300 J.G POPP'IN OFF.... R-evolution DISS...
 

you thought that little cypher shit was cute...
trying to get at me and my crew.... but i peep your open mic....
i see you switch up styles...
you not the only one thats versitile....

U'll FIND OUT WHAT 300 J.G IS ALL ABOUT.....
ITS A WRAP.... FUCK R-EVO



(Valentino)

"This is an Annoucement From yours Truly...Shiest Lucia Valentino...
Certain Individuals talking about Resurrecting RV...hmmph...
..Naw you got it twisted "We" are going to Resurrect RV...
..and if you don't like it...do something about it...
Ransum Tell em how it is homie."

I talk it...cuz I can back it...
Fuck whatever you were sayin.... I’m back bitch...
Got the game lay down like they got a back itch...
The whole package, money under the mattress...
The flow’s the box, the rhyme’s the matches...
I don’t gota practice.... I’m the scorin man-son...
Girls all over the globe wanna score wit Ransum...
I've always been here.... beef'in...now I’m just twistin it my way....
Slow flowin... not flyin down the highway...
I lay back goin much slower than the sign say....
Can’t come this way I’m an immovable object...
It's obvious... I ain't one of god's usual projects....

time to switch an turn the heat up he's style.....

possabilities bother me in the fact it's often a novelty...
can't follow options contractive flossed in philosophies...
I'm in on all offers constantly tryna scholar these minor seeds...
the kind of heathen you is and the style you release is minor league...
I'm major in maths.... YOU out weighed in class...
can't figure or be timin' my speed....when I take belts in fame fast...
dont understand i'll say it in lammer terms...u been pre-quilifiyed for a quick defeet...
grinding on this mother fucker like a skaters...stomping this mother fucker with the dirt from my cleats...
I be up in your crib when you mouth shit...I house take all euipment...
but the bitch started crying that hes blouse rip...
Ima give you a nickel and my two cents and state i rape brides to be...
erase lives with speech...life on the line I tell them to shut off supplies...
that's currently wired to your system...to nerveless from these nervous butterflies...
in stomachs I'm cuttin' blunt with instruments...and spreadin' what's gutted nice...
depth sinkin with butter knives...flesh peels like the skin when I've sonned you from skies...
you above me - son that's a lie...the height of this lord writer is comin' raw to all those under his size...



time to Switch AN END THIS FOOL....

your bars are like ice cream they melt in the heat...
i thought you vegetarians don't really want beef...
your brain is full of sugar cause you think something's sweet...
your tongue got two left feet cause you're rhymin' off beat...
you're the opposite of victory.... your name is defeat...
your whole career won't awake.... it remains in a sleep....
remember Diss The emcee Above you,
Son u'r below sea level when it comes to ridin this flow...
had beef an got lucky... no battle was set... hes next exscuse is the libery had close....
300 J.G on ya block... with no weapon... cuz beating you is effortless....
why step to this... can mess with wit....the heat i spit is like a dessert trip...
beating you like a red hair step child... this here can get wild like a zoo...
they say ransum you dope... they wouldnt if i was like.... lets say a you...
aint shit free so ya best to start making your money as a prostitute...
a wanna be jesus... so while u walk'in...people i'll start tossing rock at you....
i'll spread the kid brainmatter like musterd.. only thing you packing is butter...
and its like that,
kick your face into the ground and turn ya ass into a bikerack.....

MOTHER FUCKER.....

300 J.G POPP'IN THE FUCK OFF....

WHAT IT IS..
WHAT IT DO...

HOLLA AT A G..
I GOT A FUNERAL FOR YOU...


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243299

Damn my niga i like this shit damn this should set us off a bit!

Damn i like this shit dawg! Its tight how ur crew is goin up against bigger dudes and more known dudes! Like clova in cypher i saw u doin ur thang where do i try out for the crew at Ransum???

thanks for the feed back..........
upp'in this joint....

lmao...i went a whole paragraph in...without even seeing a diss...it was just a bunch of nonsense about you....if your gonna make a diss....don't involve glorifying yourself....nobody gives a shit about your opinion of yourself...if you're good...your writing will talk for you.......


Oh, and PLEASE!!!!...if your going to diss me...I suggest you start using personals....not stupid ass elementary punchlines

^^^^ yea right.....

you odviously aint read my shit....

