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DaTrusHurtz 12-31-06 10:43 AM

The LBL Cypher
 
LBL Cypher Rules:
  • No line limit, drop as little or as much as you want.
  • You can drop however many times you want, keep in mind you'll have a better chance of winning the more you drop.
  • The winner will be announced in the next magazine.
  • If you win the cypher you are able to have a win added or a loss removed.

okay 12-31-06 05:00 PM

this was too indeath in the elavation ya'll need to start dropping

so this geek thinks he got some rythem an blues
when he only got soul when im done stompin'em wit my shoes
you lose,an my uppercutts an jabs are hotter
so im breaking In..faster than day time robbers
you fuck wit the coppers,snitching he won't think twice
putting sucha bad name to death god gave him eternal life
damn im nice,an your not felt by others son
so this I D can be valid an still wont be accepted by anyone
i got the gun, so everyone popin at you an thats the facts
this'll be the first time bullets'll touch more I's than contacts
on wax's, i'll kill'em an leave his face long gone
death suppose to be south but
....my uppercutts'll send him north proving the bible wrong
so your responsable for the cypher 30 bar of garbage trend
the only good part of that was naming fab's last cd at the end
so i'll hit you wit the club witout a fucking caddy
knocking ya body outta FLA an you can bet that on trick daddy
i stay on the block pushing ho's like you with no concern
cause i stay hanging so long my dick got rug burns

lolol i'm fucking drunk as fuck key'n shit

Comedian 12-31-06 05:15 PM

Your skills ain't nice kid, have patience, Ben
truth be told, that shit DID belong in the elevation thread
you stay strugling to write nice, done kept ya head up
took a snapshot of ya skills but it couldn't get developed
you're hungry for just one win, and it's fucking dire fam
Comedian is here to crush that Kraven... like Spider-Man
i'm beating you till your dizzy and shit, my texting is owning
and if you feeling light-headed.. that's the direction ya going
you Jam - it's the middle of ya name, no shit is plainer
I Jam... the remains of your corpse into a fucking incinerator
you a virgin, using your name as an excuse, lame as ya shit
girls call your Missed'er - cause you have no aim with ya dick
I CUM WITH SICK FIRE LIKE STDS, THAT'S TRUTH I'M HARDEST
^^maybe now i'll be like you & claim drunkness to excuse the garbage

okay 12-31-06 05:33 PM

aaiiiigggghhhhttt check it
i aint coming with weak lines about you pushing jokes
cause you wont be saying punchs with a hole in ya throat
that line was jus to give ya hope...
that You dont wear jewls, cause its a known fact that ya broke
the only pussy to rock rope necklaces made of actual rope
i'll blow half ya brains on ya half rate couch
so ya rhymes get facilitated from a halfway house
i'ma beast an you'll be recieving a beating
so i'll be throw more C's in the air than a crip meeting
cuz I have guns to blaze, cats amazed of the semi
that'll leave a hole in the roof of your mouth that resembles a chimney

Get at me bitch

Crime 12-31-06 07:13 PM

^this kid must be dreamin that rhyme was a joke...
u could find pacs rhyme book an still have no hope...
im the most feared Emcee... in the whole goddamn RV...
its new years eve... so im ready to party...
lemme call ur mom... i got a box of mags an bacardi...
cuz u dont smoke... all u do is blow like a shotty...
i dont bark... but i do got more bite than a rotti...
my gun spark... leave donut size holes in ya body...
this is crime.... but u can refer to me as the don gotti...
this fag mr benjamin... is compensating for suttin...
he aint got no dough...this fake c-note really need to stop frontin...
he aint no stunt... he just a chump...
thats the one in jail wearing pumps...
getting passed around like a blunt...
i dont front.. i tell the truth even when i lie...
but its new years eve so fuck the beef lets all get high...
* passes the blunt to benjamin*
its ok take a hit cuz its gonna be yo last...
cuz i put that 45 to ya chest as u inhale an blast....

