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Ransum vs Konsept
Battle Rules:
4-5 Bars...(8-10 lines) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-07-07 at 05:21 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - win |
Konsept has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-07 04:21 PM.
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Kon's The Hurricane Of Rap...I'll Come Through And **Wet Ya Block**
**Steady Shots** Give Your Hat More Brains Than You **Ever Got**// Your Crew's Junior...Ya'll Can Call Me The **Senior Gunner**// Spray Shots And Won't Stop Til Ya Whole **Team Is Under**// Quit Rap...It Ain't For Ya...You **Lost In The Business**// It's Like A Marathon...You "Ran Some"(Ransum) But You Ain't **Crossin The Finish**// Now I'ma Make This Battle Known For Every **Weakling To Learn**// Gun Just **Heated Yo Perm** And Now This Faggot's **Sleepin Wit Worms**// uppin yo check in and drop...I fucked up on this minute shit though...my bad |
Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-07 04:59 PM.
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how u roll with a bitter(fly-e)... yet claim to spit with the B.E.S.T
even sonny bars aint show... u should take up the same konsept... get off my ass dude... got ya whole crew wishing i'd be friends witcha yet the only time I'll be under you's when you quote-me-in ur signature... I found out konsept average.. no-way he the B.E.S.T with Bar Battling Brawl's Now hes step's getting ‘Foot Passed’ around like DAVE BECHKAM Kicking Soccer Ball's... im bout to go jim duggin... hack-n-saw... crack his jaw... wit a 2 by 4... konspet the type to see no action live.. like Stevie Wonder wit 2 dike whores... heard your the best... but all that bullshit talkin get u murdered in text... Cuz you was EXTREMELY short on the heat... like a smurf wearing sweats... So you plan to diss Ransum... ya better plan to do it right... But if you such a rap cannibal do us all a favor... eat the hand you use to write!... MOTHER FUCKER.... i know noting about u.... but i dout u anything to worry about.... 1st bar... everyone knows fly-e is AKA CLOVA... Who Is A BITTER/ CHEATER WHO GOT BANND RECENTLY and came back with the name FLY-E also i had a battle set up by sonny bars him repp'in (B.E.S.T) and me repp'in ( 300 J.G) and he never show... lol... anything else pm me before voting... |
nice drop....
much respect fam.... u def have potential..... good luck... |
Voted For: Ransum
........ overall ransums verse just came harder......better diss...better punches.....konsept your verse was good to but u were just doing multis not really any diss towards ransum sept for one line about marathons....thats it.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243195 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243099 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=243041 ~1~ |
This was feedback posted for Ransum
Kon's The Hurricane Of Rap...I'll Come Through And **Wet Ya Block**
**Steady Shots** Give Your Hat More Brains Than You **Ever Got**// good.....7/10 Your Crew's Junior...Ya'll Can Call Me The **Senior Gunner**// Spray Shots And Won't Stop Til Ya Whole **Team Is Under**// iight....6/10 Quit Rap...It Ain't For Ya...You **Lost In The Business**// It's Like A Marathon...You "Ran Some"(Ransum) But You Ain't **Crossin The Finish**// good and funny......8/10 Now I'ma Make This Battle Known For Every **Weakling To Learn**// Gun Just **Heated Yo Perm** And Now This Faggot's **Sleepin Wit Worms**// ok....7/10 good verse but could use better punches how u roll with a bitter(fly-e)... yet claim to spit with the B.E.S.T even sonny bars aint show... u should take up the same konsept... good.....8/10 get off my ass dude... got ya whole crew wishing i'd be friends witcha yet the only time I'll be under you's when you quote-me-in ur signature... good and funny.....8/10 I found out konsept average.. no-way he the B.E.S.T with Bar Battling Brawl's Now hes step's getting ‘Foot Passed’ around like DAVE BECHKAM Kicking Soccer Ball's... LMAO.....9/10 im bout to go jim duggin... hack-n-saw... crack his jaw... wit a 2 by 4... konspet the type to see no action live.. like Stevie Wonder wit 2 dike whores... good......8/10 heard your the best... but all that bullshit talkin get u murdered in text... Cuz you was EXTREMELY short on the heat... like a smurf wearing sweats... good......8/10 So you plan to diss Ransum... ya better plan to do it right... But if you such a rap cannibal do us all a favor... eat the hand you use to write!... MOTHER FUCKER.... good closure......9/10 vote goes to Ransum for better puches |
sorry but i cant vote yet so i juss left feedback man
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upp'in for more votes plez...........................................
