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JWILD 07-27-07 07:54 AM

JWILD vs sin-scere
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Recycling
No Biting
No Beef

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-29-07 at 07:54 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-27-07 12:55 PM

sin-scere has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-07 12:55 PM.

System 07-28-07 09:51 AM

JWILD has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-07 09:51 AM.

JWILD 07-28-07 09:53 AM

Sin-scere, Its time for you come to the surface for air,
cause the O2’s running out in your underground lair,
you’ve been lamming it out, now your exposed as a bitch,
While you’re living dual lives as both a mole and a snitch,
I’m choosing sides and I’ll never smoke pole to get rich.
How many bitches did you fuck during you’re DAY at the top?
Oh wait I just noticed you’ll never have a day at the top
cause you suck, you’re a gay and a flop.
You’ll never get rich off of rap track success,
fakers like you get eaten ALIVE in this bizness.
So tell me bitch Where’d you learn all your whack flows?
Probably from the same grandma who taught you to blow.
Or was it from your X girl who used to position you backwards,
Throw on a strap-on, and use you for practice?
You claim to be a great wordsmith or artist.
You’re about to be a late wordsmith; J-Wild’s the smartest.
So in a minute I’m gonna celebrate by smoking a Winston,
You know J runs WILD not this Jamaican from Kingston,
So ima give credit for the structure to the man Loyd Banks,
And you know the song too cause I’m “poppin them thangs.”

sin-scere 07-29-07 11:14 AM

man anotha eminem wanna b, damn white child
let mi rap diss up early so he git bac on dah road 2 8mile
fukin snake, always learkin n peepin
wen i caught him lerkin mutha fuka was in his nigs bed covered in semen
u aint even Dark, so y u claimin u a Demon
If he's DEMON im SIN his father lil nig goin git a beatin
Im not dah type talk all shyt,he dah fukin type 2 suk all diks
so wen he say he spit he just talkin bout sukin on diks
luv his fukin chik,like he married 2 dah game it got him whipped
he'll always b at his computer just waitin 4 summ1 to post a verse
he just revise it n evaluate 2 si if either him or dah person above him is worst
if dis was 4 cash,im like a thief so i'lll rob his purse his shyt aint a treasure but i aint a pirate but i'll leave him cursed
JWild who, Nobody kno's u like a bad product promotion
U kno dat kid dat clova killed oh u mean jon
yep dey like did i metion,he as being practisin 2 rap from how long
it neva gets old,im just tellin ya'll da story dat needs 2 b told
his rhymes r like broke niggaz he aint got no Flow
dont let him fool u, he just studied n rehearsed
he at dah mirror pratisin each n every verse
contomplating wat he gone say
but as usuall it sounds good 2 him but 2 otha's his shyt sounds gay
nigga i move more Wigs than a hair dresser, I aint talkin ur blood pressure
Wen i say im applyin pressure 2 Arms
Im talkin bout cockin aim n squeeze wen im blowin off Crawnz
Im a dun right here,Dont want 2 kill him off it's not fair
JWild in mah fukin crew so i had 2 b Sin-Scere

sin-scere 07-29-07 11:22 AM

good luck niga u did good yo...... waitin 4 votes now ezzzzzz

phenom1 07-29-07 02:34 PM

Voted For: JWILD

Opener:J
Closer:S
Multies:None
Creativity:J
WordPlay:S
EnjoyMent:S
Structure:J
Personals:S

OverAll:Sin-Sere

Unexplained vote removed

phenom1 07-29-07 02:35 PM

My Bad That Was For SinSere, Thats My Mistake, Shit.....

sin-scere 07-29-07 03:00 PM

DAMN YO LOL haha i dont kno ask summ1 how 2 change it yo ight. tanx 4 votin tho ight

phenom1 07-29-07 06:09 PM

I Sent An Email To The Administaration, But Please Vote On My Battle With Knucks

sin-scere 07-30-07 05:34 PM

YAH DEH TOOK DAH SCORE OFF. so vote again if u want 2

Fly-E 07-30-07 05:38 PM

This was feedback posted for sin-scere
 
My feedbak is for sin i liked all ur punches and flow its one of ur better battles i've seen keep it up mane! And jwild urs was good to keep doin ur thang!

sin-scere 07-30-07 06:24 PM

Tanx 4 dah feedbac yo. but fuk wi need votes like damn, c'mon peeps if u vote on our battle we'll check urs out

JWILD 08-01-07 02:25 PM

bumpin for votes............somebody vote please...

sin-scere 08-01-07 04:51 PM

damn ya'll c'mon votes plezz i vote on nuff battles no 1 can return dah favour

Ransum 08-02-07 04:14 PM

Voted For: JWILD

man anotha eminem wanna b, damn white child
let mi rap diss up early so he git bac on dah road 2 8mile
NAH.. 8 MAIL DISS OR PUNCH ARE PLAYED NOW...

fukin snake, always learkin n peepin
wen i caught him lerkin mutha fuka was in his nigs bed covered in semen
not feeling this....

u aint even Dark, so y u claimin u a Demon
If he's DEMON im SIN his father lil nig goin git a beatin
nah...

