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DaTrusHurtz 12-03-06 09:06 PM

Tony Brown (3-3) vs. Tha Don of Mics (1-2)
 
This is the final week of the season! Last week was absolutely pathetic, but with what should be only serious contendors left, this week should be better. I've gotten rid of groups for the final week, you all can now battle it out for a better playoff seeding. Top 4 get a bye, top 12 get in, drop your best

Battler #1: Tony Brown
Battler #2: Tha Don of Mics

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.

Cola 12-03-06 09:44 PM

checkin in...good luck

TonyTone 12-03-06 09:52 PM

y am i always the 1st battler?

check

Cola 12-03-06 10:03 PM

lol, sorry to hear that shit...we should do a quick drop...cuz i'm down to drop this shit tonight

Cola 12-07-06 01:11 AM

....can you close this now....i win...

TonyTone 12-07-06 07:34 AM

are u really gonna accept a no show win? pfftttt

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^

Cola 12-07-06 07:49 AM

no man...i'll drop later on tonight...thats straight bro...

Cola 12-07-06 07:55 AM

actually...i shall keystyle my shit and drop now!

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool

TonyTone 12-09-06 03:14 AM

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person

Spektikul 12-09-06 07:05 PM

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
LMAO!, i didnt even get this at first but that was a sick concept, pretty impressive yo.

VS

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
this was a good concept/flip but stretched bar

Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
this wasnt the best nameplay ive seen/stretched bar again

VS

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
this was okay but didnt really hit that hard

there were some alright concepts in this battle but tony shocked me with a funny ass punch in his first bar. Dons bars didnt really add up to that one, plus they were stretched too much for my liking. Although Tonys last one was sorta blah, I think he still deserves this, props to both, good job son,

V/TB............

TonyTone 12-09-06 09:58 PM

thanx spek. n word to that 1st punch lol

1-0

Cola 12-09-06 11:02 PM

god damn these battles take foreva' to get voted on..

Te Ora 12-10-06 02:04 AM

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
while i think this could've been worded better i liked the wordplay. punch of the battle
Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
meh


vs.



Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
ight idea i guess. but the set up was random, and wording wasn't the best. his 1st punch would've been easy to flip too.
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
nah. rhyme was forced & nameplay jus wasn't that great.


v/ TonyTone

REMIS 12-10-06 02:59 AM

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
coulda been worded better, was ok
Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
str8

vs


Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
blah
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
forced like fuck and didnt really come harsh, overall weak

vote - tony, one sided.

Cola 12-10-06 05:03 AM

....ok..i gotta say something (seeing as how this is the last battle of the season)

i really hate it when people write "bleh"...like wtf ...remis are you really that god damn dumb? Do you not understand how i flipped his first bar??

Jimmy Cricket had antanneas...you dick head....just..nevermind...good battle TT n good luck in the play offs...

i'm outty like a fat girls belly button

REMIS 12-10-06 05:54 AM

of course i understand that you flipped his bar, what are you suggesting i say that its a good punch because you flipped his bar... pffft, that punch was weak, you flipped his bar, yeah and ... that doesnt make it good.

Cola 12-10-06 06:21 AM

lol, i'm not saying shit....other than i'm outtie until this league comes back after the play offs....so why don't you suck my fucking dick?? Would you like to hear that??

Or maybe i could flip it around for ya..and you can take my dick out of your mouth...??

what one works better??

Diet Coke 12-10-06 09:53 AM

Tony
The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
And then of them... nice..
Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
Not the biggest fan of this one..


Don
Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
This is beyond stretched, ruins the punch..
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
This was whack..

Vote: Tony, his first punch killed Don.

N.Tavarez 12-10-06 11:58 AM

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
nice wordplay never seen it before

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
nah not feeling love hurts wordplay

vs

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
good idea, the wording couldve made it ill, like the set up and shit but good

Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
anotehr good idea that needs better execution
you getting better though, just work on th e wording so the punch can hit harder and keep at it don

this is close cuz i aint feel tones last punch and dons last punch had potential but not executed right , so based on the 1st two bars i would hafta give it to tone
v/ tone

but don i see the improvements in you weekly, keep it up

Roger Glocks 12-10-06 01:15 PM

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^

^^ya nice concept n cool wordplay

vs

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated

^^hmm nah

Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool

^^not feeling man

vs


Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person

^^ lol aight lil old but still effective

v/tony ....easy

DaTrusHurtz 12-10-06 05:21 PM

The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
like everyone said, fresh but wording was kinda forced

vs.

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
Jimmy Cricket idea was a good idea for a feed, but wording is off
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
nah, too stretched and not really a great nameplay

vs.

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
simple, not much really to this, but it was okay

Tha Don, work on making ya lines not as stretched and read better.

Vote - Tony Brown

Cola 12-10-06 06:00 PM

aight, well thanks for the help...when does the next season come about?

DaTrusHurtz 12-11-06 12:32 AM

There will be a few weeks of playoffs then a few week grace period then a new season

Tony Brown WINS 4-3
Tha Don of Mics LOSES 1-3


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