okay 12-31-06 07:16 PM

ssonn that shit was so bad its worst than a blah
i can only explain it as a hahahahahhahahah
thats all you get

Comedian 12-31-06 07:35 PM

Ben already got served, my lines will hoe clowns
consider me justice...
cause when he faces me, Crime will go down
that was horrible bad, i'll rid dude of himself
you're shockingly wack and electrocuted yourself
sorry for the extra work DaTrus, but dude isn't worth it
i just feel bad that you're responsible for the funeral service
i see your Status'... both you kids is rattled
if you dudes are what's on then i'm switching channels

Crime 12-31-06 08:10 PM

why everyone gotta be spittin subliminals...
i mean justice an crime dont affect this criminal...
why dont yall just come out an say it...
yall hatin cuz im in the industry an yall never gone make it...
i dont fake it...
an comedian.. u worthless peice of shit...
how bout u do RV a favor an suck on a dick...
maybe that will shut u upmaybe ya mouthll still be running...
but u ride so much dick thats y u never saw this cummin...
im blunted.. i stay high... three sixty five...
im gunning... an blaze high...leave u livin in the sky
like ya name was T.I...
dont be mad cuz u cant see my...lyrical skills...
cuz it takes more than mr benjamins to pay my bills...
i slang my crills.. while u still working on the block...
feinds come like clock work...
while u just working for the cock...
:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

Faime S. Quotez 01-01-07 08:54 PM

^If this dude owes you money, don't even expect a dime, okay
cause he's just broke as fuck. .
....and yall wonder why Crime don't pay!

Crime 01-01-07 10:20 PM

the reason it dont pay is cuz yall bitches is heros...
im the villian... but youll still get dropped....
like the towers turning into ground zero...
that one hitter quitter bullshitter subliminal...
message refering to my alias is minimal...
but the damage ima do to ya reputaion is critical....
rippin ya fame s. on delivery... u cant get at me...
cuz i drop Quotez... like i drop bombs on my enemies...
oh an just incase i forgot to mention...
im a fucking general Fame ass stand at attention...
u cant possibly come at me wit one liners dawg...
cuz its impossible to hit a moving target in the fog...
if i had a mic id rip it but i would rather use a blog...
so u got written proof i fucken hit u in the jaw...

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 02:53 PM

Stop posting your verses, cause everything you dropping is fake
now, I'ma 'shit on Crime' like having diarrhea while robbing a bank
.
.
You keep rhyming the same words, that's why ya keys aren't felt.
so everytime you drop a verse, it's whackness repeating itself
Out of all those punches, none hit me.. your aim's just slipped
your punchlines must be dead... cause they'll always be missed!
You walk around, thinking you actually spitting some flames
but try something new with ya punches. .
....how about making sense for a change!
The next time you decide to bring ya pen and sheet to bang out
I wanna see quotes in your verse. .
....and don't use my name as an easy way out!

RaI$Ed 01-02-07 03:00 PM

School boy, you should stick to notes/
no need to cuss in a screen play , to see the bitch in ''Quotez''/
Your rhymes are weak, you should take the day off/
i can tell your from cinci niether of yall can make the playoffs/....

Comedian 01-02-07 03:23 PM

i'll soak you in gasoline when bleeding your phase
then throw the match... giving a new meaning to Razed
watch this lame pretend that he got money, fame & friends
poor fuck... i'll smash the dollar sign in ya name to cents
you registered today, New to RV, but kid ya'll die
i'm a nice guy so i'll show you a round.... in ya eyes
^cause when my bullets go, running is foolish & shit
the only chants you got... is at your fucking funeral kid
look @ Faimez closer, what he wrote is some wackshit
I dunno about in my verse, but we'll see Quotez in a casket

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 03:24 PM

^Raised, that's my 3rd time seeing those lines. Come original.

Why everytime you see my name, you come with this rap?
no matter how many times you post it, it's gonna be whack!
Stop acting like it's hard-hitting, cause it was never hitting me
it's gotta be whackness repeating itself. .
....cause it was never history!