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I said 4-5 bars and you put 6...shit's straight though...I don't really care bout dat shit...I'm just pointing it out...uppin fo votes
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my fult honestly i aint realize that....
shit i never go ova the bar limit... i think i forgot how many bars we was going fam shit.... yo my bad honestly i aint know and if u wanna have another battle and i drop 4 bars and u drop 6 thats cool to man just outta respect.... but upp'in for more votes..... |
we can battle again...yeah man...but we spittin the same bars...that's how I do...like I said...I don't care about it...
UPPIN |
ayo....I'm drunk...uppin....hahahahaha...wtf man...people need to vote...this shit is hurt...
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This was feedback posted for Ransum
get off my ass dude... got ya whole crew wishing i'd be friends witcha
yet the only time I'll be under you's when you quote-me-in ur signature lmfao |
^^ thanks.... but u should of voted......
upp'in for more votes... |
Voted For: Ransum
decent idea, but worded horribly...regardless of it's meaning...B.E.S.T is an acronym and people will read it as such....so in reality...your trying to rhyme...the letter T....with konsept....i know that wasn't your intention..but that's what it is. second bar is sort of played out....i don't know many times i've seen someome..including myself when im lazy...say shit like...only time you above me when you post first...or something like that....signature is a spin i havn't seen..but it isn't enough spin to distract from the played concept. 3rd bar was ok, just wodered wrong again.. it would have been better if it was like... koncept below average, no way he's BEST when he can't battle at all... bitch gets kicked around more than dave becham passin the ball.. that's still not dope by my standards..but it's significantly better....it's saying the same thing...but the wording is just better.. next bar, pretty decent...my favorite so far....a little played..wording is bad once again...but the concept is decent atleast....wording will come with time......next line is kinda cool...definately original...good overall punch...a smurf wearing sweats isn't exactly a great portrayal of being short on heat....but it's decent...and it fits with the multie...so fuck it...decent line.. closer....shit was hot...only problem is....did he say he was a cannibal? if not than you are assuming....and thats not good...personals win battles..what would make it better...is if you said.. .so if you plan to diss ransum, plan to do it right.. better yet, act a cannibal, detatch the hands you use to write.. overall....not a good verse...the ideas alone would make it an average verse...but the wording kept that from happening..the best punch you had was by far your last one...your showing signs of talent...good work....stay up man.. konsept...the only line you had that Im even going to allow myself to mention...is the crossin the finish line..that was pretty fucking good name/wordplay....only thing is..your set up line was kinda pointless...it didn't add much to the punch itself...either way.....if you can extract all this whackness from your verses..and transform every bar into a bar equal to the caliber of the one you had...you might be a force to be reckoned with. ransum wins this battle..easy...konsept showed potential..but failed to reach the level needed to outshine his competitor. |
This was feedback posted for Ransum
I give my feed to ransum jus cuz he came wit personales and punches the flow was deff. konsept i never stopped once i jus buzzed threw it cuz it went so smoothly except the false line bought me AGAIN! damn but good battle ya'll overall a tie for me!
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Voted For: Konsept
ok i had to go with konsept on this better punches better word play better flow, ransum yours was ok your punches took too long to come that beckham line was too drawn out |
This was feedback posted for Konsept
Yo weren't the rules "4-5 Bars(10 Lines)"?? Cuz Ran dropped 12 lines!! isn't that a disqualification!? He dropped more than you...that shud be an automatic loss for him.
Anyway, aight verse Kon. U just needed more time to really think out some shit on em. that just look like a keystyle..good luck tho fam...1 |
upp'in for more votes.....................................
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This was feedback posted for Ransum
haha Ransum dawg u hit him hard c^uz. diss was a tough battle shyt it was heat, but u had more visuals man i coulod sdi wat u were sayin n u used info dat u kno n dissed him n his crew. Konsept u did great son, naww mean u spit ur shyt good flow god creativity n punvhes god here n there. Overall great battle yo
CAN YA'LL RETURN DAH FAVOUR N CHECK MY BATTLES OUT.... |
upp'in for more plez........................................
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