Paradyce - If The Streets Don't Kill Me (New Quality Playa!)
 

www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
www.soundclick.com/paradycecan

All by me...2 verse track

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238833
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3128958

Dude...u do know there's a rapper names Pair-y-dice right?

ur voice has always sounded good on track...But, u suffer from no-rhythn-itis


Ur swagger cud stand a shot of insulin

the hook is lackluster...like u weren't convinced of it's potency


decent track that could have been better...>Dawg, in 2 years of rappin, u have not elevated to the next level with ur delivery...u still sound rigid on track...Come on man

get it together and you'll be very enjoyable to listen to



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i've only been doin it 1 year Q lol..but pretty close to 2 but yea I'm trying. and yes i know there's a dude named that on rb. but i dont care cuz im original with my name...it's my real fuckin name so fuck him.

LOL @ jackin' pair-a-dyce's name

nah it's my real name muthafucka

Listenin'...

quality is better...yeah I see you working on the delivery...flow is off tho packin' too much in here..presence is gettin better..less monotone here..lyrics are nice..

I like your hook idea jus was amateurly done and I don't like that bound 2 believe..n that thing..cuda been sumin hotter..

but this was real nice shit..1

lol @ your name, been had this name since before you existed, so fuck you

^^LOL

hahahah




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w/e cuz it aint like canada gonna hear bout you...my name is my real muthafuckin name i was born with and i aint bite shit.

Lmao.... *Dead*

I already work with two people from Canada so LOL @ that. And word, how old are you? If you were born with that name, I can respect that, just it's funny that the myspace and soundclick in your sig both have "paranoid" in them. I really dont have beef with you, just don't run around saying fuck someone that you don't know. Keep it 100.

Lmfao @ someone name being Para Dyce
wooowzers

lmaoooo oh man wtf rofl

LMAO @ Para-NOID turning into PARA--DICE

HAHA...and, if that's "real" name, someone named you after a gay stripper.


lol...Para-NERD.






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rofl at stripper..duke's name is Paradis...

I guess i can admit to changing th spelling with the y and the c....but my name is Paradis...without the e cuz it's french. if you want I can have a different net identity but i aint changin my real name man. to many people in my city tellin me i bit paranoid and shit so i had to do somin.

The beat:I like the beat..th epianos an strings..sorta of reminds me of D-block-ish

Flow:It seems like u have to adjust ur tempo a bit...take sum of the words out to fit.but overall..u have energy an sound aggressive.

Lyrics:sum parts are decent..the rest seems to stray off subject at times..but still the hook is pretty cool..."I never walked alone in my own hood"<--lmao.pretty slick.practice on ur vocals..pronounce the words a bit better..

overall/-the quality was pretty good..did u use a compressor or not..it sounded like there was sum air in the vocal part..but still I like the hook an sum of the verse..just needs to be livin'd up..a bit.IMO.

keep it movin,props.