Apex 01-02-07 03:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Crime
the reason it dont pay is cuz yall bitches is heros...
im the villian... but youll still get dropped....
like the towers turning into ground zero...
that one hitter quitter bullshitter subliminal...
message refering to my alias is minimal...
but the damage ima do to ya reputaion is critical....
rippin ya fame s. on delivery... u cant get at me...
cuz i drop Quotez... like i drop bombs on my enemies...
oh an just incase i forgot to mention...
im a fucking general Fame ass stand at attention...
u cant possibly come at me wit one liners dawg...
cuz its impossible to hit a moving target in the fog...
if i had a mic id rip it but i would rather use a blog...
so u got written proof i fucken hit u in the jaw...


Yo stfu kid, your like the worst I've seen for a minute yo...

Get out of here, truly you suck kid,
Text isn't your thing, then again, ROFL wtf is?
This kid's shit...
This kid's shit, this kid's shit, this kid's shit,
^If that's 1 BAR, you were just too weak to lift it,
Bitch nig, dizzy? then bitch give up the beer,
Such an idiot...
Since your basically dropout kids' main career,
You suck, your just plummeting dude,
You'll never smell the stench of victory...
But yet we're stuck smelling you,
I don't have to come hard, you've got some poo hope,
You diss yourself...
I spark the AK, just some more whack shit that you wrote,

LMFAO. This verse was pure fun and took about 2 minutes to key up. Yet I still killed anything you'll ever put up in your life. Quit kid, seriously.

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 03:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
I dunno about in my verse, but we'll see Quotez in a casket

He doesn't know about his verse, but he'll see Quotez in a hearst.
...which means, "I'll be dead before you see quotes in his verse!"

RaI$Ed 01-02-07 03:38 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
i'll soak you in gasoline when bleeding your phase
then throw the match... giving a new meaning to Razed
watch this lame pretend that he got money, fame & friends
poor fuck... i'll smash the dollar sign in ya name to cents
you registered today, New to RV, but kid ya'll die
i'm a nice guy so i'll show you a round.... in ya eyes
^cause when my bullets go, running is foolish & shit
the only chants you got... is at your fucking funeral kid
look @ Faimez closer, what he wrote is some wackshit
I dunno about in my verse, but we'll see Quotez in a casket



You re not a rapper or comedian so ima just laugh at this actor
all of rv wants you to leave, the only time they say ''stay com'' is during natural disasters...

Comedian 01-02-07 03:57 PM

I'm bombing ya man, better off tossin' ya plans
Cause we ALL know I got Faime in the palm of my hand
Comedian the king of this, you can't duck my rule, dude
The only reason you a scholar is cause i fucking schooled you
& Rai$ed, not a chance! but don't doubt my keys
i just make it a rule not to battle bitches outside the league
just let up... i know you're shaky & nervous, but yo
you wanna Set-Up the battle,
it'd prolly never end - cause in your verses they don't
^the wording was off, but don't mess with it child
i was just experiment and testing your style

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 04:13 PM

Comedian talking, but Raised called him out in a battle to rap shit
and you know what they say.... whackness recognizes whackness!
I am a scholar, all becasue Comedian taught me how typing works
thanks for schooling me... now I know how not to write a verse!

Comedian 01-02-07 04:30 PM

fuckouttahere with played shit, i done bucked this nerd
i dunno what suffers more from ya flips: your stomach or verse
look, my punches are flowable, and dawg, you're not
we all see your shit is stretched despite the smaller font
you've no clout... so it's easy to damange ya writtens
and i'll take your vocal cords & strangle you with 'em

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 04:47 PM

So what I use a different font than you, I'm still invincible
and I insist you use a different font... called "invisible"
You gotta be new, looks like ya never dropped punches before
cuz yours are so whack... I can't even call em punches no more!
Wording is off, shitty concepts.. everything you drop needs work.
I haven't seen this many flaws... since Raised dropped a verse!

