8 to ur face' kinna feel on here...pretty nice..i'd play this again!

keep it up :thumbup:

wow..... the beat is nice..... but i dont really expect a "u dont wanna fuck wit me" typa track... its funny cuz i already heard this song, i listen to all of u and Ikes shit but NEVER leave feed cuz im lazy...

ur emotion is fuckin killer, and ur delivery/presence is ALOT different from most tracks, altho u have that heavy punch style like usual.... really FEELIN ur emotion on this

but sometimes ur vocals seem TOO loud for the beat.... overpowerin maybe

hook is decent, catchy, but alil corny or predictable i should say for the rhymin words... like the adlibs... but some of ur doubles seem alil too loud.... should be alil discreet

god damn at "put periods between the letters"

should put somethin in that free spot before the hook after the second verse.... maybe just an adlib, but its alil too blank.... hook really gets catchy at the end, but i still think lyrics for it are "meh" BUT it is a HOOK so its understandable

decent shit, i still like some of ur older verses on that mizxtape better tho... u and Ike usually compliment each other well on tracks

pc

Dude, let me tell you straight up.

I fucking suck at writing hooks, as demonstrated in this song.

you son of a bitch................


lmao..*doesnt leave u feed on anything*

but uhh yea...i dont like the emotion shit on this track samuel....i like your delivery best when its like.."no fun in dying"...that delivery works best with u.....so like...yea....

but coo track though

^^^^ i expect u to now leave me some feed... on ONE of the two new tracks... i finally decided to post some teamone tracks on RV... it seems like everyone forgot i/we existed

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LOL @ you flippin a "Hardkore" production beat. Drum pattern is real tight, i see you replaced the claps wit snaps instead. Gave it a better grind, smooth feel. Ight, quality is tight. But the topic doesnt really fit this beat that well. It was like, i couldnt really take your drop seriously over the high violins in the background. Vocals need to be turned down.

Ight you come in. Wow, some real violent shit goin on. Decent drop. Same flow and rhyme pattern. You didnt really take a chance wit changing anything, kinda took away from your verse, made it kinda boring.

Chorus - chorus is straight, I like the adlibs you added. Real good feel.

2nd verse......same as first. Just a lot of punchlines with the same pattern. Thought you might have switched it up a little.

Overall, decent track. To me, it was mainly centered around your quality and the beat. I would have liked for you to play around wit the topic a lot more and had more of a transition of your flow from one verse to another.

How do you mean?

What part, lol.............

How should I change it? Like, specifics.

Simple. Switch your flow for the second verse. Its kinda hard to explain without telling you in person how it sounds. But your first and second verse are very similar in the rhyme scheme. Like, your flow starts and ends on the same part on almost every bar. Its to the point that i can predict when your going to end your next line. Like in your first verse, "cause I'm still a illegal" and the bars that follow end on the same tempo in the beat. What i suggest is to "play" with it, or in better terms, have a "free flow" instead of following this template that you have throughout this song. The template is not a bad thing until you use it continously in a song, which makes it sound repetitive. Hopefully that explained what i was talkin about.

Listenin'....

beat is pretty nice....you come in with alota delivery....however ure voice is a lil whiiiney a lil bit on here put me off a bit...but u know flow is hot...lyrics decent...confidence is there...violent killa delivery like the RIP line....Hook cuda been mixed different..pretty nice still...shuda switched it up in the second with some quick lines but pnches are hot the baby line and the brave heart line...real punchline shit....YOU DONT WANNA BANG WITH ME!...hot hot hot..only thing is ya voice a lil rest is hawt..1

Haha I know I sound like a little whiny bitch in this shit. I was in the studio all night screaming, and this is like the last song I did, so my voice was really starting to go out.

Btw thanks for the feed.

Gotcha. Thanks for the advice bro.

ayo beat is real nice..feelin this..likin the kicks

intro is cool..like your voice

you come in with hella energy..damn man..kinda sound like you copyin ike's style..like that chargers line..this beat is nice..with that bass comin in..

hook - really feelin the energy..lyrics are simple and it works..

i dont think anyone has ever come on RV with this much energy..this verse is better lyrically than the first..like how you rappin on this beat..feelin this verse a lot more..

hook comes in again..real nice...goes on for kinda long though....ayo this beat is hot..good job


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