*~F@M3-Iz~* vs TrapMoney
 

Battle Rules: :shoot:

12 Lines :thumbup:
No Crew Votes :nono:
No Recycling :nono:
No Biting :nono:

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-07 at 09:39 PM

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TrapMoney has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-07 09:40 PM.

Lil buddy you tryin too hard to find out wat '*~F@M3-Iz~*/

ill help u. 'stainless leave u 'brainless, now u front 'paged bitch//

now u gotta 'face lift, and when the 'gauge hit, its useless for u to try and find your rib 'cage kid///

if its beef, where yo from? ill hit the 'interstate quicc, catch my on the 'highway////

ready to let da 'nine play, ill be out in front of ya crib like a 'driveway/////

i think u should listin to what 'i say, cuz i keep it real my nigga, and dis 'guy fake//////

'soft as hell, dis pussy remind me of cottonelle///////

ran up on em, he was shocced and well....he got away and found some fuccin 'cops to tell////////

listin, when it come to dat beef u get 'served best/////////

i gotta desert eagle that'll leave u a 'bird chest//////////

so when dem 'bulletz zip, dont wonder 'who it hit///////////

your 'ruined kid, when u look down you'll c your 'fluids drip////////////

*~F@M3-Iz~* has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-07 11:59 PM.

I'm Laughin Prick, And I'm The One That's Stackin Rich...
I 'Open-Hand The Rabbit In The Hat' Now Watch Me 'Smack-This-Trick'...*

U Get Clapped And Flipped, Murda You Then Ya Fam Is Done...
I'm Leavin U 0-2, Kuz Aint No Way U Beatin Fame, Let Alone Ransum...
(No Diss)

Ya Raps Is Funny, And Homie What Da Hell Is TrapMoney...
I'm Puttin U Thru The 'Crash-Test', Now Watch Me 'Slap-This-Dummy'...**

Damn...

Homie I'm Reckless, I Understand Your Just Another Child Neglected...
He Mad Cuz I Could Literally Run 'Circles-Around-His-Whole-Text-Record'...***

I Could Tho...

Homie It Aint Changed, Lil Nigga Its Still The Same...
Ramsack Ya Apartment Wit Gasoline, And Leave Traps-Money In Flames...

Should I Finish Him??...

U Not Beatin Me, U Better Off Turnin Ya Back 2 Battle Yaself...
I'm Bad 4 Ya Health, Goddamn I Just Put Traps Whole Rap Career On The Shelf...

*The Rabbit It The Hat Trick..I Slapped Trap(The Trick), So I Open Hand The Rabbit

**Crash Test Dummies...Duh

***His Text Record Is 0-0..I Could Run Circles around It..Get It Circles..Outline The 0'z

Voted For: *~F@M3-Iz~*

Yo The Punches Hell, And The Flow Was Hott, Nice BAttle Both Had Hott Verses, But This Verse Took It

Please Return The Favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=3179555

fahso lets get dem votes in.................................

uppin for votes............................................. .............................

damn wats up wit yall bois from the same "crew" votin. i aint trippin doh. lets get more votes

Nobody Knew He Was Apart Of The Crew, When We Did This Battle....He Wasn't Apart Of The Crew Till Like Yesterday

its wateva my nigga i said i aint trippin..........

Voted For: *~F@M3-Iz~*

voted for F@m3-Iz
U Not Beatin Me, U Better Off Turnin Ya Back 2 Battle Yaself...
I'm Bad 4 Ya Health, Goddamn I Just Put Traps Whole Rap Career On The Shelf...
thats the line that got my vote
more punches in ur verse
and stronger to
trap just came a lil softer

uppin............................................. .................

Voted For: TrapMoney

ok, there weren't any amazing punches in this it was a pretty even match but i'm going with trap on this one his lines were just more grimey and the flow was a lil better and it just seemed like he was goin at you harder on this fame

flow trap
punches fame
worplay tie

fasho bruh still uppin......................................

Voted For: *~F@M3-Iz~*

Trapmoney:: Given this is a battle, i'd have to say i didnt like your drop very much, the flow was good throughout and some of your metaphors were good but not for a battle, i liked the driveway line but theres no punches, also your style is kinda fucked, lines are all over the place, and that G'd up shit doesnt work in text

Fame:: You verse was the more quality battle drop, more of a rounded approach, flow as good, punches were there, the wordplay was alright, and your structure wasnt all over the place, but i didnt like how you comment on what you said after certain lines, its like being your own hypeman, not cool, lol. STOP explaining your bars, its nooby, if people cant figure them out dont try to be to complex, (not that they were, it was easily understandable to me).

Flow - Goes to Fame, out of the two he had the more complex flow, not that either was spectacular but comparing the two Fame gets it

Punches - Goes to Fame aswell, his were on a more constant basis and were effective in contrast to Trapmoneys

Personals - Niether of you get it, nothing impressing enough to pick sides for

Metaphors - Although Trapmoney didnt use the metaphors in punches and used them more as a self glory or even filler, he had some decent ones, i liked the driveway line personally.

Wordplay - Fame, again, it stood out more in his verse and he made the better effort

Structure - Fame, Traps was all over the place, i didnt feel his style to much

Originality - Tie nothing dope, pretty much the run of the mill bars

Overal - Gotta say Fame, had the overal better battle verse.


RTF---->

Good Looks On The Vote Famz....


UPPIN THIS BATTLE!!!!!.....Can Someone Please End This

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This was feedback posted for *~F@M3-Iz~*
 

damn nice battle yall.....i thought i had replyed to this one before but guess not lol....anyways.....

trap if only u had more punches or humorous lines then it would have been a real close battle....u had a real good flow with your lines and u used the multis well it was smooth when i read it.....but u were lackin the punches....still i liked your verse 8/10.....

fames.....u got it here your punches and humor just killed it.....good shit man......9/10....

to bad since we in the same crew i cant vote .....so this just feed back....~1~

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^^^^^^check my battle out please

Voted For: *~F@M3-Iz~*

*~F@M3-Iz~* defo took this with way better punches. It was a pretty weak battle, but whatever.

Voted For: *~F@M3-Iz~*

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