Comedian 01-02-07 04:57 PM

you can't weather my reps, don't even doubt it dude
you're tryna hold W's & i'll knock the win(d) outta you
ya feeding reminds me of pharmacies, you ain't preparin'
cause all of your counters are coming with generics
forfeit ya stuff kid, cause this whore is just rubbish
better off posting voting links
cause they connect more than ya punches

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 05:26 PM

You defeating me, if your verse ain't from God, that's a never.
your whack punches couldn't do it....
and I don't think played wordplay'll do the job any better!
You'll get dissed when ya battle me, til ya missing some calories
piss on ya strategies, admit that ya getting ya style from me
Talk shit like ya bad as me, and shots'll hit ya dramatically
turn this bitch to a casualty, and add to the list of fatalities

Comedian 01-02-07 05:43 PM

you're a scholar,
so it's fitting you learn to seperate dope from nonsense
here's a tip: never focus on multies and forget about content
my shine is blinding, man whenever i'm rhyming facts
i'll beat you with one hand when my both arms are tied behind my back
sonning the weak, i just read the mag, i'm done with this geek
wow - congrats yo, you got the second wackest punch of the week
you've been torn & ripped before, but i'll rock him fair
DaTrus was scared to give your ass the boot cause it might get lost in there
you're a frail bitch, and no - your demeanor and scary kid
but Faime always hit the bench - cause that's where he lives

Faime S. Quotez 01-02-07 11:03 PM

Yeah that's me, but I be rushing everytime I drop punches.
while you posted some of your top punches. .
....and didn't come close to the "Top Punches"
Your name only got mentioned from your cypher verses
which means, in ya weekly battles, they don't like ya verses!
What you type is worthless, so how are you dissing me?
when the only reason ya name got mentioned, was from sympathy.
But I'll admit, you get some good applause while being on stage
and the most applause you get, is when you're leaving the stage
And I thought the audience enjoyed your performance
til I watched ya show, and couldn't hear you.. over all the snorin'
You're pathetic, I'll drop you with sentences or statements
so the next place you'll see Comedian's face...
is imprinted in the pavement!

Black _Star 01-03-07 12:00 PM

You may not like me but you will respect me,
I was Raised By Comedian's so his mama Apexs me,
I have a confession ya mama didnt call me but she was always textin me,
I spit Like Weezy Fuckin baby please beleive,Im Fabolous so I make hard fa you niggas to breath,and make ya faget how to say ya ABC's,
To the rest of you hatters you are now dismiss,Cuz I got so much green people think I stole Christmas.

Comedian 01-03-07 01:13 PM

how can noobs approach this when i flawless vets?
Black will take so many shots,
that alcohol poisoning is deemed the cause of death
i'll blast kid in the stomach, you're finished man
but word, he DO got guts... but they in his hands
i'll attack your cardio, too when i punch this fuck
if ya heart starts to murmur, then i'll shut it up
this pussy is in a poetry club, knowing C will blaze him
but when i snap YOUR fingers,... it ain't appreciation
try topicals, ya can''t battle - what you writing sucks
fuck a chorus,
my shit comes with hooks... kicks & any type of punch

read, study & learn.

Black _Star 01-03-07 06:41 PM

Yo you's a Joke Im put you in yo place and I dont mean no horm,
Yo me bein Drunk you the one typin ya keys all wrong,
all yall bitches I seen ya thongs,
sorry to you females I aint leadin you on,
I see yall just attrached to the watch that freaze my arm,
While Im wit ya moms you greezin ya palms,
u ain't funny so you can just leave it alone,
Im hear and aint nobody takn my throne.

okay 01-03-07 08:27 PM

son you aint shit, even if you ride till ya die
only a black star in the crowd of 106'n park being shown live
i'll send a uppercutt that'll undefine any type of hit
it'll knock you so far in the atmopshere,
.......they say fuck a star thats a plant
fuck this.....you wanna bann me okay just try
when ya have to do the same to ya girl the way she dick rides

