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dunmenuts vs Big_O
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10 Lines No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-02-08 at 05:28 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
dunmenuts has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-08 05:28 PM.
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As if this cat telling me to leave RAPVERSE!!!!
This cat acting boss when the truth being 1-8 is your record,* Take a look closer to home,its the voters who's getting bored. What have you done to earn your place in the hall of fame? oh i get it you admit your wack but trying to b funny is why ur tame.** Fuck the excuses, your lame as fuck, You could'nt pass my walls with an armoured truck. best defence is attack, so in your denial you call me gay *** coz when you made your choise your gutted u chose the wrong way. Your faggot partners gave you the code name BIG O, Your secret is now out, so act like you m8's and lay LOW. *dude hides his text record coz its 1-8. **He admits to being wack, but its ok as its funny coz people laugh at him.(in a previous post). *** I know his gonna call me gay or something in his battle. |
Big_O has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-08 11:44 PM.
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You wanna battle me again kid, you should try stand up
Cause this right here is a joke, Now while your planned up Lost to me once comin back for another But I beat both you and the pussy of your mother Your discrace to your nation I aint trying to hate If there were all girls and you, we'd never Repopulate You a homo thug and we all know this Im just statin facts that wasnt even diss Now I got 1 more line to ruin this chump "YOUR FIRED" So says Donald Trump... |
Only reason I call you gay...Is Cause-Well-You Are
All the posts and quotes people put up of you are all QUEER fucking Posts. |
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Quit running your mouth little bitch. The quotes was because i was pretending to be gay, it is possible to do that as-long as you are comfortable with your sexuality, mine being straight. :shoot: |
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WHO THE FUCK PRETENDS TO BE GAY?!?! A homo hiding in a closet.. |
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Well that would depend on the pre-text dickhead. I didnt explain, simply as it was'nt worth explaining aight. :nono: |
This was feedback posted for dunmenuts
wack battle
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Huuummmmmmmmmmmm CORRECT! :thumbup: |
Uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!! please just vote thanks.
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Wth Will Someone Fuckinngg Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its Beena Month
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Voted For: Big_O
dunmenuts: you had no quotables. u had generic punches that ive seen for years. u need better delivery and wording. Big O: Lost to me once comin back for another But I beat both you and the pussy of your mother that line wasnt even that good but it was the best in the battle. it seemed like you didnt even try in this battle. you half-assed your punches and used pretty generic ideas. u still had the better verse though v/ Big O |
Voted For: dunmenuts
this battle was weak as fuk both had really poorly put together verses both lacked a hard hittin punch no multi's this shit was just blah both of you need to elevate! as for my vote it goes to Dummenuts just for having one semi-decent bar="What have you done to earn your place in the hall of fame? oh i get it you admit your wack but trying to b funny is why ur tame.**"= ^^^thats was it both verses were horrible dom's was just less horrible!!! vote=dom for a less horrible verse containg one semi-decent line ,,,,,,,elevate fellas |
Voted For: Big_O
You wanna battle me again kid, you should try stand up Cause this right here is a joke, Now while your planned up nah... Lost to me once comin back for another But I beat both you and the pussy of your mother ok... Your discrace to your nation I aint trying to hate If there were all girls and you, we'd never Repopulate lol funny... You a homo thug and we all know this Im just statin facts that wasnt even diss ok.. Now I got 1 more line to ruin this chump "YOUR FIRED" So says Donald Trump... weak ending should of word it better... This cat acting boss when the truth being 1-8 is your record,* Take a look closer to home,its the voters who's getting bored. nah... What have you done to earn your place in the hall of fame? oh i get it you admit your wack but trying to b funny is why ur tame.** nah... Fuck the excuses, your lame as fuck, You could'nt pass my walls with an armoured truck. ^^ that shit sound so GAY.. i knew u was a female... best defence is attack, so in your denial you call me gay *** coz when you made your choise your gutted u chose the wrong way. Your faggot partners gave you the code name BIG O, Your secret is now out, so act like you m8's and lay LOW. nah weak ending... |
Voted For: dunmenuts
u beat him u beat him.. im just tryin to get my 50 character.. but yea, i vote for u.. fasho.. 1 |
This was feedback posted for dunmenuts
Ight i see ya but halla at ya boi staccz and vote on my battle
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Voted For: dunmenuts
Duns got it..... Decent flow but i followed.... Like the personals.... |
Up this shit peps.................. It needs to be closed+ forgotten.
Thanks for your time. PEACE |
Voted For: dunmenuts
this was crap at best, uhm, voting for dunnenuts though because he didn't use fake personals, well, less of em anyways, he actually attempted real ones, but both need to elevate, pz v/dun |
Voted For: dunmenuts
v/ dun check it... big: honestly, your verse and the bars within it were a bit played bro. your flow was choppy and your structure was off. do your work some justice...and try proof-reading your drop(s) before you drop them. trust me...it helps out tremendously. you were real close to using the lines that you did drop to their full potential, but i feel that you mis-worded them...so it hurt you. don't worry though. "hard work pays off...so i take no days off" (the alchemist). keep on keepin' on. it'll come to you. you got the potential. just show us that you have the lion heart needed to continue fighting. word. its all good my man. grind on. dun: at times your lines were a bit confusing, but you did what you needed to, which was out diss your opponent. fine tune your bars playboy. also, (i go through this too at times, but i find ways to work around 'em) if you have to explain your insults...it might be a good idea to look into other ways of droppin' them. beyond that, you earned the "w" in this match up. be careful though. you barely got this one. had the lil homie "big" come a bit sharper, who knows what the outcome could've been. just like i told lay...smash at all times fam. dont hold back. as far as activity goes, keep up the good work folks. as far as the elevation goes, don't get down on yourselves. you both came to the right place to step your writing game up. stick to it. i want to see where you both can go, given a bit of inspiration and drive. take care battlecats. rock on... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=246480 ^^^check us out.we would like to see what y'all think. oner... ...the supe, crhyme sin '08 |
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