Mystic. vs don cardyac
 

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10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 tko

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Check in by: 06-07-07 at 03:35 PM

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Closed - expired battle win

don cardyac has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-07 03:35 PM.

you beatin' me is unrealistic, think!/
cuz i'll pop ya top off like the bottle of the mistic drink/
& pour your fluids out on the curb for the rest of the dead homies/
i've killed lyrically, so in my personal hell you wont be there lonely/
my whole crew march's with instruments to blow like a tuba band/
BTR runs s***, you'd think he was trainin' for the army how i'll BOOT his CAMP/
he on my dick/
can't y'all tell, he named himself after it, get it?... my-stic/
and you called that but this is ur real life of CRIME/
MURDERING RAP, using FRAUD verses and STEALING lines/
he can get kicks like eastbay, each day,he say/
that he won, i took this win he couldn't bring it back wit' instant replay/

Mystic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-07 11:21 PM.

uppin for votes man, good luck....................

g'luk back at'cha. votes please fhaskfhsakfhsakjlf

uppin for some votes..............................

Voted For: don cardyac

Your undefeated at the moment..take it in, well now its gone
Puff Puff Pass
...............................And that's how I be passin the L don!!
nah weak start...
Reading your other shit..damn you whack man I've lost all hope
Seriously just cuz you use caps..sure as hell dont mean your dope!
nah..no diss or punch..
Im pullin out my 'Ace'..its a sure win..so ima take back my steps
Now I gottem both in my 'pocket' n
.....................................I aint even don dealin the cards yac (yet)!
eeh..
I wouldnt have taken this battle, if i knew you were a pooor asss
Woulda been callin you 'oscar' if i knew you were pilin more trash!
aight... finally...
Stop now, retire its simple because your raps is whack buddy
Listen to your avatar..cuz you dont know jack about rap buddy!
aight..

you aint have no real punches or good diss you really was slack'in man what happen????


you beatin' me is unrealistic, think!/
cuz i'll pop ya top off like the bottle of the mistic drink/
aight...
& pour your fluids out on the curb for the rest of the dead homies/
i've killed lyrically, so in my personal hell you wont be there lonely/
eeh but ok...
my whole crew march's with instruments to blow like a tuba band/
BTR runs s***, you'd think he was trainin' for the army how i'll BOOT his CAMP/
nah...
he on my dick/
can't y'all tell, he named himself after it, get it?... my-stic/
lol..decent name flip...
and you called that but this is ur real life of CRIME/
MURDERING RAP, using FRAUD verses and STEALING lines/
oook
he can get kicks like eastbay, each day,he say/
that he won, i took this win he couldn't bring it back wit' instant replay/
aight ending...

i had a decent name flip and you tryed to use punches.. and was more creative with your verse...


vote don...

PLEZ RETURN THE FAVOR OF A VOTE IN ANY OF MY BATTLES OR I WILL HAVE THIS VOTE REMOVED....

uppin for some REAL votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Voted For: Mystic.

Im pullin out my 'Ace'..its a sure win..so ima take back my steps
Now I gottem both in my 'pocket' n
.....................................I aint even don dealin the cards yac
I wouldnt have taken this battle, if i knew you were a pooor asss
Woulda been callin you 'oscar' if i knew you were pilin more trash!

vs

nothing

even though those lines were not that great Mystic still takes it with the win. Not as much creativity from don

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Voted For: Mystic.

hmm..Mystic took this by actually having punches..don was okay but was not very consistent, he had a bad structure n it didn't flow as well..Mystic's punches were alot harddderrrr..

v/Mystic

2-1 me, lets get some more votessss...............

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Voted For: Mystic.


he on my dick/
can't y'all tell, he named himself after it, get it?... my-stic/
he can get kicks like eastbay, each day,he say/
that he won, i took this win he couldn't bring it back wit' instant replay/

vs.

Your undefeated at the moment..take it in, well now its gone
Puff Puff Pass
...............................And that's how I be passin the L don!!
I wouldnt have taken this battle, if i knew you were a pooor asss
Woulda been callin you 'oscar' if i knew you were pilin more trash!

Don had some creative ideas, but they didnt seem to go well with his
structure

Mystic flow has consistent throughout his verse.

thanks for the vote man.

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Voted For: Mystic.

hmm....

this is a tough battle to call...but in my eyes Mystic took this, he had some pretty dope name plays on Don...

Don, had good punches as well, but the way that your verus is worded Don, it just is odd to try and flow with...

Punches went to Don...but Personal's went to Mystic

and in battles, Personal's are the winners...

so Mystic win's...

but i must say, gooood fucking battle...best one i've seen in a while..

thanks for the vote...uppin for 1 more people.........

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