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Terumoto 04-12-08 07:52 PM

Wow...
 
I just applied for a job as a ghost writer.

Who would have thought doing this shit would make me some cash?

It will be dope if I get the job lol

Cola 04-12-08 07:53 PM

cool, maybe you could help out Soulja Boy

Terumoto 04-12-08 07:56 PM

I don't think that guy needs any help from me.

He's got making millions of dollars down pretty damn well, and I suck at that.

Cola 04-12-08 07:58 PM

well put T, well put

JTR 04-12-08 08:02 PM

"Nah I don't sell as much as you, but fuck the facts
This shit's funny, you're paid money to suck at rap"

- JTR

Fucking dig that shit

KOOL COL-B 04-12-08 09:44 PM

lol, i've replied to ghostwriter needed ads on craigslist n shit, but have never bin gottin back to :( werd

Terumoto 04-12-08 10:34 PM

Man, I contacted this dude, and he got back to me like this:

"Ok Write me a few lines
let me test your credibility since you
claim to be familar with the hip-hop/ rap world.
show me what u got. a few great punchlines.
keep in mind.
1) great vocabulary
2) sleek metaphors
3) grammer / punchlines et al.

show me what u got.
lets go."

And I was like:

"OK, here's some quick stuff...

You doubt what I wrote? Man, I rock from coast to coast
couldn't find a doper ghost if the cause of death was overdose
Just gimme a beat to roast, track'll be hot has hell, son
Cause my lines are smokin', and my beef is always well done

Anyway, I'm just teasin', you don't like my rhymes you can leave'em
I'm just a dude who chills out making beats n' smokin' weed n'
writing raps so I can read'em, ain't no other reason
I make music, I spit lyrics, and you can have some if you need'em

If this shit is too underground, I got some other sounds,
If I write mainstream style you might see an increase in ya turnaround,
All I'd have to do is spit wack, make my lyrics weak
My mind is deep, I coulda wrote "crank dat" in my fuckin sleep.


Is that the kind of thing you're after?"

Ysdat 04-12-08 10:55 PM

whats his contact details.

quick PM my way would be appreciatted :)

SUPERVILLAIN 04-12-08 11:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Got Soul? ©
whats his contact details.

quick PM my way would be appreciatted :)


^^^wordness. :evilgrin:


s.v.

La Cosa Nostra 04-13-08 12:22 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Terumoto
Man, I contacted this dude, and he got back to me like this:

"Ok Write me a few lines
let me test your credibility since you
claim to be familar with the hip-hop/ rap world.
show me what u got. a few great punchlines.
keep in mind.
1) great vocabulary
2) sleek metaphors
3) grammer / punchlines et al.

show me what u got.
lets go."

And I was like:

"OK, here's some quick stuff...

You doubt what I wrote? Man, I rock from coast to coast
couldn't find a doper ghost if the cause of death was overdose
Just gimme a beat to roast, track'll be hot has hell, son
Cause my lines are smokin', and my beef is always well done

Anyway, I'm just teasin', you don't like my rhymes you can leave'em
I'm just a dude who chills out making beats n' smokin' weed n'
writing raps so I can read'em, ain't no other reason
I make music, I spit lyrics, and you can have some if you need'em

If this shit is too underground, I got some other sounds,
If I write mainstream style you might see an increase in ya turnaround,
All I'd have to do is spit wack, make my lyrics weak
My mind is deep, I coulda wrote "crank dat" in my fuckin sleep.


Is that the kind of thing you're after?"

you so gotta post his reply now...

Ysdat 04-13-08 12:24 AM

Im writing a little somthing to send with my application.

All I got so far:

you wanna talk rap rhymes and lyrics??!
so many styles, I can attack minds with gimicks
you know I rapidly scratch mines with vivids
understandably rip backs spines from midgets
ha!, listen to me, Im a kidder of all sorts
gasp for pure breath and spit with full force
ask for newer depth, Ill submit it here of course
cashing in a cheque, just for writing all my thoughts
yo, my raps and lyrics are the foundation I pave
break it down to its rawest form like a sine wave
Ill exploit the dictionary a words, tight in my brain
lifes a fine game like the roll of a dice in taipei
damn, I got rhymes similier to a fine serenade
quenching thirsty kids, like a glass a lemonade
I fill pad papers, so dont ask to share a page



oh yeh OMB, I wouldnt give the details a this out to many people bro.

Terumoto 04-13-08 12:46 AM

Word, yeah.. I'm not going to.

La Cosa Nostra 04-13-08 01:06 AM

lads
fuck the aplication ill crack ya face in with a bat pursuading
record execs to back me basing my raps elation on the fact
im racing to the top--- id even battle eminem
but hes scared of all the proof id drop
err sorry, i meant truth ive got, in this brain
gettin pissy off coronas and cocaine
wishing i could make a million dollers for going insane the same
but the game just aint paying
and fame just aint laying, food on the table
so fuck being able to spend my life
trying to rap for a living, id rather relax from spittin
but continue charging tax for writtens
& fuck busting my balls for this rap religion
ive already ghost written, next for me is IT bizzin
ess...

cypher mother fuckers

Blay'all 04-13-08 01:36 AM

yo i don't really do this typin shit, or act scary,
but my text game serious, they callin me Blackberry.
that shit that Nos said, like he readin my mind...
i'mma shed some light tonight while yall readin my rhymes.
so little homey fuck all the rest, i'mma quote K.R.S.
its all about peace, love, unity, and havin' fun
"these are the words... of KRS-ONE!"

a cypher is in order, RapVerse is silly sad
my lines turn that frown upside down like a titty flash
so lets cut out all the yappin, take it back to the roots
like it or not, this shit the motherfuckin truth.

bitches.


i know i text like i'm writing audio, it sounds good if you flow it but doesn't read good, but fuck it... i've never been a text rapper, this shit bigger than that criticism anyways, we just havin fun.

