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Lyrical Assault (NGN DISS)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237133
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237137 It should be a Crime for the way I'm Hatin these Hoes Or should I call Him in...The Team is waitin' to go I'm past you, lyrically, slaughter you~ Call it Haiti Unlike you, A mistake~ RV's Unwanted New babies... MoneyMaker Called me Pussy, ViceVerse It's Likewise Cuz your action's rarely appear~ Like a Tennessee HighRise... I ducked your battle not for the sheer fear of the hunt (Hell Naw) I'd rather Humilate you Further and pull your pride from the Front Lesser MC's could Murk you~ Be Humble~ in this shit for Once I should charge y'all lot wit D.U.I- For Dick Riding Under the InFluence... This whole Beef is one sided - You have less buzz than XM Radio NGN Couldn't match me ~ Like the Male, Female Chinese Ratio... Enlighted and Convict - Defianately have less Bark than Bite You do the City good~ Recycling the shit you can't write... Get Creative {Please}~ You still posing that Hardcore Faggits Forget your Place - Your Freshmen amongst Sophomore... "Enlight. Diss {Check}, Blu diss {Check}" How many of you do I gotta Wrong...Before your Coming Correct? Calling this Beef? It's more of a Massacre... A Hotel Rwanda Sequel ~ The aftermath of a Calibre Back Stab Remarkable, Performed cuts with Excalibre... With Cynical Lyricists, we're dropping your days from the Calender... You could call this Tennis the Way Darth's Bringing the Racket... So Cyko better kiss his ass Goodbye~ Like Sheek's After Taxes What's up with Enlightened? The Squad's Disgrace: On Failure's Brink LM will murk your crew in Chain Reactions, You can call it Cuban Linx... Shiest got Money in the Bank - Punchlines make his face Fold... ...For I give him less credit than unscathed Mexican Pasos... I'll Lyrically Rape you - Serb it- Then Molest your 12 bars.. You children could show me your best ~ I'd rather be shown Madagascar Your Campaign 'll suicide ~ Next Generation Pearl Harbor... For your whole crew couldn't cut me 'here' if you were Ireland barbers... You Fucks want to play agent - Reverse the seven O double Cause NGN about to crash-n-burn like the Columbia Space Shuttle... Your Shit Flows and Talent - Prey on me like a hurtin' mantis I wouldn't believe that like Elvis Dyin' of Natural Circumstances... Money, I'm too complex ~ I'm not one for you to Decipher For your talent couldn't surpass 3 letters in a 2 multi Cypher... Even with D/R's - Cyko, Hoe - Your still losing to Smash a lot, Your Crew's Feedin' you that shit, Like a Domestic Warthog Trough.. BallerStatus Rappers? You must be some un-Heard-of Whores, You can call me Jurassic the Way I devour these Herbivores... ...Ummin...Yeah... |
hahahahahaha thats wat u get NGN u pussy ass niggas
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lmao what do we get a pussy ass diss u ppl can do better than this at any moment NGN could tear this site apart some real talk
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*Sign* You know wa ~6lu Loc~ your right, any one of you could Smash me, I should just quit rap and become a farmer... Fuckin...Idiot |
dogg im jus gunna say it ur skills sucC fa real i could tear ur lil 4-0 record apart
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Im gonna wait till you have more posts, Because I don't an IP battle would demean you in anyway...Don't worry double M I promise I'll set up a Pink Slip battle by thursday
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I thoughtt we was cool....aight then...but nigga..dont gas up this weak rhyme...the only good line he had on me is I got Money in the Bank...he couldnt even finish thatt one thoug so this was really whack...*waits to see all the Gas poured on this rhyme by others* |
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NIGGA, STFU. Your Feedback has no creditibility, You call bullshit "A work of art" |
wtf is a pink slip battle
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ROFL...if thatt was true I would have called this Pure Piff :laugh: :laugh: |
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loser gets banned from he site. |
Omega versus the whole crew......loser gets banned from the site
MONEY MAKER U BITCH!.......u need to quit stallin and accept my call out....... *taps foot*.....yall talkin all the shyt but no one wants to call out Omega I know u lil E-Thugs aint scared ......so the call out is still open........beef or not.....u guys are gonna quit tryin to battle these other cats that u think are weak and battle Omega....nuff said....... i can write up 160 bars CONSISTENT bars......within 24 hours quit fuckin dodgin and man tha fuck UP! Cuz your action's rarely appear~ Like a Tennessee HighRise.. should charge y'all lot wit D.U.I- For Dick Riding Under the InFluence... You do the City good~ Recycling the shit you can't write... You children could show me your best ~ I'd rather be shown Madagascar For your talent couldn't surpass 3 letters in a 2 multi Cypher... (hard hitters and humorous lines.....keep em comin) |
pink slip battlE? Fuck that, you aint making us leave that easily..
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Daubs thx for da info fam omega set it up no pink slip battle set it up
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Why, too Pussy? Punk ass E-Bitch |
naw cause eryone d/r for yallz aint no doubt about that
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no its cuz u suck...quicker u get of RV the better |
You piece of baby dick..
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lemme spell this out for ya since u to stupid to know who u is fuccin wid Y.O.U. A.R.E. G.A.Y.
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HAHHA Froze u Stupid.......... But aye thiz was a pretty good diss n Justice That Boi Shiest ill Rip Ya bitch ass Up Just like Tonz iz gonna Do Ni99a |
Kilo Tonz aint got shit on me u fucCin slobk tampon lookin mutha fucCa
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r U Serious Dude u got problems U SUCK ya Fake
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word is bond... |
This was decent.. flowed well.. metas were kinda shaky but not bad!
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The word of the day is.... ELEVATION.
After reading this, I can say Shiest you need some serious elevation. You've got the concepts down straight, but you lack in the wording department. The wording is what makes the punch and at the moment some of your bars come off sounding awkward. Also, other bars come across too simplistic and a simplistic punch only works if it is really raw and packs a lot of humour. If you were looking at this verse for audio then it would be nice. It flows well and has some punches, although they are not very strong punches. In text, there is a whole different style and you have to work on developing that style and increasing your ability to word punches better for maximum affect. That is the truth. Don't take my words the wrong way like an NGN herb. :) |
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Wow that's the most positive advice you've given me, So their is a nyce guy behind that huge ego of yours lol. Good lookin' for the feed still :thumbup: |
"Elevation" lets all I ever see when I receive feedback, I have no Clue what it means
*sigh* I could sure use a mentor... |
this is pretty dope for a diss no joke i likes
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