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Finally!!the Long Awaited Return Is Here!!!!!!!!!!
Yea yea I know its been a min, I still been recording jus aint given away the freebies like I use to as much no more but yall been aiming like crazy for something so here ya go heres something hope ya like.....1
Song Title: Gusto Beat By: Clockwork Completely Written & Performed by: Triple_N Link to song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5024110 Links to feed left: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240045 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...796#post3144796 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240005 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3144807 |
Fuck man i missed your shit. The bests coo yup. lyrically you dropped somin really hot man. Flow was pretty dope and you delivered it pretty ill too man. I'm feelin ya hook. One thing I like about the type tracks you do is their your own style and you give it your own swagger which is mad dope man. Overall the track is pretty hot duke, I'm def downloadin it into my lists.
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What's good man.
You got a real unique voice man. Flow is classic Trip. you really got your production down to a T man. You got a little twang to your voice in some of these lines....I never noticed that before. But yeah, this is a pretty nice track man. Hook is catchy....all around nice drop :thumbup: |
Word thanks for the feed enyg, preciate it.....1
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damn, you ain't waste no time getting back LOL right off the bat....
beat tight... liked the intro shit... first verse flows nice. liked how you changed flows on verse. Emotion and delivery nice for this ish. Multi's killed it.. overall can't say much verse was dope hook was nice. liked the whisper parts too. lol by my gusto. lol worddd second verse dif flow nice shit. multi's nice. perform some open rap surgery. WORD SON. good shit here man. nothing sounded wrong that i could tell hook word lol was expecting third verse. But word, man. Really liked this. def had nice vibe. You still doing that shit. word. Liked the flow changes, nice lyrics. Still don't know what you mean by Gusto. lol but word man, I liked it. overall tight track. keep it up 9.5/10 EZ |
let me go ahead n say.....2nd verse is dopeness.......
this is one of those songs....when i first hear it im like..."aright this coo...nothin im gonna really really really like though"....but once u get about half way through it.....it catches u off guard......and i start really really likin it lol.... lmao man...im lovin the hook for real...shit is illin...makes me wanna keep listenin so i can get the words down...sing along with it... flow is dope....dunno what to say bad about it man..lol...as usual i guess...ima def. download this one though..... |
I think the beginning of this tracl would sound bettwe with the BOOM panned farther to the corners and a touch louder
beat is slick...maybe a lil "CHING CHING CHING" in the beat wud set it off better...more melody I'm sayin... flow is nice a nice banga keep em rollin 1 |
you remind me of a classic 90's rapper from the N.Y. in your songs.....just so ill
we gotta do somthin soon.....i gotta song im doin called Imagine i want u to hop on 1 |
reminds me of RBX from doggystyle records.
reeemmmmmeeeebbber meeeee!! yeh Ive said that all two times ive heard your songs. solid! |
Good looks on all the feed....lmfao@the RBX comparison...never got the one before ever...I usually get xzibit, stick fingas, or a deep voiced B.G. an a few others lmao but thanks for peeping man....1
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Beat is dope..Intro is HOT..BOOOOOOOM! BLAAAAAAAAT! First verse is pretty cool, flow is def on point. Lyrical wise, shit's pretty nice man, but your delivery on this is def what stands out to me, shit's dope. Hook is DOPE. Thats pretty much the only word for it. 2nd verse comes in nice, again, flow is hot. Lol the open rap surgery line was dope. Again with the chillin' ass hook..It just sounds really good over this beat.
Overall, hot shit. Def. download material. |
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yo I agree wit him, I was like ok lets check this out, and then was like meh, aint the best, but then it just went on and it was sick, and like he said its def/ worth downloading. Hook is dope as hell, lyrics on second verse are fire, very impresive. I would give this track a 9/10 ... when's da CD comin' out homie? |
beat is coo....flow is cool i like ur delievery n shit....i like how u switch shit up....the hook is coo....2nd verse is goin now.....ur swag is coo....u def dont sound like xzibit maybe u jus got similarties......overall this was a coo track,.......we gotta collab foo.....stay up...
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There he is what it do brother trip..........holla atcha boy we can get crackin that shit we been speakin on..Ya production is second to none home boy def there never fall off beat the hook is def standout ish that makes you like oh yea here we go ...overall good to here some new shit def enjoyed in one song im assuming u helped elevate alot of heads here keep doin it...