SUPERVILLAIN 04-13-08 02:06 AM

what up o.m.b.??? lol. i didnt know that you were ter. i was wondering what you've been up to. i hope that all has been well with you on your side brutha, word.

good luck fam, handle it...


...the super

La Cosa Nostra 04-13-08 02:10 AM

really depends whether your typing shit or writing hits
defiant spits or poetic magic with a catalyst
too many cats rappin adjectives, no fuckin with verbs
i do what i speak, battle me im crumpin with words
above the herds, in the stars
while you aim for the clouds, surpassed
by a god with a skill for the art
ill as a killers grill off the mark, n the charts?
i rip it appart ghost style, picture the cards
I could pull, but im too cool... amongst mostly fools
n blay, like it or not, this shit is the motherfuckin truth.

Terumoto 04-13-08 03:13 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SUPERVILLAIN
what up o.m.b.??? lol. i didnt know that you were ter. i was wondering what you've been up to. i hope that all has been well with you on your side brutha, word.

good luck fam, handle it...


...the super


Sup man... Yeah it's all good over here

Been doing some production, and I transferred to a degree in composition at university, so it looks like my life is headed in the direction of music... Which is cool.

SUPERVILLAIN 04-13-08 03:34 AM

^^^congrats brutha, hold it down.


esvee

La Cosa Nostra 04-14-08 03:56 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Terumoto
Sup man... Yeah it's all good over here

Been doing some production, and I transferred to a degree in composition at university, so it looks like my life is headed in the direction of music... Which is cool.

^my official beat making slave

Ysdat 04-14-08 04:09 AM

That beat working out OMB?

Terumoto 04-14-08 04:14 AM

Yeah I've been playing around with it a bit...

If you're gonna be online for a while I could probably mix down a quick version of it and show it to you in like 15-30 mins.

btw, that song is so dope.

Ysdat 04-14-08 04:16 AM

yeh Ill be online. Thats old school NZ music bro, bit of a classic from round my way.

Terumoto 04-14-08 04:50 AM

Alright here's the kind of thing I've got going...

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

It's still sort of rough, I'll do you a proper one if you want to use it.

Oh and btw ignore the guitar solo, that's just me being an idiot (been smoking weed..)

Ysdat 04-14-08 05:01 AM

Gat solos classic.

Maybe slower tempo, less of the original sound and more of a composed bassline n shit.
ahaha im typing this in your guitar solo, you trippy cunt. I think a slower tempo might go down well, aswell as like I said, less of the original coming through and more composed ish.


Delete that link bro, just so other cunts dont slim in on ideas n plans.

Terumoto 04-14-08 05:09 AM

Yeah I can slow it down easy.

Hmm.. If what you mean by getting rid of the original sound is adding in a composed bassline, then I could probably do that too. Would you want anything more than that?

I didn't put drums over the top because the drums from the original song rocked so hard.

Valerie 04-14-08 06:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Baphomet
lads
fuck the aplication ill crack ya face in with a bat pursuading
record execs to back me basing my raps elation on the fact
im racing to the top--- id even battle eminem
but hes scared of all the proof id drop
err sorry, i meant truth ive got, in this brain
gettin pissy off coronas and cocaine
wishing i could make a million dollers for going insane the same
but the game just aint paying
and fame just aint laying, food on the table
so fuck being able to spend my life
trying to rap for a living, id rather relax from spittin
but continue charging tax for writtens
& fuck busting my balls for this rap religion
ive already ghost written, next for me is IT bizzin
ess...

cypher mother fuckers


that shits hot nos.

La Cosa Nostra 04-14-08 07:38 AM

that was crap..

Adam 04-14-08 09:49 AM

I'm dead and I write..

What the fuck does that make me?

SUPERVILLAIN 04-14-08 09:52 AM

^^^poetic zombies are the coolest!!!

red bull in: "write of the living thread".


s.v.

SUPERVILLAIN 04-14-08 09:54 AM

^^^lol. forgive me for the "wtf is he talkin' about comment of the day". im tired and my brains totally fried at the moment.

wait. if my brain is utterly useless, then you cant eat it out of my head poetic zombie, ha! cool beans. lol.


s.v. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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La Cosa Nostra 04-15-08 03:32 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Chalk Clorox
i thought about doing that but, i think its pathetic and defeats the purpose of hip hop (which is expressing yourself) when a rapper cant write his own rhymes and i wouldnt want to be a supporter of that..

have you heard most new hip hop these days?


dude, i can write 50 songs a week if their all just about gangstas and getting money and bitches...


if you dont see that as being a lucrative deal for minimal work.. then your head is in a box.

La Cosa Nostra 04-15-08 03:43 AM

bah, fuck the state of hip hop...

the glory days are over lad... well and truly over..

Terumoto 04-15-08 04:50 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Chalk Clorox
yeah i could do it and probly make good money but i feel that is what is destroying hip hop right now, i wouldnt want to contribute to that.. im sick of hearing 50 say run up on my car and youll get shot.im sick of not having any new shit worth listening to.


Nothing new worth listening to? Are you serious?

The only reason you think that way is because you're looking in all the wrong places for music...

La Cosa Nostra 04-15-08 05:40 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Terumoto
Nothing new worth listening to? Are you serious?

The only reason you think that way is because you're looking in all the wrong places for music...

yeah well, i listen to a lot of radio...

i can find newish hip hop that i like... but for the most part, its just not on the radio...


except for triple j who sometimes play some dope hip hop....

Terumoto 04-15-08 05:50 AM

They play a lot of dope stuff on 94.5 over here, nothing else is really played on the radio,

but theres PLENTY of hip hop that you won't hear on the radio.


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