Im not dah type talk all shyt,he dah fukin type 2 suk all diks
so wen he say he spit he just talkin bout sukin on diks
why so many gay disses?? weak...

luv his fukin chik,like he married 2 dah game it got him whipped
he'll always b at his computer just waitin 4 summ1 to post a verse
nah...

he just revise it n evaluate 2 si if either him or dah person above him is worst
if dis was 4 cash,im like a thief so i'lll rob his purse his shyt aint a treasure but i aint a pirate but i'll leave him cursed
...... no comment...

JWild who, Nobody kno's u like a bad product promotion
U kno dat kid dat clova killed oh u mean jon
yep dey like did i metion,he as being practisin 2 rap from how long
it neva gets old,im just tellin ya'll da story dat needs 2 b told
his rhymes r like broke niggaz he aint got no Flow
dont let him fool u, he just studied n rehearsed
he at dah mirror pratisin each n every verse
^^^ all that i wasnt feeling at all....

contomplating wat he gone say
but as usuall it sounds good 2 him but 2 otha's his shyt sounds gay
^^ that was the first thing that actully sound decent.. had potential even thou its still another gay diss...

nigga i move more Wigs than a hair dresser, I aint talkin ur blood pressure
Wen i say im applyin pressure 2 Arms
Im talkin bout cockin aim n squeeze wen im blowin off Crawnz
Im a dun right here,Dont want 2 kill him off it's not fair
JWild in mah fukin crew so i had 2 b Sin-Scere

^^ the ending was aight... also had potential.... get more ruthless... talk about what u gonna do... use proper punches...
dont ramble like u just talking make ya verse sound like a verse... its more like a writting paper to me.... keep elevating man... u'll get it soon....

3 outta 10....

next

Sin-scere, Its time for you come to the surface for air,
cause the O2’s running out in your underground lair,
eeeh but aight.. if he was still 0-1 it would of hit harder....

you’ve been lamming it out, now your exposed as a bitch,
While you’re living dual lives as both a mole and a snitch,
eeh...
I’m choosing sides and I’ll never smoke pole to get rich.
How many bitches did you fuck during you’re DAY at the top?
Oh wait I just noticed you’ll never have a day at the top
cause you suck, you’re a gay and a flop.
actully mad me chuckle a bit.... aight

You’ll never get rich off of rap track success,
fakers like you get eaten ALIVE in this bizness.
So tell me bitch Where’d you learn all your whack flows?
Probably from the same grandma who taught you to blow.
nah...

Or was it from your X girl who used to position you backwards,
Throw on a strap-on, and use you for practice?
LOL...

You claim to be a great wordsmith or artist.
You’re about to be a late wordsmith; J-Wild’s the smartest.
eeh...

So in a minute I’m gonna celebrate by smoking a Winston,
You know J runs WILD not this Jamaican from Kingston,
lol... decent...
So ima give credit for the structure to the man Loyd Banks,
And you know the song too cause I’m “poppin them thangs.”
again ending...

you def have potential some of your bars you would of worded a bit better to hit alot harder....
you did have a few that made me chuckle and laugh creativeness is almost there just need better wording...
punches you could work...
u had somewhat of a personal which was aight...

def have potential keep elevating fam....

6 outta 10

medicine 08-02-07 09:12 PM

Voted For: JWILD

j-wild gets my vote
lyrics where more thought out
smoother flow and written in a way most could understand.
sinscere seemed to be angry rather than bring somthing original

KM 08-08-07 11:34 AM

Voted For: JWILD

giving this to J wild....he remained consistent with his diss....

sin sere u were off and on...on some parts u had a diss other parts seemed u were just freestyling....had some good punches though.....

~1~ 300........

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sin-scere 08-08-07 02:00 PM

it was al freestyle lol hahahahaa. i was fucked on diss 1 yo lol . he in mah crew i didnt want 2 go 2 hard lol. Dats my bad

JWILD 08-17-07 10:53 AM

It's been a while, but I'm back and bumpin for votes...

sin-scere 08-17-07 07:07 PM

werd mah nigga damn yo, ppl dont like votin in here shyt lol. bumpin 4 votes

sin-scere 08-27-07 09:51 PM

CAN SUMMMONE VOTE PLEZZZZZ JEZZZZZ. DISS BATTLE HAS BEEN UP 4 A REALLI LONG WHILE YO SHYT. i hav voted on soo much battles yo damn


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