I've always been here.... beef'in...now I’m just twistin it my way....
Slow flowin... not flyin down the highway...
^^^ im seting it off my way... slow flowin not flyin down the highway....
IN OTHER WORDS STUPID...
IM GOING EZ... INSTED OF BLASTING YOU FROM JUMP...
READ BETWEEN THE LINES......

its a open mic diss....
i peep your open mic political criminal.... i see you trying to use vocab and multis...
i only match what i saw and still diss you...
if you aint catch it, then it went ova ya head...


and if you want me to really diss you...
ITS NOTING...

I'll EVEN SET UP A BATTLE....
WHATS GOOD???

DOUT ME THEN SET IT...
PLAN AND SIMPLE....


300 J.G POPP'IN OFF....

this is what I mean you are no where close to my level...

That shit is SIMPLE....there is no reading between the lines...what I mean by SIMPLE...is it applies to anyone, and everything..it's not a personal diss towards me...it has nothing to do with me...it's just talk....


if you want to even attempt to attack someone of my ability...i suggest you start getting personal...and create disses that are made soley for me...otherwise the shit is pointless..like i said..it's just talk....and talk is cheap


political criminal? vocab and multies? haha..you simple motherfucker...

that shit was a keystyle...multies is not something i try to do...it's something I do better than most if not everyone on this site...and don't you dare try and fuckin argue with me untill you show SOME understanding of sentence structure and writing knowledge.....

and as far as vocab....PLEASSSSEEE DUMMY......I am a writing major in college...i'm going into my third year, i'm going to graduate in my 3rd year....with a 4 year degree....

the words you saw, are basic to me....thats not vocab...thats regular talk for anyone with a brain.

^^^ plezz....
you the one who is talking...

insted of reply back with fine... lets battle...
you wanna argu your way outta a battle with me...
you ducking hiding and doing everything else besides battleing...
you not even trying to respond to this...

whats your exscuse.... im not as smart as you since you gonna finish college in 3 years with a 4 year dagree SHUT THE FUCK UP.... I CAN TELL YOU IM A KID GENIUS IM ONLY 14 IN COLLEGE AND YOU SOPPUSE TO BELIEVE ME??
LOL...
KIDS THESE DAYS....

TALK THAT BULLSHIT IM SMART B.S...
KEEP SAYING IM NOT ON YOUR LEVEL B.S....
AND KEEP TALKING YOUR WAY OUTTA A BATTLE B.S....

CUZ THATS ALL YOU ABOUT... BULL.SHIT....

im starting to regret even trying to come at you anymore then i did in the cypher cuz now i see you aint worth it.....
i thought maybe you could make me try hard now i see i only gotta try hard with you when it comes to a debate or something.....

this is RAPVERSE.... NOT WHOS GONNA FINISH COLLEGE FIRST...
THIS IS RAPVERSE.... NOT WHO CAN ARGU BEST....

SO EITHER MAN UP AND BATTLE...
OR IM GONNA END THIS SHIT WITH....

YOU A PUSSY WHO DUCKS BATTLES....
AN TRYS TO PLAY IM IN COLLEGE ROLL FUCKING FOOL....

IF YOU SMART IN COLLEGE AND ABOUT TO FINISH STICK TO IT AND STAY OFF RAPVERSE...

CUZ 300 J.G POPP'IN OFF....
BITCH....

WE RUNING THIS RAP-SHIT...

