Check out my poem for my intro to creative writing class b
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=247526

:evilgrin:

you entered THAT in for a creative writing class?

The Kid

The kid is a raging volcano
The kid is the color red
Ever touch his car
Don’t be surprised if you wound up dead


^was my first choice, but didn't think it'd go over to well b.

but yo peep game, this is something you might think is ill. Yesterday, when I was taking the most incredible and amazing dump ever, right? I took out a marker, and scribbled "BOOGER" on the fucking stall wall!!! OMG!! The rush I felt was amazing b. Can I join your gang b? PLEASE?!?!?!

no.... your not worthy

aww, what'd I do wrong b? Was the bathroom stall not dangerous enough? I wanna be like the cool kids b. Running around coloring on everything. LEmme at em b!! Lemme at em!!!

you wanna get into my crew you gotta off someone..

give me a name b!! I take em out with no mercy!! Straight rape em to death!! Give em to me b! Give em to me! :shoot:

you couldnt hurt a fly kiddo..

My wallets a better weapon than an atom bomb b! Let me at em!

nah your weak..

damn and just when i was gonna cop the whole crew a bunch of BMW 7 series. Bunch of haters b. BUNCH OF HATERS!! Don't be suprised when you burning that beer belly climbing up hills, then go up to tag a wall, and you see a tag that says, "THE KID WAS HERE". Ya feel me b? YA FEEL ME?

I feel you...i feel you kid
no homo tho

baph...enough of the nonsense....drop an OM

you know nothing of graffiti toy

i could open mic all night lad...

straight up,
check the mechanics of the mind
as im tackling the times with aptitude to rhyme
to baffle you & blind rapper dudes defined
as the wackest you can find
jus for practice & I'm trying to relax & doing fine
the baddest with a fat bag of bagdad to brew tonight
& damn my crew is tight cause i dont hang with stupid types
yo Im crashing through the mic with high magnitude to strike
any maggot who dispise with an antagonist disguise
theyll be catching a surprise when attacking my advice
is step back or you get sliced & smacked & uthanised
by my tactics & applied magic when i write
my narrative on life immaculate & right ontrack with it comprised
of real rap thats through the eyes of a captive.......to the vibe
with a practical devised actual reprise
to hack a fucking axe into the eyes of the masses of deprived
rappers whove arrived must be a fucking masochist inside
its fact that ill provide an embarrasing demise
to any faggot who decides to test the mavrick in his prime
can get splattered on the grav pit.....& battered into fine
fragments on a grind.. & thrown the fuck back into the line
as I & open up avenues supplying cash for moving rhymes
while hacking you with knives cause my stratigy is live
i aint a passenger i drive forward traveling the sky
morphing passeges to scribe so dramatic the devide
between your attitude and mine & my rhapsody combined
like an activist im dying to react to this decline
& vacuity of lyrical faculty & design
cats have apathy for rhyme bringing macabre in time
& if hip hop is dying, then im massivly inclined
to bring it back into the light.. & on track n moving right
to shine spectacular & bright .........................SIKE

I'ma toy? SWEET!! can I be the pink power ranger action figure? PLEASE!!! PWEETY PLEASE?!?

Dude your the most annoying idiot on this site including tha q.


Congrats......... :thumbup:

hey youngblood...i'ma bout to take my prizzzeee

You've got that right.

Keep the power rangers out of this.....

rofl DUNMENETS I was wondering when your lil herb ass would show up!!!

I'm sorry if I don't find there is a need in trying to be valued as an AWESOME member on a net site b. I just post to do what I want. The fuck do I care if people like the kid or not on rv b? I'ma fucking rock star in real life. That's good enough b.

SNAKEEEE LOL GET OFF ME MY MANS

LOL I love how easy it is to annoy you. But I don't blame you for being butthurt b. You can come pet the snake anytime b. Anytime. Shop is open 24/7 for you b. :love:

I dont believe your a rock star..........

I believe those funny looking family members of yours are rock stars.

I'm jus wondering how they make such good curry sauce coz being a rock star takes alot of time up ya know b.

brydon.

sp is like me.

we're both cool as fuck...and we both don't care if you think so or not...if you would have caught me at the right time..you'd probably hate me too.

spul is sheltered as fuck man...

and you need to collab with me...on some serious shit..like we meant to back in the day

Sorry i guess i should of asked your opinion of spul before decideing on my own opinion of him.......

His a big girl you know no need to comfort him. :thumbup:

you got a soundclick?

you misunderstood me.

I was saying..he is a good dude...but...he acts how he wants...if you had come in contact with him under different circumstances..you guys might have sleep overs and shit

lol aww man, I see you still haven't learned how to formulate a clever rebuttal.

and lol I said in real life. The fuck I care about what some nerdy internet chav thinks about me b? And please, curry jokes are soooo 2004. And even back then, they're weak. I'm supposed to be offended by what people of my nationality eat? rofl nice try b...

And you don't need to believe b, just know. I am a fucking rockstar b

SNAKEEE

as a matter of fact i do....but i was thinking more OM collabish...

you owe me negro....from way back in the u wan taco days

As long as you're the one who shelters me, I'll be ok b :love: Give me a hug! :hump:

as they say...when in rome...

yeah, fuck spul


fuck you spul....fuck you.

I get ya man my bad. :thumbup:

LOL exactly. I love how people like nos, Adam, 2v, and some other clowns think putting me down is going to effect me in anyway. rofl I'll still post what I want to post, when I wanna post it b. Adam used to love the kid's cock, then got beat the fuck over by it and is butthurt. 2v was all telling me his creepy fucking weird life stories, thinking refreshing a page was the fucking best new invention of the century, then I ban him from my sexy ass forum, and he too joins the crew. Baph, begs the kid thru PM to get the balling job I beasted on for a year, and I ignore him. And he just really wishes he could be the kid.

Everybody hates the kid b. Either because a. they wanna be the kid or b. I fucked their momma b.

SNAKEEEE LOL GET OFF ME MY MANS


*waits* how long....

When in Rome, Fuck SPuL?


Didn't I see your girl in rome the other day b? :evilgrin:

rofl


u wish motherfucker

Now only if I can convince Baph, 2v, and Adam to fly over to Rome :evilgrin:

havnt done anything like that in a while...

what sort of track do you want to write? maybe i can write something and use it in a song anyway..

Always works b LOL