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word tony jus get at me an we can get it poppin...thanks for feed yall.....1
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ooooooommmmmmggggggg, this hook is sick!!!!!!
yea i liked the verses too but THIS HOOK IS SICK!!!!! |
peepin ur new shit i kno u said u droppe dur album now, tha hook is ill nothin major but fills tha blank.. flow is ya main thing i like man, thats what stands out to me, like alot of ppl i really like pay attention to tha lyrics to feel it but i really wouldnt even have to kno what ur sayin just tha flow is appealing to me.. if that makes sence.. vocab is good, sumtimes to me it seems like ur focusing too much on using complex words tho.. ok nvm tha intro wasnt tha hook tha hook is ill i like it.. wassup tho this track is kinda short it was almost just like a teaser type track but o well i thought it was someof ur bteter work glad to hear ur makin steps only thing that i can recommend to improve on in tha future is the cadence in your voice, not that u stick to one tone, just that i think if u focused on a wider range that is the only thing rite now seperating you from tha pro's u kno?
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Your ill.
Enough said. lol. The evil voice is sickk....I love your part on the CREAM collab wit Zone out also..lol |
ok listening. the intro, that boom blat thing wasn't really nuts about it. seemed forced like "aw man what can i do to sound edgy and street or add some hype in here" and it just sounded contrived. sounded like not even you believed it. beat's not bad, sounds like some lupe type shit almost, a little basic.
first verse sounded like you tried to put in anything that'll sound complex whether it fit or not. "the anomoly martyring your monopoly"? who's gonna relate to that? talking about coughin and your hand covering it all? i dunno man it just didn't make no sense. your dtyle of rhyming liek the way you form the ideas in your head is just old. like 2001 net-ish on that "say anything that might sound cool to say, and make shit rhyme and that's good enough". no concise thought. I listened to this twice and still don't know what the first verse is about. the hook is tight thoug it seems liek a completely seperate idea from everything else. quality is clear, could use some mids and highs to be clear enough to make out your words evne when you're stuffing extra words in there. the way its EQ'd now there's a lot of 'ear searching' to figure out what you're saying. second verse comes in and again the content in the verse dont seem to match what the hook is about. talking about jetpacks and baggy robes and what not, just isn't cohesive, its liek you're just talking about anything regardless of relevance, anything that seems liek it might sound cool rhyming together. at some moments in the second verse it seemed liek your rhyme scheme just didn't "lock" like you just picked any word you previously said and rhymed at any random point in the bar and missed the actual bar ends where you just kept talking, or moved on to some other random rhyme, or overextended the pronuncuation of one word to make it seem liek it rhymes. made the flow seem more fragmented than it really was, like the verse were 5 chunks instead of one fluid piece. add to that like i been saying for years now, single sylable rhymeschemes are dead and boring. you gotta raise the bar dude, rhyming one sylable is easy. even mike jones is beyond that b, gotta get with the times. example: "pen is my prozac, page is my culdesac"? what?? those two things aren't even relevant. if you're gonna say your pen is your prozac, make your page be something health related or medicine related, not realestate related, that just makes no sense at all man. Add to that you have a 3 sylable word trying to rhyme with a 2 sylable word, and only one of the sylables rhymes. shit just sounded fucked up man just cobbled together any ol way. didn't really get intersting till your last 4 bars and by then the song was ending, i was like wtf. at only 2:30 till a fade out song seems remiss without a third verse, but if the third would have turned out disconjointed and random like the other two it might have been better off that way. and that's real talk. |
this beat is fuckin nuts
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maaan quality is nice...wasnt really feelin the BOOM bits in the beginning fely held back a lil bit...coulda thrown an explosion bit or added emotion to that but verses as a whole were nice man flow and delivery is brilliant flawless there and the lyrics are nice there too...i cant really fault the track it was definitely listenable and replayable feelin it man nice beat choice as well...nice track man keep 'em comin :thumbup:
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Y'all crazy...
Now it's suttin like BOOM! BLAT! That was crazy... |
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Lmao, man this is exactly why I wanted u to rtf the favor. I knew becuz I didn't respond like I was BLOWN AWAY by your track u would come into my thread an completely can! mines, overexaggerate the flaws an over-dissect it with a fine tooth comb. but overexaggerated or not there still flaws that can be worked on reguardless. U always said that 1 sylable rhyme shit to me an you'll pull 1 bar an be like "ya see what I mean blah, blah, blah"....one bar out of the whole song dude? My verses didn't make sense to u becuz u wasn't interested in the 1st place, u wasn't here to give quality feedback your here for payback I know that, u took every line out of context & misquoted'em but its koo. Thats what I wanted explained above^^^. I wanted somebody to shit on my track, I dont feel my track has gotten a well-rounded review til at least one person shits on it. As far as your consistant backhanded sarcastic swipes at me with your "I make marketable" music comments. thats great for u, I make "innovative" music, I want to sink or swim being known as someone bringing something new or different to the table, like anything else some like it some dont...but I get a love an respect "in the street" that katz focused on "fitting in" such as yourself jus dont get...but bigup to u, an keep doin what u do.....1 |
yo man its pretty hillarious you think i live like a petty man. i called it exactly how i saw it, i listened to the track twice just to make sre i wasn't jumping to any conclusions. but if you think my response is anything less than honest, feel ffree to point out anywhere where i misstated anything. if you can find a false statement in anything i said, i'll retract the entire thing.