Haha, once again you prove how stupid you are....my finishing college is irrelevant...what is relevant..is my knowledge of writing...and your lack of it. Rap...especially rapverse....you have to WRITE raps....the better writer you are, the more potential you have.....YOU are a shitty fucking writer....and you're stupid as fuck...im not duckin you faggot...im giving you a fair warning.....Set the shit up, so i can shut you the fuck up....it's ignorant little homos like you that are killin this site....thinkin your shit is hot...even though it's the exact same as every other herb thats ever been through here....LOOK AROUND...NOBODY WHO HAS ANY RESPECT ON THIS SITE, WHO HAS BEEN HERE FOR MORE THAN A YEAR....IS WRITING THE SAME STUPID ASS BULLSHIT YOU ARE...that's not a coincidence douche bag......i'm over 100-3 against mostly top text heads....you're 8-3 against some of the whackest mother fuckers on this site...you will get beat....and you will get beat 5-0....stop that nonsense about not being scared, or not trying...shut the fuck up...seriously...you want to battle...you REALLY want to battle THAT bad? Than you would have fucking set it up, and allowed me to accept or decline........nobody is duckin you punk....I will battle you, in confidence that you will shut the fuck up...and take this website seriously..and see it as an opportunity to become a better writer....instead of actin like you have any talent what so ever....because you have none....so like I said..set the shit up...i'll accept...and than I'll beat you 5-0....set the fucking votes to 10....i'll beat you 10-0....you're no where close to me kid....you don't have the intelligence...the wit...the experience...the knowledge of hip hop and understanding of rap battles...and most importantly of all..the knowledge of writing....you can't beat me while lacking any of these things..and you lack all of them completely....you've proven that 100%....i look forward to never hearing from you again

Yo Good Diss, I Liked It Kepp Me Laughing OverAll Good Drop Fam

i liked the diss...good stuff

^^ outta that whole thing this is the only thing that cought my eyes....

so like I said..set the shit up...i'll accept...

^^ GOOD THATS ALL I NEED IT TO KNOW.....

AS FOR THE REST SHUT THE FUCK UP....
I LACK EVERYTHING NEED IT TO BECOME A GOOD EMCEE OR WRITER...
BITCH PROVE IT....

IM SETING THE FUCKING BATTLE UP.....
BITCH EZ...
ITS A WRAP..

LMAO what happened to RV LOL

^^^ why u say that???

u could of left some feed back...

good shit ransum.....i see u are elevating to....you've gotten better from the first few posts ive seen from u......keep doing what u do and keep writing man dont worry bout the hate its always gonna be there....~1~

thanks fam....
and thanks everybody for u'r feed back.....

I'd break your shit down, give you feedback and tell you how to improve, but you've got everything down perfectly and are completely unbeatable, apparently.

^^^ nah i wouldnt say unbeatable....
there is always someone better then u..
or u gonna have a bad day and someone will have there best day.. shit like that happens to everyone....

but thanks for the feed back...

actully u can help by leting me know whats wrong what i can fix and what i can do to make this better then it is....

im all ears hommie... no beef....

sarcasm?


you didn't get it...did you.

^^^ nah i did....

just want to see what else he has to say.....

and since u still around peeping whatever it is people said about this....

answer me this...

why u still aint set up that battle yet???

scared??
nah i know u aint.... u the best...

*sarcasm*

don't think im going out of my way chieftoolbag.....it's called a subscribed thread...all i do is click twice..user cp..and than the threads with new posts....it automatically subscribes me to every thread i post in...and i havn't set the battle up...because i don't have to.when i get around to it...i get around to it

scared? of what? you will legitimately be the worst opponent i've ever faced

^^^^ HAHAHA..........

sure buddy.....
LOL..

i cant front u make me laugh cuz of how funny u is....

take a brake off rap it aint for you....
this is for people who is dedicated to it who battles to elevate who write open mic to elevate verses and verstility .....
stop front'in like u rapverse KING.... u FAR FROM IT.... EZ

hahaha, rap ain't for me? I understand hip hop in general....better than you ever will...how old are you? 9? rap is an action....an action everyone can take part in...it doesnt have to be for someone...it's like eating and breathing to me...it's not for me or not for me..it's just apart of me.

and yeah, this is for people who battle, and who write open mics......i don't battle, because most of the people who are any good at all, don't battle anymore...because of little kids like you, who have proven to not understand the elements of a good rap battle....as far as open mics? I've posted more open mics on this website...than 99% of everyone who's been through here.....and i'm still doing it..while moderating a crew and a few other parts of RV


it's people like ME...that allow you to even post here....it's people like ME...who are keeping this site available...and it's people like ME...who are keeping it alive.

You are not good, you fall into the majority as far as rv's members....and the majority right now, is a bunch of un-talented children who think they know how to rap..or write...because they watch b.e.t. and live in the suburbs of where the ghetto is.

