CALI's book
 

rofl


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my favorite passage

She smiled kissing him hard. Next thing he knew she was on top of him. She rode him like a porn star bucking against him hard but softly in just the right places. He grabbed her thick ass and pulled her down pushing himself deep inside her and feeling her walls break down in gushing waterfalls around him.

Grabbing her thick thighs in his strong arms he turned her on her back with her legs up so he could get even deeper within her.Her wet tightness wrapped around him like a vicegrip squeezing him tightly.For a brief second he really did love her.Just for a second though.

God that's terrible writing.

lol how the hell did u find that section in that long ass thing

cuz he's a stalker and thats good writting.it's a urban fiction book.of course you wouldnt understand.

rofl, i don't think anybody could understand that garbage

He bit that from the sex scene in Desperado.

LMAO!

dude.

Grabbing her thick thighs in his strong arms he turned her on her back with her legs up so he could get even deeper within her.Her wet tightness wrapped around him like a vicegrip squeezing him tightly.For a brief second he really did love her.Just for a second though.

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Gripping her thighs in his arms he turned there bodies together, pushing her back down and pulling her legs towards him, forcing himself deeper inside her. This single motion set them into a primal state as she clawed at his arms as her body tensed, tightening around him, squeezing, almost begging for him to finish. In those last moments, he actually loved her. An undying want rose in him and then it was gone. All over.

As he looked down at her, she looked relieved because it only took CALI three minutes. Tsk Tsk. Thank God that was over. She demanded payment and slid her clothes on, swaying about due to the effects of the roofie he had slipped her. She didn't mind, she had his whole ten dollars.
:)

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best passage from cali's.

Her eyes rolled back in ecstasy as he put that work in. Into his stroke now he realized he didn't have a condom on but as her long legs wrapped around his back and she talked to him in Spanish he didn't care as he pushed into his full length and she screamed louder scratching his back with her manicured nails.

I wouldn't understand?

You're writing a novel and you can't even spell writing correctly. It's awful literature, urban fiction or not. An illiterate high school drop out could scribble up something better than that piece of shit.

Explain what I don't understand, unless you're trying to say that you're writing something terrible on purpose for simple minds to either try and comprehend or giggle about.

go into detail about how he hit it twice in a row

......lmao rofl.........lamo lol..

yeah do go into detail,2v's takin notes rofl
he savin up for a hooker

holllller @ me lk

lol talk.

im just that good. :) ha

for a few million i might hold your hand rofl

for nothing but your opinion I'll knock your front teeth out ...

awww did i strike a nerve u lonely loser rofl

funny thing is at 5'3" i'm prolly taller than u, n in heels forget about it

......smh......

ROFL that was the killer lol

i figured if he was going street. he should have that.

Her wet tightness wrapped around him like a vicegrip squeezing him tightly.


Writing wise, that is just so poor.