Artik Phrost vs Ransum
 

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Expired battle close - win

Artik Phrost has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-07 01:11 AM.

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-07 01:34 AM.

Wordplay Massacre

Check It-

..He's Getting Chewed! When Phrost Start Swinging Ya Finished Dude
Cuz My Punches Hit "Ran Down To The Sole" Like Im Fighting With "Beat Up Tennis Shoes"!!../


This bar is filler cuz I'm pressed for time.. Still He Aint Got Expressive Lines
And "Sending Me Notebooks To Iron", Is The Only Way He Leaving Phrost "Pressed For Rhymes"!!../

Bring Tha Noise? Shiit, He'll Be Hushed Right Before Im Storm In
so wen the thoughts start formin-
I Wont Need To "Speak On Living Arrangements Of Residence Assisants" To Leave "RA, Dorm It"!!../ ( dorm it/ dormant..relates to hushing him)

U'r HEART TIC LOST... flows off track.. like u'r CAR FLIP OFF...
cuz moving to alaska..... 'Only Time We Feel' ARTIC-PHROST...
this here like despret newly weds... cuz u fuck'ed, BALLROOM STYLE...
cuz phrost votes... get ‘turned down with the finger’ quicker than pushing the VOUME DIAL...
shouldnt had tryed me child... u'r style out dated like '6T On 12 YEAR OLDS'...
Cuz RANSUM I'll stop this Bitch Flow... quicker then BIRTH-CONTROL..... MOTHER FUCKAH...

GO HARD OR DONT COME AT ME AT ALL YA HERD ME...

good luck....


last bar... 6t is a baby size a kids size mainly for 5 year olds or 6 depending how big your child is...

nice drop.....
only thing is your flow be kinda choppy...
which take away fromy ur punches...

decent wordplay...

much respect ma!.... stay up....

kew drop...
obvious plays on Artic Frost is played though.
and the birth control line.. but oh well.


vote, biatches!!

Voted For: Artik Phrost

overal, this battle was..ehhh

Artik

..He's Getting Chewed! When Phrost Start Swinging Ya Finished Dude
Cuz My Punches Hit "Ran Down To The Sole" Like Im Fighting With "Beat Up Tennis Shoes"!!../

--This bar was madddd played..sorry bro

1/5


This bar is filler cuz I'm pressed for time.. Still He Aint Got Expressive Lines
And "Sending Me Notebooks To Iron", Is The Only Way He Leaving Phrost "Pressed For Rhymes"!!../

--Dont say that bar is a filler bar, makes the bar look weak...the Iron thing was pretty cool, just the first line made the bar look lame

3/5

Bring Tha Noise? Shiit, He'll Be Hushed Right Before Im Storm In
so wen the thoughts start formin-
I Wont Need To "Speak On Living Arrangements Of Residence Assisants" To Leave "RA, Dorm It"!!../ ( dorm it/ dormant..relates to hushing him)

--This bar was fucking sweeeeettttt...the bar was dope

5/5

Total
9/15

Ransum


U'r HEART TIC LOST... flows off track.. like u'r CAR FLIP OFF...
cuz moving to alaska..... 'Only Time We Feel' ARTIC-PHROST...

--Bar was ehhh, the style of your whole verus was fucking really odd...
2/5

this here like despret newly weds... cuz u fuck'ed, BALLROOM STYLE...
cuz phrost votes... get ‘turned down with the finger’ quicker than pushing the VOUME DIAL...

--I dont know if this bar is played, but i haven't ever seen it...the only thing is, why would he be fucked ballroom style??? The last part of the bar was good tho

3/5

shouldnt had tryed me child... u'r style out dated like '6T On 12 YEAR OLDS'...
Cuz RANSUM I'll stop this Bitch Flow... quicker then BIRTH-CONTROL.....

--I'm pretty sure that the birth control bar is mad played, but still, i haven't seen it lately, but i know i have seen it. It was a ok bar, but you still ...the wording is really off and it hurts the overal effectivness of the punch...

3/5

Total:8/9


Overal: It was a really close battle, but Ransum you need to work your wording...and Artik stop forcing words to rhyme that really shouldn't be there, it makes it sound dumb as shit

Vote: Artik

thanks for the fedd back and brake down of the vote....

i digs it...

aight upp'ing or more votes......

this here like despret newly weds... cuz u fuck'ed, BALLROOM STYLE...
cuz phrost votes... get ‘turned down with the finger’ quicker than pushing the VOUME DIAL...

--I dont know if this bar is played, but i haven't ever seen it...the only thing is, why would he be fucked ballroom style??? The last part of the bar was good tho


basicly..

despret newly weds... useally you wait till the night to fuck on ya honeymoon...
you dance in a ball-room...they useally have this at your wedding..
when you dance you useally wanna fuck shorty who you grind'ing with...

probley made ya more confuse but it relates to each other...

yeah, i see what your talking about now...problem is that the connection between the too is soooo vague that it lacks any substance in your punch...

just to let ya know..

btw...this is the first battle i've ever broken down a vote like that, so feel speical you lil whores...

