NEW SPUL!!! HE'SSSS BACK!!!!!!!!!! "I Love You More" (GUARANTEED RTF!!)
 

Word finally back from the hiatus and shit. Tryin' some more REAL type shit. lil singing going on in hook, don't hate :D But yea, this was more a song I made for ME more than for anyone else, but if y'all like it than that's even better but word check it.

www.soundclick.com/itsdakidspul

LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237888
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237591

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the intro is dope, hook s fucking great but ur flow in verses just sounds the same in your every song..the third(?) verse is kinda dope and different

overal dope track

Listenin'...

Yeh man I told u the hook u ripped like em did..I like yours more..lol more rape like...

Verse 1: I like your energy and delivery that stood out in this track..Flow was good also..nothing wrong..quality is good...

Hook again man..I like this more then em's rofl..fo real..

Verse 2: I like how you switched the flows and with the punch in's sometimes I can't hear what ure saying..."tasting you" eww..rofl...multis are crazy...

Hook..

3rd verse..more rapist like..best verse in here...flow good...delivery and energy is dope and each verse..im feeling it..ure emotion in this is good..

wait's for the pedo-hook lol..whistles..hmmm..here.we go..

man u are gonna grow up to be a rapist rofll..it's a dope way u did this shit like em but i like this better...

holla atcha boy ima d/l/ this

LMAO @ "The more that you slap me, the more it turns me on"

Dope track man.

Beat is slick and unique...love it

Pls. RTF on "Make Way"

Like how u flowed on this beat

very infectious production

slick shit man


8/10


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word appreciate all the feedback y'all. RTF's done... uppinnnnn

Listening....


I'm digging the beat man. I thought your hook at the beginning had the layers off a bit. You had some flat lines in the hook too, but I can't sing either.....lol. I don't really like your swag too much....I think it's the way you pronounce words, but the delivery of the song is pretty nice. The part where the beat went silent sounded off somewhat. Lyrics weren't bad. Overall, it was a pretty good track.....just not my kind of thing. :thumbup:

coo thanks. uppppppppppp

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ok another eminem remix...hmmmmmmmmm not use to you talking about something in ya song but I agree wit engyma I didn't like ya swag well really ya delivery/demeanor...its was too focused on anger an stressing words...u shoulda went with a sumber depressed demeanor...it woulda worked better wit beat...flow was too percussionary....a off snare slightly faster flow woulda done so much better....also u was too focused on mimicing eminem instead of making it your song, u made it your version of his....lyrically I liked it, it wasn't perfect an was kinda corny lol but its def a different focus for you....hook again u mimiced em..it woulda been so much better if u came wit ya own melody...u delivery it too flat as well....u really needed to stress the words more but it was mixed pretty tight. overall song was a 7/10 for me it was good becuz it was different but it coulda been executed so much better but keep experimenting an showing ya full artistic range.....1

^word man appreciate it

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hook is monotone in places some o spul i knwo you can go higher lol
3rd verse is best on the track flow is different you usually use the same flow on every track like you did on the first and second verse
cool track though

^word appreciate feed homie G :cool:

Audio feedback from a text head... the best kind. :thumbup:


First off I have to ask. Do you have like different voices you put on for songs because I've heard most of your songs and your voice to me sounds different in several of them.

Anyway, this was a pretty sweet track. The beat is cool and your flow is solid. The multies are fucking crazy in places and its like you just go on and on and on without even taking a breath. I thought the way you attcked the song with the aggressive nature in the lyrics added something extra to the song. I know some people were against that, but difference of opinion is all I guess. The third verse by far was the better and I thought it had the most solid flow and just came across as a more appealing sound to my ears. The hooks was nice, an improvement on your singing from some of the older songs you did when you were hitting some high notes on a female level. So yeah, overall a decent track... not your best but still not even close to your worst.

SEVEN out of TEN.