Ransum vs Mystic City
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Ridn


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-22-07 at 12:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-07 12:28 PM.

Mystic City has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-07 10:37 AM.

I'll leave you dazed... im amazed that this kid won a text verse...
and i'l tear this Kat-apart like Japan's Karate experts...
Sorry to have to stomp you before you flower like corrupt botanists...
You Just too wack... should be banned from the site like fired archaeologists...
Respect ransum... But Hey... all's fair in rhyme-n-war..
so I gotta blow ya spot like a Hindu wit a 7-UP can full of C-4...
Watch me drop kick mystic... both feet meetin...relocatin bones in ur face..
wait for your jaw to dislocate then kick it once more to put it back in its place...


something real quick to see if this is mystic alias...
1st bar: Kat-apart... kata is a Form of Karate...

ur a servant chained to my foot.....watch dis bitch follow tha leader~
cuz u Fucked Up for Being Untrained for sportin those sneakers~(he wears FUBU kicks)
he says COME ON GIMMIE A BREAK.....you Fucking prep~
now you got people in darkness like flava flav wen somthin shited on da step~(confused)
dis pussy's flow is old lets call dis cat sebatian~
they featured in black n white because he's a has been~(Sebatian in a old cat and he is black n white)
dis nigga writes like an amateur....Yo Flowz? Liar~
Ya text still wouldnt be hot if ya keyboard was on fire~(HEHE)

lil sumtin sumtin.....

kew drop

good luck

uppin votes ne one.........

aint no alliance wit da utha mystic.....see he joined in 05 and i joined a whole year earlier in 04 so might as well stop wit dat.....

somebody vote.....pleaze.......

upp'in for votes.......................................

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

man i understand how you have to go back & explain yourself...cool punchlines though~

Voted For: Ransum

Easily ransum wins this mystic ur stuff was decent like it had nice flow ur last line was ur hardest hittin and all of ransums went decent so good Job not the greatest battle but it was sumthin!

Voted For: Ransum

u win, mystic city's was wack..ur's wasnt to hott...but yeah a lot better than his/hers...

ur last bar was ur best..good flow in it..other shit was retarded..but i think u know that...

and no..thats not my alias...the ip adresses are completley different

ummmmmm o.k....i guess....uppin real votas pleaze....

uppin votez............

upp'in for more votes.......................................

Voted For: Ransum

umm...ransum won this battle for coming with less played punches

that Kat-apart thing was pretty ill.....

overall tho Ransum came much much sicker

yup thanx fo votin.....lets get dis battle ova wit....

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 

yo you did wat u normally do and ripped him apart 1 bar by the other naw mean keep doin your thing yo... you blowed this battle wit just a lil bit of lyricism

Voted For: Ransum

Not impressed. Rookie at best.

Ransum: You attempt to use big ideas for nice setups, but it comes off weak. Archaeologist line was easily the most solid line in the whole verse. Not a strong drop at all, typical standard issue rhymes.
Score: 5

Mystic City: Please stop explaining your punches. Not that strong, and none of them really needed explaining. Keyboard on fire? Ancient. Try to keep your syllable count per line similar.
Score: 2.5

Much love, try again folks.

Voted For: Ransum

Not a great battle here really, but Ransum at least had some punchlines in here. They weren't dope, but punchlines never the less. Mystic came played and weak and was more interested in flow than punches.

Vote - Ransum.