i just didnt' think the track was hot dude. no need to get watery eyed over it. it sounded liek you were jsut all over the place, and the pieces i took the time ot highlight just illustrate why so you wouldn't say i was pulling statements outta thin air. if you want to get detailed i could break down the entire song bar for bar exactly why i thought it sounded cobbled together, unprofessional and all around halfassed. i mean is prozac and culdesac relevant to you? sounds like a typical "internet audio". if you see stuff like that as innovative, hey man more power to you. |
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lol, calm down it aint as epic as u making it out to be..my feelings aint hurt lol. I wasn't getting defensive I jus simply offered a rebuttle. I can respect that this track wasn't hot to you we all have our tastes...all I was saying is that I disagree that this song was incoherent nonsense...Its essentially me bragging, its not deep at all, it wasn't meant to be deep...is was jus me bragging in my own unique way. If u were to say that its the type of track that would alienate some listeners...I totally agree, this isn't something I would spit on the corner. Thats what I use the net for "experimentation." But, nonetheless everything I said made sense an was pieced together right, u obviously jus didn't follow me....like your obsession with my bar "pen is my prozac da page is da culdesac" if u know what those two words mean an add the bars that follow them they are placed fine.....heres the bars in context: My pen is my prozac, the page is the culdesac// Used for refuge from the pews of life, tight wedged between things known to crack// A few vertabrae, the weight on my back murder days// So, I gotta perform some open rap sugeries// ^^^thats nonsensical? thats not deep or hard to understand at all in my opinion. or the other rhymes u critisized....my use of the words "jetpacks" & "baggy robes" again lets put it in context: My private jet's, my rhymebook sheets// Takin' quantum leaps over crack rocks on the street// & Only guy sharin' god's spot atop the globe// Rockin' a fitted, some kickz an a baggy robe// ^^^this makes no sense an is jus randomly thrown together? c'mon man..thats all I'm saying...I'll post both full verses for ya if ya like. I mean who cant understand this stuff? |
I WANT TO SEE YOU TWO BATTLE!!
that would be the greatest battle ever to go down on RV |
^son it already already went down lol
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are you serious?
who won? LETS SEE A REMATCH |
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lol dude you explained it and it still makes no sense what so ever lol. the page is the culdesac used for refuge from the church benches of life, tight wedged between things that are known to crack? lmao, whaaattt?? aside from the fact that "life" doens't rhmye at all with "crack", nor sac, nor days, nor surger-rays, what the hell does that metaphor even mean? what does refuge from church benches of your life stuck between things that are known to crack boil down to dude lol i would love to know. and truthfully the shit your sayin does not sound liek what you got typed, sounds liek you say "tire waves between things known to crack.." and "..the weight of my back murder days" - and even as you have it, the weight on your back murder days, what does that mean? the weight on your back murders days? how do you murder a day with weight on your back? lol. matter fact, how do you murder a day at all? or is "murder day" an event or somethin? lol i dunno man shit just sounds silly man. and just lookin at how you structured your couplets the whole thing just seems butchered and just written any ol way. and just picturin you with a jet pack and a baggy robe with some nikes on flyin over crackrocks is pure comedy. must be headin to the culdesac fresh off a murder day |
OMG
Yall niggas are clownin hahahah |
rofl.............The song is good.
Enough said. BOOM BLATT. |
curiousity
dose 'gusto' mean 'taste'? |
^huh?, omg
smh... |
^^^^LOL..at smh....and gusta meanin tatse rofl
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i dont live in the states and 'gusto' is an italian word whish means 'taste'
so i wanted to know if y'all use some italian words too...simple!*ugh* |
Annnnd i'm def. gonna start saying that shit...GUSTO...werd
Your voice is dope first off...clear as a bell with the quality The flo was dope as hell and i'm loving the chorus (def a download)...Listening to it a second time now... the anomalty monitoring your monopoly...dope haha quantam leaps... pen is my prozac page is the couldasac open rap surgeries... Alot of punches didnt jump out at me but it was still a dope fucking song...i was more consumed with the way you put it down...beat absorbs you into the swagger ya know... Well any ways hit up "do ray mi fa so" and this was def. a downloadable track. |
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UMMM,LMAO at the last ish you wrote...and i have to agree with Apexx on the track i didnt like it the chorus was alright. but i've never really had a taste for your tracks, mainly cuz they sound all pretty much the same,but keep doing what you love. best of luck. |
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