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L.E 12-02-06 02:25 AM

Week 1 Motivational Excersize
 
AUDIO HEADS:

Lucky you...this week's ME will be easy.

All's you have to do is make a track...something you do often anyway.

I will provide links to beats, and then you must use one of them, and the song must at least be 3 minutes long. The best three tracks will be awarded points.

1st Place: 4 Points
2nd Place: 2 Points
3rd Place: 1 Point

This is entirely optional.

Beat 1

Beat 2[/ur]

[url=http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=475117&songID=4724446]Beat 3


You MUST use one of these beats.

If you wish to compete, put down your name and which beat you are using.

TEXT HEADS:

An easy one for you as well.

Write a topical piece, minimum of 20 lines.

1st Place: 4 Points
2nd Place: 2 Points
3rd Place: 1 Points

You must use one of these topics:

Angel of Death
Angel of Peace
Angel of God

Sign up below with which topic you would like to write about.

These will all be due in one week, the same time the battles are due. To submit them, drop them with your sign up post.

Good luck.

Willa 12-02-06 04:47 AM

beat 2 and 3 are the same

L.E 12-02-06 04:49 AM

-_-

Fuck.

I'll fix it tomorrow lol.

Mad Dog 12-02-06 06:10 AM

ima use beat 3.

Stanza. 12-06-06 11:57 PM

Can I do both if so

Im gonna use the second beat ( i think thats it your links are messed up) its called hit em up

and Ill have my Topical in

Stanza. 12-07-06 06:33 PM

Here's My link To the audio Then .....The Name of the song is Hit em Hard and Its a Freetyle and i went Till the beat stopped but Soundlcik didnt upload it all lol So click this long paragraph and it will take you there

-Zone Out- 12-07-06 07:31 PM

Imma fuck with LE's beat on this
cause I am not feelin that VTZ shit at all.

Stanza. 12-07-06 07:51 PM

Everybody should freetyle their shit jus to be More Raw

KOOL COL-B 12-07-06 07:51 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=394056

lmao :cool: werd

Stanza. 12-07-06 08:10 PM

culby your song is wierd yet entertaining lol......I cant believe I listen to the whole thing bcuz when I herd your hook I was like :-\.......LOL....but yeah nice verse but you def coulda done betta

KOOL COL-B 12-07-06 08:14 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Stanza.
culby your song is wierd yet entertaining lol......I cant believe I listen to the whole thing bcuz when I herd your hook I was like :-\.......LOL....but yeah nice verse but you def coulda done betta


lmfao, tha chorus iz fucked, but its so ghey that its funny, haha. n werd, yo shit wuzznt bad fo a freestyle, werd

-Zone Out- 12-07-06 08:30 PM

we be down for B and E's and that aint bacon and eggs
thats when we run up in ya crib and we're breakin ya legs

Stanza. 12-07-06 09:22 PM

Aye cool Kool-B We should do a track together I got some beats that I made thats on my soundclick You should check them out and holla at me

Past Tense 12-07-06 10:28 PM

aight man i'm down for this

set me up on this

KOOL COL-B 12-08-06 12:59 AM

werd @ Will

Quote:
Originally Posted by Stanza.
Aye cool Kool-B We should do a track together I got some beats that I made thats on my soundclick You should check them out and holla at me


werd. i'll check them bitches out my spicca, should b illy, werd

Stanza. 12-08-06 07:19 AM

aii pm me when you know whats what .......................

Spektikul 12-08-06 11:35 PM

Well, since i dont see any topicals...

"Angel of Death"

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The End

LMAO, might get something, who knows...

but word, i meant to write one yesterday but ran into other things, sorry LE, wanted to do this tho.

TROUBLESOME™ 12-09-06 02:05 AM

ill do sumthing soon as i get my mic back from getting fixed hopefully by monday...........