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This was feedback posted for Artik Phrost
 

real nice... punches were creative....u had good word usage.....the last punch was a little forced but still good....9/10

this battle was close i feel phrost got this one though....her punches were more creative

feed back on ransum....

i liked your punches in this one and the multis went well with them....just felt they needed a little more though....stilll good shit 8/10

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shit i fucked up i was suppose to press "post vote" under phrost not feedback first lol....my bad i dont know how to change it....

Voted For: Ransum

uhh..I"d have to say this goes to Ran for havin punches...that weren't strechted as fuckkk...an were actually..not gay

v/ran


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Voted For: Artik Phrost

v/phrost

both verses were whack but artiks actually rhymed and had better decent punches.


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upp'in for more votes.....................................

lmao@ at yall saying my verse was wack..
i text wit heads yall wouldnt stand a chance battling... thank you though :-)

upp'in for more votes.....................................

Voted For: Ransum

Artik Phrost- i am a fan of your wordplay, even tho it seems you rushed this a little... one major flaw in your flow tho, is that when you battle, you focus more on being clever than coming up w/ clear punches.... most of these were kind of bla... try something more personal... the way this guy spells should make him an easy target...

Ransum- sometimes i hate you... lol, seriously, you are the worst speller i've ever seen, idk if it's cuz you're typing fast or what, but damn! better punches minus the one you had to explain, but i almost gave it to Artik cuz your shit is so hard to read, spell check or something man... you get the win purely going blow for blow...

V/ Ransum

man, i feel bad... i didn't even notice that the car flip off lne made no sense... like a train? wtf... man, wish i would've posted feedback instead of voted... not a good battle...

upp'in for more votes...................
i'll return the favor................

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

I can't vote yet... but I am sayin Ransum gets my vote.
here the break down, as usual there are a few more important aspects of the battle for me. I felt in this one they were...in order of importance (most important, to this battle, first):
Multis: DEF Ransum...I think that's mostly where he killed his rhyme. He won in #, ease of understanding/delivery.
Punchlines: slight edge to Ransum...though Artik had more build up, Ransum's were easier to get minus the 6t explanation (my own ignorance played part in that)
Close: Both were good but Artik got it. The explanation of "dorm it" was called for, cause when one reads it, you don't always hear what you would in an audio battle.
Open: Ransum. Artik: "HE'S gettin chewed" then "YA finished dude"? in the same line this don't work for me. My personal pref is for consistencey (e.g. "ur and ur"), maybe personalize both by adressing the competition.

I thought metas and personals were equal.

win: Ransum

Unfortunantly this aint a vote...but check my battle (soon to be battles) out...u know what to do.

Voted For: Artik Phrost

IDK real close ransum i've seen u cum wit some shit that im jus like damn how does he do that shit but i dont think it was quite dis time so i gotta give it to artik frost!


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This was feedback posted for Artik Phrost
 

wow dis was kindah hard yo.i was feelin ur shyt homie creative n all dat u had nice punches yo

fuk i was goin 2 vote 4 ransum but i cant change diss shyt damn.i went 2 feed back on phrost lines, n now i cant vote shyt

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

...Checkin pollz....can't vote here since Ransum and I run together.

upp'in for more votes...................
i'll return the favor................

P.S and why did my crew member voted... lol.... whatever man....

oo shit i forgot no crew votes, umm feedbak ransum and artik u guys this was close but i say ransum i've seen ur shit homie and u got sum sik shit i guess u jus waitin to let it out cuz i've seen u rawer then this!

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

Just sum feedbak i thik i would give this to ransum he had it cumin good but both ya'll fought well!

Voted For: Ransum

Yo I Vote Ransum, He Had Good Flow, Nice Punches, His Verse Was On Point, Frost Had Some Nice Lines, But

OverAll-RanSum


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Please Return Th FAvor In My Battle With High Knucks, Good Battle Ya'll, For Reals

Voted For: Artik Phrost

phrost gets my vote .
the verse was more thought out
i could follow it better than ransom's
i think mabey you could try a little dif structure
so we could follow like we hearin it.
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Voted For: Ransum

honestly...the best bar of the battle...was phrosts last one...the first two were garbage...it's generally quality...not quantity...but in this case..i gotta give it to the one person who came consistent...and his 3 bars will all better than your two......i really don't feel like breaking it down..but if you try to cancel my vote...I will.

either way, both of you stay up...try and stay away from capping every end of every line....only use caps for things that must be accentuated.

upp'in for more votes plez.....................................