Crime 01-03-07 08:46 PM

who is this cat tryin to go against the top gunners...//
his name black.. so its unlucky that u facin me...//
cuz now ull be one of the top runners...//
but the only thing rivald by ya feet...//
is ya mouth when u speak...//
im out looking for a win...//
while u simply out of ya league...//
dont ever try to come at the top playas of rv...//
u fucking wit a general now...//
i already got an army...//
oill leave this assumptive emcee disrupted...//
a disorderly conductive...
abusive assault to ya fuckin mental construction...//
see i done tackled many men... wit my lyrical skills...//
so who da thought... that my tounge was already to kill...//
better lay still... cuz its hunting a meal...//
leave u on an ice rack... cuz its my nature to chill...//
my lyrics make ya stomache upset like ulcars...//
im verbally beating this kid till u see blacks planet fuck stars...//
im like a broken totem pole... dawg u could never top me...
hte way im making black fall.. mther nature should adopt me...//
i hit bitches constantly like enter on ya keyboard...//
an im blowing ya spot up like 400pounds of c-4...//
so forget a bodycast... homie try a bodybag...//
so if u wanna brag then ima pump the shotty fast...//
i paint lyrical masterpeices wit the slightest brush...//
leave u witout a leg to stand on then swipe ya crutch...//
so hears a word to from the wise... dont ever start shit wit me...//
cuz my lyrics leave u seeing more demons than constatine...//
im constantly... smoking these clowns like chronic...//
i got thug motivation... u just lazier than ebonix...//

Comedian 01-03-07 10:59 PM

i've mastered the art of this, and am carving him
kid put comics in his avator to hope we'd Marvel him
you only post in the cypher, you aren't kidding me
you're just too damn wack for DaTrus to let in the league
Crime's location fools no one, i can see dude is lying
but now i'll make it a point to beat you through time
kid, ya'll harm me? i bring guns, bombs & shit when charging
you already got an army? Nah, you just wish you are-me
i got a shotty & whenever i pump, i be knockin ya blood out
& docs will put a pump to your stomach just to get the slugs out


fuckouttahere.

GREVISS 01-04-07 06:33 AM

dudes I seen in the cypher so far, and last weeks champ, and all of you

Mr Benjamin
Blackstar
Famous quotes
Comedian
Apex
Raised
Crime
King solo


this fag is gay because you like to fuck and Benjamen backwards
ya poor know shit is played… as motivation for the other wack actors

as for this Black kid yer your hung the way saddam get in court
cos my weapon of mass destruction… makes your adams contort

and heres a Famous quote, you’re all a bunch of fucking Comedians
cos ya bitches call you jokes… the way your sex is demeaning men

yall hit the ceiling when I stated Apex came on top of his game
And no I aint talking about his skill, I mean the picture he framed

yall want beef let it rain , umbrellas keep me outta your range
The way your down pour is engaged with all your family names

and fuck you all I know Crime pays because im rollin with cronik
but I still power punch his ass, and ask him… what you got on it

because the King is just Solo… but that’s just the state of his worth
kid could stick his dick in the earth and the bitch still coudnt do dirt

rip experience to pieces CSI sweep the evidence ,of set presidents
RV elite you pussys irrelevant
……………cos I veto Bush and fuck U.N some anal experiments

^^that’s metaphoric kids no homo shit, don’t get excited now Benjamin
cos my punches will leave you Rai$ed ...more than Olympian javelins

Fame, Comedian making me sick twenty lines no extensions
back’n fourth like sea sections
...............someone get me my knife, to cut their sexual tension


twenty!

