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M&rk 12-11-08 12:15 PM

My contest track unfinished
 
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7139086
^^
leave some feed so i can fix it before i submit it.
..
the link is updated, the tracks finished

Adam 12-11-08 12:35 PM

I can't get into it, but I really hate that beat to begin with so I can't really criticize.

M&rk 12-11-08 12:58 PM

well, its the best of the three beats i think. i could spit the same lyrics on any of the beats, but i thought this was the best one.

Adam 12-11-08 02:28 PM

I dug the first beat the most I think.

La Cosa Nostra 12-11-08 07:27 PM

oh.. the worst of the 3 beats...

Umm.. i dunno man, not really digging it...

Doesent really sound like a winner......

Implicit 12-11-08 10:50 PM

Just to be completely honest, I dont think you're gonna win with that.

12-12-08 06:34 AM

its funny you say that big P

i happen to hate the things that i hate.

Ysdat 12-12-08 02:38 PM

rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.

M&rk 12-14-08 08:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Got Soul? ©
rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.

then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now

M&rk 12-14-08 08:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 2v
its funny you say that big P

i happen to hate the things that i hate.

you should never hate.

12-14-08 08:41 PM

i hate all the fucking time its in my blood you fucking loser fuck you.

M&rk 12-14-08 08:47 PM

well thats too bad

La Cosa Nostra 12-14-08 08:48 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Picture
then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now

Hope it doesent sound like your submission track in this thread...

M&rk 12-14-08 08:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Baphomet
Hope it doesent sound like your submission track in this thread...

if he ever battles me we'll all find out

Cola 12-14-08 09:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Got Soul? ©
rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.




rofl

that is hands down the most ironic post i've seen on R/V in a while

Ysdat 12-15-08 02:14 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Picture
then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now

Why would I play chess against a connect four player?

Zane 12-15-08 03:31 AM

i think the beat is dope actually, at least Triple_N made it sound dope back in the day, but overall the track itself isnt that hot...

M&rk 12-15-08 03:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Got Soul? ©
Why would I play chess against a connect four player?

so now its an actual excuse to duck a battle just by saying some gay shit like that? you are a huge fag, if your so good then shut me up and drop something that would take someone of your so called talent no time to do and kill me. talking shit an not backing it up is not a good enough excuse for me, sorry but thats about the biggest bitch move in the book.

M&rk 12-15-08 03:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Zane
i think the beat is dope actually, at least Triple_N made it sound dope back in the day, but overall the track itself isnt that hot...

and the weathers bad. how bout you say what about the weather thats bad so you actually say something with some actual content.

Ysdat 12-15-08 05:35 PM

Dont worry kid, Ill drop somthing when my hard drives back. Untill then stay slurping my cock :)

_Talksic_ 12-15-08 06:20 PM

wasnt really feeling it

Cola 12-15-08 08:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Got Soul? ©
Dont worry kid, Ill drop somthing when my hard drives back. Untill then stay slurping my cock :)




What a fucking lame ass wigger


Dont you got some more stars to tatoo all over yourself, you fucking Paris Hilton nut suck

Ysdat 12-15-08 08:35 PM

Lay off the nut sack!

Cola 12-15-08 08:39 PM

Drop a track



*copyrights that rhyme*

fuck....i'd give it to you, if you'd ever ACTUALLY drop

Ysdat 12-15-08 08:46 PM

lol, kid, you dont even rap.

Off the nut Sack!

Cola 12-15-08 08:48 PM

lol


everyone raps


I hip i hip to the hop and i dont stop


rapping was a fad for every kid after 8mile

it made everyone feel like they had a shot

you ever noticed how no 1 made it for the most part?

If anything, 8 mile was the reason WHY hip hop has become so diluted with shit rappers.

I really just wanted to see an audio battle go down, thats why i keep blasting you

DROP A TRACK PUSSY!

Ysdat 12-15-08 09:08 PM

I get a feeling your a bit simple. Im waiting for my hard drive, einstein.

Off the nut sack!!

Cola 12-15-08 09:30 PM

n i got a feeling you typed something you didn't want us to read


EDIT YOUR POSTS SOME MORE, SACK LOVER

Ysdat 12-15-08 10:07 PM

I made a typo.


Off the nutsack!!

Cola 12-15-08 11:52 PM

you just earned another star


you fake ass paris hilton

Ysdat 12-16-08 04:13 PM

Off these nuts sacks!!

M&rk 12-18-08 11:22 AM

you got a computer to be online daily, yet u still can't drop. and no ones on your nut sack cuz your a big PUSSY

Ysdat 12-19-08 01:41 AM

blah blah blah.


Hard drive broken.
recording zero.
you will get yours.

M&rk 12-19-08 02:49 PM

uppin... tracks finished

Ysdat 12-19-08 06:26 PM

what are you upping you fucking muppet? You get weirder every day kiddo.

La Cosa Nostra 12-19-08 06:29 PM

Big picture your wack....

Wait till my cd is finished I'm gonna up my audio battling record haha...........

La Cosa Nostra 12-19-08 06:31 PM

Whats one of your battles ... show me it..

M&rk 12-20-08 05:54 PM

ya'll too gay..

Cola 12-20-08 06:32 PM

get off their nut sacks....they record records down under. That means that they are somebodies online BP

FUCK MAN


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