YOU CANNOT BE GOOD AT RAPPING..WITHOUT BEING GOOD AT WRITING FIRST.....thats just how it is.....so you can say, fuck writing...but you are good at rapping....you're full of shit and show no understanding of art in general..

and as far as the king of rv?

i very well could be...i have only been beaten once...by "the best text head in rv's history"....and my verse was clearly better...only problem was i was knew..he was my first battle....and he was established....so people voted for him, so he would read their shit....instead of voting for who won....regardless..i havn't been beat since....not in topicals..not in audio...not in text...not in poetry..as a matter of fact....as far as legitimate..controlled battles....i don't remember ever being voted against...im sure it happened..but not often.....and asside from controlled battles..my wins are above 100....all of them...much more talented than you...even the people i battled knowing it was a waist of time.....were better than you

The other two verses are the kind of stuff where there's nothing specific I can tell you to help you improve. Your flow seems at home in those verses, and content will just improve automatically as you read more rhymes, hear more rhymes and write more rhymes.

This verse I quoted is where you went wrong. Most of it was totally forced, which dampens any impact it may have had. I'll explain... Multies are pretty hard to do, and if your vocabulary isn't up to par you will end up forcing your multies trying to sustain rhymes. Using words and phrases that are unrelated, disjointed, or out of place, solely for the sake of making the multies work. It's better to just forget about a multie and write lyrics that are harmonious than to force multies and end up with a verse that flows but doesn't really say anything.

A good way to go about it is to think of what you want to say and then make it rhyme. Going about things in this way means your piece will have maximum impact and really convey your point. It's things like this behind the scenes that make a real difference in rhyme quality. It works a lot better than thinking of a rhyme first and building lines around that, trying to fill up the space. It's all about impact. I'll do an example:

"cut ya with knives, you'll have blades stuck in ya eyes
rupture ya thighs and ill use your guts as a tie"

It rhymes, but it's completely stupid and it says nothing. Tell-tale sign of wackness. It's just filler. Instead of just randomly rhyming about violence, let's try thinking of a message to convey and then making it rhyme... I want to convey that after hearing my lyrics, the opponent will lose all will to live and kill themselves.

"Normally I target necks with knives, sneaking up from behind...
This time I'd rather spend my time bustin' a rhyme.
My aim's still the same, it won't be any less gory,
It's just that my game's so insane *insert name* will cut his throat for me."

Sure, it might not rhyme like the other one, but at least it has a clear-cut goal and some sort of impact. This is also just one of many ways to convey the original message. In constructing the lines, I had a lot of different options, and could pick whichever one I wanted to. I could have chosen another form of suicide, I could have used more multies, I could have condensed it to two lines. Just randomly flowing, or building lines around rhymes closes off your options and limits the potential of the lyrics.

I know your verse was intended as a diss to rev's style in that OM he dropped before, but I'm just saying this in case you want to improve your delivery of that style and incorporate it into your own.

thanks for the best brake down of a ope mic i have ever seen...
u really focus u'r time into correcting everyline and useing the normal flowing rhyme an turn it into grater more detail punch with more impack with slightly less of a flow... i understand what u talking about... i will def try to improve that just need some time to pratics it....
thanks....

upp'in for more feed....

after what he said i dont think anyone else can leave any kind of feed i think he sum it all up lol.....

i thought it was okay....i mean started of simple with all the bullshit conversation, but once u jumped into the flow and diss shit got nicer i would say uve elevated alot man since i last seen your stuff....however u can still work on the delivery better.

good looks on the feed back but i was just mocking him in this diss...
not really a focus diss to him or anything just more of me jocking down whatever came to mind so... but i feel u... but this wasnt my best at all if thats what u thinking...

but good looks on the feed...

thanks for the feed everyone....

i'll be making another open mic diss soon...

you better watch out...

it might be about YOU~~!!!

Ill bet it is with the way the cyphers going :laugh:

ok this was good.. but i wouldnt say great... im no battle rapper and i suck at dissing but some of ur lines and punches were just weak and played.. others were good...but this was no where near ya boys omega's level.. u could learn alot from him... ur flow was off maybe in like 2 or 3 places.. but besides that i guess it was ok.. nice word play in some parts... multis i think i saw a few... good rhymes over all.. 6.5/10
keep comin fam.. there is still plenty of time to elevate.

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