Crime 01-04-07 12:42 PM

who the fuck is this faggot... comin crooked at me...//
illl leave greviss family greavin... just for fuckin wit C...//
to the R.. to the I.M.E...//
im a call u carlos mencia cuz your the number 1 DEE DEE DEE...//
(lmfao)
i mean serius his raps are worse than faime s quotez...//
goign at everyone in the cypher... thinking he spiottin famous quotes...//
give em a mic.. i bet this lame just choke...//
like the whole worcestor centrum... going up in smoke...//
all u doing is blowing steam so stop kneeling in hot water...//
the young emporer strikes back...GREVISS I AM YOUR FATHER...//

Faime S. Quotez 01-04-07 06:08 PM

Honestly, I'm starting to believe in Santa, it's amazing me duke
cause I wished for a wack no-name to diss me...
and you made it come true!
I can't count the quotes in your verse cause ya spitting none, son
you said I drop the worse raps... but aren't you forgetting someone?
Everytime you drop, I look for quotes or hope they'll be done
and well, other than my name in ya verse... I don't see none
Chicks make you think you'll get home and they'll freak some
but instead, you get 'played over and over again' like reruns
And I play like you can really beat me, til I send a diss to you
so when I drop, I just be 'playin you' like the chicks do you

Crime 01-04-07 10:27 PM

^this cats a riot maybe he should be comedian...//
cuz it dont matter who... cuz after we battle...//
its hurting u when breathing in....//
u dont wanna play quotez... said hed let me think winnin...//
but the real deal is im letting u think that i think that im winning...//
but in all actuality im the real one sinning...//
it aint bout the father son or the holy spirit...//
its about the slaughter the gun an whoever fears it...//
im to hot for u to come within 20 feet...//
cuz when i spit everyone around gets burned 3rd degree...//
i smoke gotti's like i smoke clowns... all damn day...//
an my feinds come like clockwork all damn day...//
actin like white apart of his complexion...//
dont be a menace type of feind...//
sucking dick for directions...//
dont try to battle those u cannot beat...//
pick ya battles wisley.. or youll always see defeat...//
i thought u had skill.. but i guess i was wrong...//
hang up ya mic now dude.. your as good as gone...//
an yeah i spit cypher i dont care bout the leauge...//
i dont care if im the top rapper in the whole RV..//
i dont care if im king or even faime s...//
cuz im criminal so i choose to be nameless...//

Comedian 01-05-07 12:15 AM

i saw your last line, making the lying posts stop, B
there's a difference between being nameless and a nobody
don't try and copy my style, this weirdo is torn
and it's only fitting when i'm on the computer Nero will burn
you're a pussy, a fake... and don't ever doubt it
Crime is scared of the "boos" that the fucking crowd gives



*goes to finish verse for Wordz*

Da_Carter 01-05-07 12:52 AM

dude calls himself comedian but i dont see nothin funny
till i pull out the heat and aim @ him and start bustin
till aint nothin left, leave him on the ground in a slump and
walk off wit his bitch, wallet and car, now thats thuggin

Comedian 01-05-07 12:58 AM

this nerd is whoring his soul and spitting boring
i'll de-liver your death, when i pull out your internal organs
i'm not funny ? ha... you've gotta quit the dumb lies
but i make up for the fact
BY ACTUALLY HAVING PUNCHLINES
my next line - well, you should quote - it's true
the only time you AIM, is getting your friends to vote for you

Da_Carter 01-05-07 01:12 AM

you beating me, ha, thas only a question of how
nigga, the only thing u "pulling out" is this dick from your mouth
keep all talkin shit and im gonna have to tighten ur lip bitch
juss like ur girl when she on her kness tryin to get a sip of my dick
dont quit ur day job pussy, fucking wit me, i'll pull the "Mac"
holes in ya chest be "Bernie"(burning), from gettin hit wit that

Te Ora 01-05-07 01:46 AM

^ lol, lil wayne groupie..


u MUUUST b gay, rockin that name. you damn lame
riding a dude who's known 4 kissing more babies than bush on a presdential campaign
tryin act all thug, but u can't phase me..
.. i might see G in ur shit. depends on whether i decypher ur matrix avy
i don't wanna seem wanksta. but i really gotta wow him
so. .
i'll fucking leave u in two parts.. like ur idols last two albums


haha


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