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Clokworx vs Lay Fear
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-21-07 at 11:57 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Clokworx has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-07 12:11 AM.
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Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-07 12:17 AM.
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yo..
Don't talk about your job C, or even think to attempt a hot verse.. Take u 'Outback' n stab ya wit a 'stake, hows' that to test if 'clok worx' I'll drop first to eliminate ur insecurity then I'll proceed to demolish it I'm the first to throw out 'clock'..like im modelin what the ommish did Ya godless bitch I'll murder you, its a joke to think u'd be a rizing seed Cuz clock beatin lay is about as much chance as U.S legalizing weed. Ya got pointy ears and your a dork I'm devourin and seizin the pure elf I'd call you a POS.......but how the hell can you be a piece of yourself Clock gets crushed n runs away so I stay to rip apart n' roundin the bar Only way C smashin 'LF' is if his hands pop out n' start poundin the car G'luck man.. http://images.google.com/images?hl=...m=1&sa=N&tab=wi *^Last line.. Lexus LF is a car just to clear up the last line. For people who don't know about the new model |
I'm the Lion of this jungle, so prepare to get murked...
If I 'Layed-Fear' you'd be the product of my work... So stop rappin', sit down, and take off your blouse... Cause i'm always down, like the switch in a blind mans house... This verse will protect me, If i'm wrong then correct me... Wear the vest, so that the lead won't infect me... Take your verse in the paper bag so that you look broke... Calling you garbage is an understatement like a footnote... So after this battle, sit back and prepare to pray to the lord... Cause i'll have you seeing colors, like you was in a Guitar Hero chord something quick gunna lose. |
Voted For: Lay Fear
hands down... LAy Fear came wit tha better verse.. harder punches...... name play was hard to me.. Vote Lay Fear |
This was feedback posted for Clokworx
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Thanks for the votes, uppin.
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Voted For: Lay Fear
Basically, clokworx is not that good. Most of his lines weren't even punches. Just self glorification. So, LF wins by default cause Clokworx sucks. |
Ahh uppin can we get some votes n' get this closed.
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Voted For: Clokworx
yo.. Don't talk about your job C, or even think to attempt a hot verse.. Take u 'Outback' n stab ya wit a 'stake, hows' that to test if 'clok worx' didnt make sense to me... how do outback and stake have to do with test'in to see if clok worx?? I'll drop first to eliminate ur insecurity then I'll proceed to demolish it I'm the first to throw out 'clock'..like im modelin what the ommish did ok Ya godless bitch I'll murder you, its a joke to think u'd be a rizing seed Cuz clock beatin lay is about as much chance as U.S legalizing weed. aight.. Ya got pointy ears and your a dork I'm devourin and seizin the pure elf I'd call you a POS.......but how the hell can you be a piece of yourself weak... Clock gets crushed n runs away so I stay to rip apart n' roundin the bar Only way C smashin 'LF' is if his hands pop out n' start poundin the car not a good ending either.... I'm the Lion of this jungle, so prepare to get murked... If I 'Layed-Fear' you'd be the product of my work... decent start... So stop rappin', sit down, and take off your blouse... Cause i'm always down, like the switch in a blind mans house... gayness.... This verse will protect me, If i'm wrong then correct me... Wear the vest, so that the lead won't infect me... nah... Take your verse in the paper bag so that you look broke... Calling you garbage is an understatement like a footnote... aight.. So after this battle, sit back and prepare to pray to the lord... Cause i'll have you seeing colors, like you was in a Guitar Hero chord ok... but i thought u had made more sense in your verse and had more bars i was feeling.. |
Lol.. its word play kid..out back steak house..is a place where people eat..clock works..u'd get it if u had a higher iq. votesss
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dont get mad at me kid,
i just voted how i saw it thats all... everyone dont have the same view on things... and still what do OUTBACK STAKE HOUSE HAVE TO DO WITH SEENING IF CLOK WORX??? |
Lol don't worry about it, lets not free post in here, its cool idc.. uppin
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haha....votes...
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Voted For: Lay Fear
Ah my cousin took this one by far. No offense clock but you came played and some of your shit was not even punches. Lay came with better punches and jus a better verse..good nameplay..lolz v/Lay FEar |
Voted For: Lay Fear
Blah... Clockworx bar breakdown: I'm the Lion of this jungle, so prepare to get murked... If I 'Layed-Fear' you'd be the product of my work... ahhh...subpar breakdown, i understood what u were tryna say but i guess it dont look as good on paper.. 3/10 So stop rappin', sit down, and take off your blouse... Cause i'm always down, like the switch in a blind mans house... That was str8 but u shouldve been more complex with it by connecting both lines better, nd rewording wouldve helped to...5/10 This verse will protect me, If i'm wrong then correct me... Wear the vest, so that the lead won't infect me... That was jus str9 up wack...2/10 Take your verse in the paper bag so that you look broke... Calling you garbage is an understatement like a footnote... I liked this one a lil better...but the first line made the bar weaker..6/10 So after this battle, sit back and prepare to pray to the lord... Cause i'll have you seeing colors, like you was in a Guitar Hero chord Nah...2/10 FINAL SCORE- 18/50 Lay Fear bar breakdown: Don't talk about your job C, or even think to attempt a hot verse.. Take u 'Outback' n stab ya wit a 'stake, hows' that to test if 'clok worx' Nice opener, wasnt really feelin to much how it flowed tho, but it was good wordplay...7/10 I'll drop first to eliminate ur insecurity then I'll proceed to demolish it I'm the first to throw out 'clock'..like im modelin what the ommish did lol.. ite ite...7/10 Ya godless bitch I'll murder you, its a joke to think u'd be a rizing seed Cuz clock beatin lay is about as much chance as U.S legalizing weed. Thats really played and i didnt even like it anyways...4/10 Ya got pointy ears and your a dork I'm devourin and seizin the pure elf I'd call you a POS.......but how the hell can you be a piece of yourself a lil played to nd the punch wasnt to strong...5/10 Clock gets crushed n runs away so I stay to rip apart n' roundin the bar Only way C smashin 'LF' is if his hands pop out n' start poundin the car yea i get what u was tryna do but it was still wack...4/10 FINAL SCORE- 27/50 Lay Fear gets the vote |
Voted For: Lay Fear
lay took this one......you had a few more punches then he did clock didnt stay consistant he went a diff direction toward the middle of his verse....keep it movin tho nice job... |
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