Enygma 12-09-06 10:16 PM

Here's my shit :thumbup:


The Verdict's In

High-Dro 12-09-06 11:18 PM

Angel of death..............
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....................is my bitch

Ill Spanish 12-10-06 01:05 AM

strapped wth an AK as i walk in ya house
hold u at gun point n stick my dick in ya mouth
pull tha trigga... does that make me a necro?
then i leave to the club, where the bitches get low
but they aint dancin, naw spicca, they dodgin
n if they don't do it fast enough then a bullet gets lodged in
they white, soon to be red fitted hat
cause i'm takin they life, n they can't git it back
man i'm keepin it gangsta everywhere that i go
wether im slangin some shit, or bouncin the fo
up n down the street, rollin down the block
see u slangin in my spot, so i pull out my glock
punk ass mothafucka, had to get slayed
cause im cooler then aid, i better get paid
or heads gonna roll, cause im in controll
n if ya fuck aroud then ima fill you with holes
i aint to be fucked with, dont make me prove it
if ya ass is in my way, then you better move it
or i'll go up on the roof n start snipin yo ass
scared you shitless, so start whipin yo ass

DQ 12-10-06 02:18 AM

Angel of God

I feel it in the air, in the way her hair’s cascading down
And how she got my heart all open now...facts fading out
A masquerading frown, she knows I got everything to hide
When inside, the devil resides, waiting to unleash the fight
Preparing for a clash of titans, now the tension heightens
As she tightens herself, I find myself too frightened to delve
Deeper in the world of mystery, she’s a closed book to me
I long to be in her history...to make the pages flow freely
Ideally, I urge to explore but like an angel - she soars
One of those wars where the loser’s the one who adores
As she roars, she got the thirst of a tigress in these eyes
Rising her thighs, yet another devise to see my disguise
It is no surprise to see this sly grin appear on her face
My sin is here to erase if I win and not fear this race
I feel the pace change as if her lust is turning into rage
Her touch feels strange and suddenly her mind’s deranged
She is no longer sage, I am no longer safe in her claws
Because now I can recognize my flaws and how I was
Before...a beast...even if my son said no, I never ceased
The frustration had to be released, her anger increased
I try to evade her domain, she got her eye on my pain
On the brink of going insane, I feel trapped in her reign

I never meant to hurt our son, I swear my sweet hun
Everything I begun, I wish I could make it all undone
Please boo smile and don’t ruin our honeymoon night
It’s soon to be light, I already know I was a fool right


Then suddenly she smiles like her inner child is there
I am scared, if I reach out to her she goes wild I swear
I dare not move for when I do, I shall never pull through
Oh Lord...if only I had known before that she knew...

No sweetheart, you don’t want to play like that
I know you’re mad but...no...NO! (*SPLAT*)



_________________________________________


NEWSFLASH: LAWYER BRUTALLY MURDERED

On September 8, lawyer Daniel Price has been found death in a hotel close to his home in Santa Monica, California. Investigators were surprised by what they found. The man hadn’t just been killed, he had also been deprived of his member. The police claims it was a family drama and are now in search for the wife but there is no sign of her so far. The most important clue investigators say was the following...



This note was found:

My dear husband,

I bring peace to the mind, death to your life
The Angel of God is who you took as a wife



High-Dro 12-10-06 09:21 PM

pretty sure mine owned DQ...but..g/l

Spektikul 12-13-06 12:01 AM

^ pretty sure mine owned yours, lol...

...plus mine was on time, word.

Also Known. 12-14-06 03:42 PM

Trafic trafic
Lookin for a bad bitch
She needs to have one big booty and two big breast
A vagina all slimey for me to molest
I shall call my new girlfriend the angel of death
She's like a black widow gonna kill me after sex
sex sex sex sex sex
Burittos are good but tacos are the best
put my gun to your rhymebook to kill a damn verse
the angel of death smells like a bulgarian nurse
the rest of my lines are invisible
and if you dont like it look closely at my pee pee hole

P To Tha R! 12-14-06 06:13 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4776267

sorry being late they wudnt let me upload for some reason in the last week..so i had to reboot the comp n re upload it..there it is

SwervEz 01-14-07 03:25 PM

can i enter this??


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