NEW ****PRAH'JECT - STARS (this is real right here)!!!! *****
 

AYO so y'all want me to spit something real..yall didnt know I did this shit ya dig..but heres one of the many real tracks on the mixtape..it's called stars produced by RV's own JD..whaddup kid!..holla at me..1

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238092
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238093

the track really is different
u sound real
flow is nice like always

overal nice track

............. q dont

.............. dotn get yourself banned again

yoooo ripped that beat mann!, likin' this a lot, emotions real nice on it, delivery and flow are sickkk, yeerr real nice track mannn..keep up the good work :thumbup:

you sound a lil too up on the beat.....like tense i think it is....it would be alot better with a more laid back flow...the hook needs to be mixed again....like you didnt do good with the hook, the dub is too loud takes away from the flow....some things could be upped on production here. n the way you approached the song, but the lyics n flow was straight.....rtf on "fly away"

listening now

The beat is raw so far

the quality is really good

im def. diggin the concept of the track

WOW this beat is really hot :O

but the flow is good......lyrics are tight to.....i just think you should have changed ur emotion up in some spots...but this is def. a nice lil track

sounds like a good album track


Best song i heard in a while from you..glad u came real on this

apreciare that..ay 286 u stop likin the shit since i left oyd lol but ay thanks yall n i fele u jay

listening


i like this beat!

your flow is steady and ur rhyme scheme too...i'm liking it!

your delivery is better than the usual on this...and i think your emotion is just in point!

i'm liking the lyrics too...hook sounds gd except that u panned it to the right too much!

yeah u ripped this...i enjoyed it pretty much!


keep doing your thang...i'm a fan so keep 'em coming!

glad everyones likin the beat, I DID THAT SHIT!! LOL :laugh:

^^yup yup......that's whatsup

The beat is amazing
Like I told you on aim
The first verse is hard.
I was feeling the "izzers" ya dig?
The hook is fire too, its just missing something, I dont know. But its still good.
The 2nd verse is great aswell, nice way to end the track. I was feeling the 1st verse more though. This is a very good song, man. You get ALOOOOT of props on this. This shows you are very versatile in rap. Real Talk.

you left oyd? when did that happen? man im out of the loop

yeh JD reppin UK with this beat nice work fam

im feelin the flow on this i like how you had a different flow on the first verse...lyrically it sounds like you put a lot of thought into this...you fell into the feel of the beat real well which is important as it makes it sound like a complete piece of work...that would make a nice album track fam

~peace~

Q joined..that's what happend ya dig

Beat.....is nice and feelin the stress of the word 'guuuur' or whatever it is....sound good.....and nice flow....and the lyrics sound like u thought alotta about what u wrote no bullshit feel me.....Whoa hook is nice tooo really feelin the stress of words at the end.....dope shit here man....real nice on this joint.....overall 10/10 RV rating real nice....damn but no d/l haha

Already heard some of this a capella, must say it comes out even better on the beat. Man I love this beat, props to JD for real!

Aight, first verse on the Kanye West tip hehe, I like ya flow here, going into diff style with the "izzer" ish.
You keepin ya lyrics on a real level you know, keeping it quite direct and raw which is enjoyable to listen to, ya dig? (hah)

Hook...hmmm...i dunno who said it but the shit is going too loud man, tone it down just a little. I like it but it ain't wowing me...you had hooks in past that were more catchy than this one but it's good nonetheless

Second verse, switching it up again. I really enjoy seeing this different side of you, not hearing ya signature flow but something more daring and maybe challenging for you personally.
The lyrics...like I said, you speakin on what you find important, on things you care about and I can hear it. Got a more laidback delivery which suits the track.

I wanna see more shit like this, see u growin as an artist day by day, keep raising the bar



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Thanks ma......