"Unlucky"...SNIPPET of some New L.E Music
 

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Cheeeckkkk it out.

"Unlucky"

First Verse and Hook

Beat by Shadowville.

Let me know what you think.

lol @ come hard on a track.....gotta change my pants.

This could be a tight track man. I like the hook a lot, but I think you should rerecord it a little and try to smooth it out a bit. And at that "Click bam" part in the hook you should add a good sounding gun, not a really fake one. I like the whole theme of the track though man.....good shit :thumbup:

Lol thanks man.

Yeah I am throwing in some sound effects...actually what happened is that I originally recorded it in four line segments, and then when I went to save the wavs I didn't save the session. I had to put them all back, and I know I didn't get it exact...So I have to rerecord it anyway.

I just thought I would throw it up now.

Thanks for the feedback though man. :thumbup:

You know what I love most about RV?

Getting and giving feedback for songs.

So, I'll return the favour and shit.

I know.....its a lost art on RV. I remember the days I would go to the songs page and just leave feed for everyone on the first page. Shit like that doesn't happen anymore. Ohh well man :thumbup:

not bad man, agree with E tho, reflow the whole verse, and try to up flow spots, etc. Also try some cadence switching as its a kinda monotone verse, which, fits the beat, but it doesn't stand out from it.

$0.02

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Thanks for the advice man.

no dizzoubt. now get on msn foo.

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Lol I'm working till ten.

Moonlight Madness sale. :(

Hook's hot...if I had a decent mic I'd volunteer to hop on this...

Thanks man. And we can hop on a collab someday for sure.

One of the questions I actually wanted to ask is what everybody thinks of the quality...if anybody has any feedback on that, I would like to hear it for sure.

If this had a pussy I'd eat it, son. Also, just curious, do you know how to pronounce ennui? French pronounciations. I thought it was en-you-eye at first.

"En wee"

French word. I dropped the name as soon as I found out.

En wee? I'm pretty sure it's on-we. Unless en is the same was on..mhm.

Ahh!

You're too smart for me.

-Brain Overloads-

I know, Chad. I know.

man...get at me for that collab


ne-who


I do like shadowville beats...but, they tend to be loud-ish


U sound like Ebircs when u first came in...

I think ur flow is adequate here...but, up ur delivery...hold out the syllables a tad longer...

I like ur dubs

hook cudda been mixed better: a tad louder, maybe panned differently...


not bad for what it was...but, cud def. use a lil polish




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Thanks man.

And I will definitely get at you on that collab.

You gotta work on your lyrics bro...

I think youd benefit from working on beats with a faster tempo... As it stands, some people have the voice for those slow bpm instrumentals and some people just sound fucked...

Lyrics though for you is a biggie.............some of those lines were weak as hell my friend... What I suggest.........is you sit there and write a 100 bar track and try to elevate with your multies and flow...

Not trying to be rude.......just trying to help you improve.....

hey, where you livin now? i'm still in the windy city (lethbridge, the real windy city) for another semester anyways.

I like this song man...quality is really good...i like your voice on faster songs, i'd like the flow a lot but it comes a little short...like you the pauses aren't distinguished because of your rhyme scheme. I'm really liking this though the more i listen. Voice is good...presence is upped, but delivery is still a tad less then what you could do though.
We still have to meet up and collab

www.myspace.com/neighborj
message me what you think of the new rough cuts if you have a minute.
peace

For sure, man, I feel you.

Thanks for the advice. :thumbup:



I'm back in my home town by Edmonton. How is your schooling going?

And fuck yeah we have to collab.

Thanks for the feed man, I'll hit up your thread.

yea...only thing i have to say is watch out with the way your sayin things....toward the end starts to take a monotone vibe to it....nyg n phenom got it right tho....clean up a few things smooth it out....n swtich some shit up, n your good to go

I will be re-recording this soon, so I will post it up when the whole song is done. :thumbup: